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MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One (Page 97)

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awsome part..
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really loved reading it..
hope maan's mom is fine and doesnt force maan to marry meera..
cont soon
 
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Superb part dear.
Continue soon...
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Hi...thanks 4 da pm n lovely update. Roop tera mastana scene was fab. Poor Maan...hope his mom is k. Update soon

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Thanku all for ur comments on the previous parts...!!
hope u like this too...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed



PART-13


At KM

Doctor is keeping a check on Savitri devi's health and Dev is standing near her bed. Meanwhile maan comes in and is worried about his mom's health. Maan takes dev out of her room and asks about what has happened that she fell ill.

Doctor comes out and tells maan that savitri devi is finr now and is stressed about something. She had a minor heart stroke because of that tension. Doctors strictly adviced them to take good care of her and told that stress could be really bad for her health.

Maan goes and meet his mom'..she had regained her conscious back''maan was really worried about his mom's health. He holded his mom's hand and had tears in his eyes.

Maan: mom ye kya hai aap apna bilkul bhi khayal nahi rakhti

Savitri: bete aap jaante hai meri parehsni ki waja kya hai

Maan: main kuch samjha nahi  aap kya kehna chahti hai?


Savitri: bete hamari zindagi ka kuch nahi pata'hum kal rahe ya na rahe '.bas ek iccha thi ki marne se pehle hum apni bahu ko dekh le

Maan: ye aap kaisi baatein kar rahi hai mom aapko kuch nahi hoga or aap samajti kyu nahi hai muje abhi shaadi nahi karni

Savitri: bas maan apki yahi baat sun sun kar hum thak chuke hai''aap ye kyu nahi samajte hamari bhi kuch ichayein hai'.hum bhi chahte hai ki hamare bete dulhe bane'..hum bhi saas banker apni bahu ke saath kuch waqt bitna chahte hai'..or hame apke baad dev ke baare mein bhi to sochna hai na

Savitri: maan hum jaante hai ki aap shaadi ke naam se bhi bhagte hai par ek baar mere kehne par uss ladki se mil lijiye'.phir jo apka faisla ho'hame puri umeed hai vo ladki apko zarur pasand ayegi. Maan hame bas yahi chinta khaye ja rahi hai. Kal agar hame kuch ho gaya to aapka khayal rakhne wala koi to hona chaiye na. dev to phir apni zindagi ke baare mein soch lete hai par aap to kabhi apne kaam ke alawa kuch sochte hi nahin

Dev is standing and listening to the convo taking place between maan and his mom. He wanted to tell the whole truth about meera to maan and his mom but he kept quiet because his mom's condition was not well.

Savitri: dev please aap hi kahiye na maan ko ki meri baat maan jaye

Dev was feeling helpless for him as well as for maan and he was left with no other option than to support his mom at that point of time.

Dev: haan bro maan jaiye na ek bar ladki dekhne mein kya harz hai

Maan was really confused on what all was happening. He had some feelings for geet inside him but he kept shut.

Maan: thik hai agar aap sab ki yahi icha hai to main tyar hu'.aap sab ki jo marzi ho

Maan leaves from her room'.dev followed him back to tell the whole truth''on the other hand savirti devi called up her friend to ask meera's mom that they wanted to meet her soon.

Dev in maan's room.

Dev: bro muje aapse kuch baat karni thi

Maan: abhi nahi dev please main kuch der akele rehna chahta hu

Dev: bro please ek baar sun to lijiye

Maan (angrily) tumne suna nai main akele rehana chahta hu


Dev: thi hai bro jaise apki marzi

Dev is helpless now. He wanted to tell maan the whole truth but maan was himself tensed on what all happened so dint bothered him.


Meanwhile Mrs. Sharma called up beeji and told her everything and fixed up the next day to have a meeting.

Savitri devi was really pleased to hear this. She immediately told maan and dev that they are going tomorrow to see the girl. Maan was getting frustrated and more than maan was dev.

At Geet's house

Beeji was really happy that the day had come when her all wishes were coming true. Geet and Meera were really in a state of shock because of the unexpected news.

Meera went inside her room and wanted to talk to dev about all this. She called up dev bit his cell was off. Geet came in running to meera's room to console her.

Geet: di aap thik to hai na?

Meera: geet ye kya ho gaya muje to samaj nai aa raha.

Geet: babaji pe vishwas rakhiye di sab thik hoga or waise bhi abhi to ladka dekhne aa raha hai shaadi pakki thoda na ho gayi hai

Meera: geet babaji sab thik kar denge na

Geet: muje babaji pe pura vishwas hai vo iss musebat se apko zaroor bahar nikalenge par sochna ye hai ki hum ab karenge kya

Geet: ek baat to pakki hai ki kal apko uss ladke se to milna hi padega par di jo bhi hai main hamesha apke saath hu or dekhan jaldi hi hum koi na koi solution bhi nikal hi lenge


Geet and meera share a sweet smile.

Geet: par di aap muje promise karo aap bilkul bhi tension nahi logi

Meera: haan meri behen promise. Acha ye to bata tera Shimla ka trip kaisa raha

Geet: di kya batau kitna mazza aya Shimla mein apko pata hai main or maan sir ghumne bhi gaye the'humne kafi maze kie di or sabse important baat to main batana hi bhul gayi waha par burf bhi thi'..maine kafi enjoy kia di

Meera: haan geet vo tumhare chehre ki khushi hi bata rahi hai par ye khushi sirf itni hai ya koi or baat bhi hai

Geet: nahi di or kya baat hogi. Par ek baat to hai maan sir ne mera kafi khayal rakha..hamari to kafi achi dosti bhi ho gayi hai

Meera suddenly realizes that geet doesnot know that the person who is coming to meet her tomorrow is none other than her maan sir

Meera: muje tumse kuch baat karni hai

Geet is lost in her thoughts. She is memorizing all the lovely time she and maan had spent together and is completely lost.


Meera keeps on speaking and she tells her the truth unknowingly that geet is not listening to her but she is lost somewhere

Meera: geet tune suna na maine kya bola

Geet doesnot respond back as she is lost is maan's thoughts

Meera: geet main tumse baat kar rahi hu..kaha par khoyi hui hai

Geet finally comes out of her dreamland and realizes meera was talking to her. To hide her feelings and that she dint listen to what all meera she pretended thet she had listened everything.

Geet: kahin bhi nahi di main to bas apki baat par hi soch rahi thi''or di maine sun liya apne jo bola aap bilkul bhi mat socho sab thik hoga'bas babaji par bharosa rakho

Geet: acha di ab main chalti hu kafi thak gayi hu'subah baat karte hai

Meera: main iss ladki se kya bol rahi thi or ye kya kehkar chali gayi'

 

Precap: geet opens the door and is shocked...Confused




Well how was the update friends'? hope u enjoyed it' please leave ur valuable comments and suggestions'.It really means a lot to me...Embarrassed

 

 








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mujhe issi baat ka dar tha k savitriji apne beemari k chakkar mein maan ko emotional blackmail karegi aur waisa hi hua
 
poor maan kuch kar nahi paya are maan se zyada problem mein toh dev hai mom ka saath dena pada aur upar se maan uski baat sunne ko taiyaar nahi hai ...
 
meera k case mein aisa nahi hua ...bechari bolti gayi bolti gayi magar humari geet tho maan k khayalo mein khoyi hui thi ...ab kya kare maan ka jaadu hi kuch aisa hai EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
hmm... so precap mein geet iss liye shocked hai kyunki usske ghar k bahar usske maan sir khade hai
 
ab kuch bhi ho geet ne maan ko meera k baare mein bataya tha right,... so maan ko samaj aa jaayega k meera kisi aur se pyar karti hai n hence kyunki savitri ji ko dubara heart attack na aa jaye issliye maan geet ko pasand karega
 
well i hope so
 
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ye lo sabse imp baat
 
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continue soon dear
 
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