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"Beauty And The Beast" [RT-MC]New Promo Pg 148 (Page 23)

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Posted: 12 July 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

nice part...

robi n ritesh in fight...as expected...

poor kuhu had to witness all that...Unhappy

good that ananya stopped him...otherwise aur bada hungama ho jata...

nandini calmed him...aww...that is so nice...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

Originally posted by pratsy

wow
fdab part jaaani
i dnt knw y m nt able 2 press like button :(

Originally posted by -dia-

awesome

Originally posted by prachimishra85

Nice update Khushi
Cont. soon
Thanks for the PM
 
 
 
Heart Prachi

Originally posted by megha01

heart touching ud diii

hmmm so  ritesh is here to make up the losses in the family.

the best part was robi n nandini in d room

nandini slowly moves towards him n puts hand on his hand n he looks towards her with tears in his eyes , she slowly wipes his tears n looks to him n he was so weak from inside , he needs sum1 n it was nandini in front of him , he immidiately hugged her tightly n nandini also dnt hesitate n puts her hands on his head n makes him feel relaxed, robi was all drunk , he was speaking his heart out ...

Robi: mujhe chod ke mat jana plz, i need u mouli 

this was d beautiful moment...very beautiful
 nd d song used is d best fr dis situation

all in all awesome ud
will b w8ing fr d next part


Originally posted by Shantell

Soo cool Cnt wait fr nxt part..:)

Originally posted by shruja

nice update!!
all scene written very well
liked robby ritesh fight scene n kuhu come there
n robby nandini scene
and the song used matching perfectly 

Originally posted by PrincessFlavia

Robi ko kabhi ladhne se fursat to milti hai nahi...Mauli kaun hai...aur ye Nandini pe itna chillata kyun hai??? Fir se jhagda karega...

Aur thode long updates diya kar yaar... itne se dil nahi bharta...

Originally posted by radt

Hum tum... ek kamre me ho!Dancing
Use bolo naak se gussa utare aur romantic ho... LOL
Great Part...Hug
I so love ur banner!
The pic where RT's holding his ears is so cute!Day Dreaming

Originally posted by sweetshera

Wow awesome ud
luvd  the RN moment in his room.
Wanna know whether this mouli left Robby or is she dead.
Sorry guys but hope she is dead n never cum in between our Robby n Nandu.
update soon.


Originally posted by nitali

woowww such a sweet update sweety..
lovd the last part of this ud wen roby says to nandini dat mughey chod kar mat jana, please i need u mouli..haiii so sweettt... and jab roby nandini ko pyaar se dekhta hai tab ..mai hoti to sharma he jati...

haiii very nice..but jab roby ko morning mai ye sab yaaad aayaga na nandini pe bhadak jayaga... ye kahi tufak k aane k phele wali shanti na ho...

Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

amazing part di...

loved it alot...

thnx fr the pm...


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Part 6

Next morning 

Nandini came to robi's room but couldn't find him thr n she ask servants abt it but no one knows it n then she calls him ...

Nandini: hello!
Robi: kya kaam hai!
Nandini: vo aap theek ho!
Robi: tumse matlab , kaam kya hai ye bolo
N: vo aaap dikhe nhi to kuhu puch rahi thi aapko , isliye ph kiya 
R: uska dhyan rakhna , m in office jaldi aa jaunga 
N: ok
n robi cuts the call
nandini sees the ph : sadu kahin ka 
n smiles

N: kuhu , wake up baby , school nhi jaana kya 
Kuhu: no 
N: no way , wake up fast 
kuhu starts shouting : robi ! robi!
n then looks at nandini n she was smiling 
N: vo nhi ayega tumhe har baar bachane 
kuhu gets upset : i dnt wanna go skool
N: chalo drama band karo n get ready
 n kuhu throws pillow on her n ran from the room n nandini was behind her 
N: ruko kuhu 
Kuhu: pakdo pakdo 

n the whole house gets ful with thr laughs n masti 
suddenly kuhu goes out n robi was coming inside n nandini collides with him n gets thr eye locked n kuhu laughs 
kuhu: tease her ... nhi pakad paayi 
N: acha abhi batati hu 
n again both starts running again 
R: ruko , kya ho raha hai ye sab 
Kuhu: mujhe skool nhi jaana 
R: kyu 
Kuhu: mera mann nhi hai
R: shut up kuhu , go get ready 
kuhu:  no 
Nandini: kuhu , i told u , ye sab nhi chalega , tumhara roz mann nhi hota 
kuhu goes to robi again with a poor face 
R: we'll go out in the eve but now get ready for skool or u'll get late 
kuhu: no no no ... n she ran into the house
nandini was gng behind her but robi stops her
R: i'll talk to her 
he walks n suddenly turns 
R: thnx for yesterday nandini 
Nandini was in shock that robi is talking to her normally : its ok 
R: I owe it to u 
Nandini smiles 
R: can i hv a cup of tea plz 
Nandini: yes 
n robi gives him a positive look n goes inside 

Nandini kep on looking at him ...

Saathiya Saathiya
Pagle se dil ne ye kya kiya
Chun liya, chun liya
tujhko deva maine chun liya
Dil toh uda uda re aasman me badalon ke sang
Ye tto machal machal ke ga raha hai sadali si dhun
Badmash dil tto thag hai bada
Badmash dil ye tujh se juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zidd pe ada

Badmash dil tto thag hai bada
Badmash dil ye tujh se juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zidd pe ada

Ooo..
Achhi lage dil ko mere har teri baat re
Saaya ban ke chalun tera, itna hai khwab re
Kaandhe pe sar rakh ke tere kat jaaye raat re
Beetenge din thaame tere haathon me haath re

Ye kya hua mujhe, mera ye dil phisal phisal gaya
Ye kya hua mujhe, mera ye jahaan badal badal gaya

Badmash dil tto thag hai bada
Badmash dil ye tujh se juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zidd pe ada

Badmash dil tto thag hai bada
Badmash dil ye tujh se juda
Badmash dil meri sune na zidd pe ada

Kuhu goes to skool , nandini goes with tea to robi in his room n knocks ...

R: come in !
N: tea 
R: thnx again 
nandini was leaving 
R: its nice 
N: smiles 
R: nandini , i need a favor from u 
N: wat 

Robi takes her to neelu maa's room , nandini looks at her , she was sleeping , nandini loks at robi

R: ye maa hai 
Robi walks towards neelu n sits beside her n puts his hand on her head 
R: she's not well , can u plz tk cre of her for few days , as massi maa going out for her family function 
Nandini goes towards neelu n sits n looks at robi n puts her hand on robi's n tears cumes out of robi's eyes n he immidiately came to his room leaving nandini behind ...

Nandini in the room sees sum old pics of robi , other family members n neelu wake up 

Neelu: tum kaun ho 
Nandini goes n hugs her : main nandini maa , taani di ki cousin 
Neelu recognize her as she has seen her when she was a kid 
Neelu: kaisi ho aur yahan kaise , di bhi aayi hai kya 
N: nhi maa bua jaldi ayengi , main aapse milne aayi hu 
neelu: acha , tu di ko bolna ki anu-taani ko bhi saath le ke aaye 
n she goes n sits again in her thoughts 
nandini looks at her for a while n then came out n sees robi was inside his room n it was locked ...

Inside the room 
robi was looking at family pic continusly n crying ...

Aankh Hain Bhari Bhari

Aankh Hain Bhari Bhari Aur Tum Muskurane Ki Baat Karte Ho
Aankh Hain Bhari Bhari Aur Tum Muskurane Ki Baat Karte Ho
Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum Dil Lagane Ki Baat Karthe Ho
Aankh Hain Bhari Bhari Aur Tum Muskurane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Mere Haalat Aisi Hai Ki Main Kuch Kar Nahin Sakta
Mere Haalat Aisi Hai Ki Main Kuch Kar Nahin Sakta
Tadapta Hai Yeh Dil Lekin Yeh Aahen Bhar Nahin Sakta
Zakhm Hai Hara Hara Aur Tum Chot Khaane Ki Baat Karte Ho
Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum Dil Lagane Ki Baat Karthe Ho
Aankh Hain Bhari Bhari Aur Tum Muskurane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Zamane Mein Bhala Kaise Mohabbat Log Karte Hai
Zamane Mein Bhala Kaise Mohabbat Log Karte Hai
Wafa Ke Naam Ki Ab To Shikayat Log Karte Hai
Aag Hai Buji Buji Aur Tum Lau Jalane Ki Baat Karte Ho
Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum Dil Lagane Ki Baat Karthe Ho
Aankh Hain Bhari Bhari Aur Tum Muskurane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Kabhi Jo Khwaab Dekha To Mili Parchiyaan Mujhko
Kabhi Jo Khwaab Dekha To Mili Parchiyaan Mujhko
Muhje Mehfil Ki Khwaaish Thi Mili Tanhaaiyan Mujhko
Har Taraf Dua Dua Aur Tum Aashiyaane Ki Baat Karthe Ho
Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum Dil Lagane Ki Baat Karthe Ho
Aankh Hain Bhari Bhari Aur Tum Muskurane Ki Baat Karte Ho


Nandini knocks the door .
R: come in n he wipes his tears   
N: r u crying  
 R: no , tum kyu aayi ho   
N: maa uth gyi hai vo jiju ko puch rahi hai   
R: tumne kya kaha   
N: kuch nhi robi dnt hv words now
N: maa theek ho jayengi jaldi dnt wrry
R: [looks at her]: thnx
nandini move her hand forward : friends
R: mujhe office jaana hai , kuhu ko le aana , n he leaves 
 N: saddu hai sachi, hey maa kaisa ladka banaya hai aapne
In the nite ...
kuhu n nandini was playing robi was not return at yet
N: kuhu tumhare paas purane pics hai kuhu: mere paas nhi hai robi ke room me hai  
N: ok 
Kuhu: lau kya 
 N: ahhh , before she says anything Kuhu ran n brings the album from robi's room n both starts looking the pics
kuhu was telling her abt pics:
ye maa baba
 


ye unki shaadi ki pic



maa kitti achi hai na , she was looking at her , as if it seems she misses her Cry
N: kuhu aage dikhao na nandini diverts her mind 

ye dekho baba aur robi 


ye maa , baba aur robi


ye main hu , dekho nandini 
[she gets excited]


Nandini looks at her n kisses her cheeks: awww my shweetu baby , love u n in reply kuhu hugs her
n then at last 


N: ye kaun hai kuhu kuhu was bsy with her playing
N: kuhu , ye kaun hai
she looks at the pic Kuhu: ye mouli chachi hai
n Nandini was like Broken Heart
n till then robi returns n she listens it n immidiately enters the room n snatch it from nandini's hand
R: tumse ache se baat kya kar li , tum to sar pe chad gyi 
he dnt allowed her to speak 
R: abhi , pack ur bags , jao yahan se abbhi, get put of the house  
N: but listen to me robi 
R: just shut up , get out 
kuhu got scared n she ran from thr 
N: f9 , m gng , mujhe koi shauk nhi hai tumhari personal life me interfare karne ka , kuhu laayi thi album
R: ohhh yes n kuhu laayi aur tum dekhne lagi , mana bhi kar sakti thi , but tumse baat karke koi fayda nhi get out .

Precap: Surprise PartyDancing



 


Edited by BhartiKhushi909 - 28 July 2011 at 12:29pm

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Posted: 12 July 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
coool ud diii

d best part was d pics
d songs u used were superb

n at d end came mauli's pic...mauli chachi

bechara robi...old memories n pains r back

uska reaction bhi sahi tha

w8ing fr nandini's reaction now

do continue soon di

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Posted: 12 July 2011 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
beautiful part
love it
well writtien
ty 4 pm

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loved it dear
Thanks for the pm
Plz update sooner next time

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Posted: 12 July 2011 at 4:38pm | IP Logged

yaar...abhi tu teekh tha..

achanak kya hua...

amazing part di..

waiitng for the surprise..

thnx for the pm..

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awesome part.
loved it.
 continue soon

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