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MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One (Page 28)

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet

any chance of update?


ya dear may be in a week...busy this weekend...! so may be monday ill try and update it...!!!!! well come to gmail wanna talk something imp...!

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by silkyarora

Originally posted by millie_maaneet

any chance of update?


ya dear may be in a week...busy this weekend...! so may be monday ill try and update it...!!!!! well come to gmail wanna talk something imp...!

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Sorry to keep u guys waiting for so long...! Was busy in preparation for my exams but here's part 2 for u...!





Part 2


Geet was in a shop and searching for an ear-ring for Meera, she tried many ear-rings but could not find any suitable one as her sis wanted a perfect one and a well matched with her dress. Suddenly maan saw geet nodding her head, he was judging her from a distance that what that girl is doing..!!

Though Maan was a shy guy but he could not stop himself from going towards geet. He thought to help her but as soon as he started approaching geet, her mom called her with a loud voice.

Maan stopped there and then and went to his mom giving a glance at Geet.

Savitri khurana: maan aap kaha chale gaye the hum kab se apko awaz laga rahe hai.

Maan: kuch nahi, bas ek important call karn atha muje, wahi karne gaya tha.

Savitri: maan aap bhi na khar waqt kaam hi kaam, waise mera shopping ho gyi hai, kya aap mere saath wapis chal rahe hai.

Maan: nahi ma aap ghar jaiye'maine bataya tha na office mein party hai aaj hame ek project mein kamyabi mili hai.

Savitri: thik hai phir main to ghar chalti hu.

Maan was driving the car and suddenly geet came in to her thoughts, the way she was changing from one ear-ring to another and nodding'and then self thought'.kya uss ladki ko ear-ring mil gya hoga'? Maan was busy thinking as he realized that red lights have already signaled'.and again self thought kya ho gya hai tuje maan singh khurana kya soch raha tha'..tere pass apne liye to tym nai hai or tu'ladki''and then rushes straightaway to the office.

Scenes changed:

Geet , meera and biji at her home.

Meera: geet tum to ekdum matching ear-rings leke aaye ho'..!

Geet: tumhari wajah se aaj to main gayi thi maine uss dukaan wale ke kam se kam 50 pairs nikal waye tab jake muje ye mile hai, agar abhi bhi maine ye na pasanad kie hote to uss dukaan wale ne to aaj mujhe achi tarah se sunaya hota.

Meera: thanku geet main abhi tyar hoke aati hu.

Geet: Beeji apko pata hai aaj mere office mein meri wajas Se Company ko ek naye project mein kamyabi mili'sabhi ne mere kaam ki tareef ki. Aaj to maan sir ne bhi muje bulaya tha par kisi kaam ki wajas se main unse mil nahi payi.

Beeji: bas issi tarah se meri bachchi tu kamyaab hoti reh meri bhi yahi iccha hai.

Geet: acha beeji aap subah bol rahi thi kuch baat batani hai apko'.kya baat hai bataiye na??

Beeji: haan vo meera ke liye ek rishta bataya tha Mrs. Sharma nein ussi baare mein baat karni thi..bade hi unce ghar ke log hai'pata nahi baat banegi bhi ya nahi.

Geet: beeji aap aisa kyu sochti hai..meera bhi to kisi se kam hai kya waise Sharma aunty nein kiska rishta bataya hai??

Beeji: vo'..

As beeji is about to say about maan singh khurana, suddenly door bell rings up.

Geet: main dekhti hu.

Geet opens the door and sees pinky as she has come to take her to the party.

Pinky: chalo geet.

Geet: nahi pinky maine pehle hi bola tha main ye parties mein nahi jaati hu.

Beeji suddenly comes to the door and sees pinky. Pinky tells Beeji that geet is solely responsible for this big project and she is not coming for this party.

Beeji: geet tune bataya kyu nahin ki aaj party hai..ye to bata dia ki project ki kamyabi mein tera haath the par ye nahi bataya ki party bhi hai..chal jake tyar ho ja.

Geet: par beeji mera bilkul mann nahi hai.

Beeji: geet tu meri baat nahi manegi main bol rahi hu na jaldi se tyar ho or ja party men, jab tu wapis aaegi tab hum baat kar lege, tu ja

Geet: thik hai beeji, par main jaldi aa jaugi'.!! Pinky tu 2 min ruk main abhi tyar hoke ayi.

Geet comes dressed up in a white saari..! She is looking like an angel. 


Pinky tells her this is not the dress code of the party as they have to wear a western outfit, but geet tells her that she is not comfortable with the western outfits so she will wear Indian dress only and both of them leaves.

At the party venue everyone is enjoying and maan comes up at the party hall. He is dressed in black outfits and is looking so so handsome.



Maan is still lost in that Geets' thoughtsDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming, all those scenes were still creeping up in his mind. His colleagues are talking to him but he is completely lost.

Maan (self thought): ye mujhe kya ho raha hai vo ladki yu mujhe bar bar yaad aa rahi hai.. aaj tak muje kabhi bhi aise nai laga par aaj samaj nai aa raha mere saath kya ho raha hai.

Suddenly he sees the same girl (Geet) dressed up in a white saari'..


and maan is completely speechless at that point of time.

Maan(self thought) ab mujhe har ladki mein ussi ki shakal kyu nazar aa rahi hai, ho kya gya hai muje and started moving closer Geet.

Precap: Will maan and geet meet finally'??????LOL



hope u like part2...!Embarrassed

 

 




Edited by minnie_tweetie - 01 September 2011 at 2:45am

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
bahut nainsafi hai
aise cliffhanger pe sab ko chodna
but i can understand tat ur xms r on d way

isliye maaf kiya

well waiting for them to meet




yar unko agle update mein milva dena
aisa na ho ki ye cliffhanger continue hota raheLOL
hope you continue soon
waise koi jaldi toh nahi hai



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Yaar tumhe toh script writer hone chahiye...vvv good work

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Yaar tumhe toh script writer hone chahiye...vvv good work

i too feel the same wayBig smile

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