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FF-M&G I LOVE U updated on page 49 (Page 22)

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Ok dat was such an emotional update and i liked the way maan ne geet ko samjhaya do update soon

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nice update.. poor sam n muskaan got killed... luved the way maan shouted at geet.. precap looks nice.. continue soon

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
nice update 
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Great part!

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
wowww luved ittt
u seriouslyy made me cryyy
awesome ff
read it all in 1 go 
luved ittt
n i think armaan is nt d culprit bt its yash
god knows y bt my brain is nt accepting tht armaan could go smthing like this
n yash disappearences n angry n surprising expression suggest tht he is d culprit
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Maan:nhi dadimaa mjh ko lagata he me ne kuch ziyada bol diya

Dadimaa:nhi maan ap ne bilkul sahi kaha

Maan:mein abhi ata hu

Maan was so upset  he thought geet would be angry from him.in geet room she was sitting remembering the day when sameera was taken away from her then muskan body was found

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geet:dadimaa ap ki  dawai

dadimaa:geet ap ne kuch khaya

geet:dadimaa mjh ko bhook nhi ha

dadimaa:agar ap aise karenge to rahul aur arjun k akiya ho ga.ap soche abhi arjun par kiya beet rhi ho gi

aarman:geet tmhre liye call ha

geet:hmm mein ati hu

person:hello

geet:hmm bolo kiya chiye tmhe

person:tm a/c no. 66578x me 2 crore rupees transfer kar do hum muskan ko dedenge aur han aarman ko phone do

geet:theek ha.

Now geet thought ye har bar aarman kyun ajata ha beech me nhi aarman aisa nhi kar akta lekin agar kiya to

Geet:kiya keh rha tha

Arman:kuch nhi

Geet:acha

Geet and arjun went to police station after transferring the money to the ac

Insepector:ji madam boliye

Geet:me ne paisa transfer kar diye hein ya ac no. kis ka ha pata lagao

Arjun:jaldi karo

Inspector sham tak pata chal jai ga

Arjun:theek ha chalo geet

They came out and saty in the car

Geet:sry arjun se sid crying

Arjun stopped the car

Arjun:tmhri ghalti nhi ha tm ne bhi to apni behen ko khoya ha

Geet:nhi sari meri ghalti ha.agar me arman
arjun:arman kah se agaya kahani me

Geet tells him the whole incident arjun was shocked

Arjun:mjhe nhi lagta aisa ho sakta ha

Geet;ye to baad me pta chalege

Suddenly arjun mobile rang

Arjun:hello

Person:----

Arjun:kiya

Person:----

Arjun:hm abhi ate hein

Geet:kiya hua

Arjun:holding his tears muskan ke body milgai

Arjun started crying and then he drove to police station

Inspector:hum ap ko bodyu nhi dekha sakte buhat damge ha

Arjun:kuch aur pta chala

Inspector:wo a/c kisi arman ka ha aur ye ring mili ha body ke pas se

Arjun:ye to wahi ring he

Geet was shocked

Geeet:ye ring to arman ki ha

Arjun sat theer crying they bought the body at home.aarman was present there arman came running

Geet:arman tmhri sachai hum ko pta chal gai ha

Aarman:kiya bol rhi ho

Geet:threw his ring on his face mjh ko kabhi apni shakal bhi mat dekhne ill make sure u go behind the bars

Arjun:he grabbed arman collar mjhe tmhri shakal bhi nhi dekhni hum ko pta chal gaya ha ye sab tm ne kiya ha

Aarman:dimagh kharab hogaya ha tmhre me aisa soch bhi nmhi sakta muiskan meri behen jaisi thi aur sameer ameri beti aur tm log ye soch rhe ho me ne geet se pyaar kiya ha aur agar geet ko mjh par bharosa nhi ha to me kuch nhi kar sakta lekin agar aj geet ne mjh ko chor diye me jab bhi kuch nhi bolo ge kyun ki me geet se buhat pyaar karte hu aur aik din geet tm ao ge meer pas wapis.

Geet:shut up

Aarman:kiya sabot ha tmhre pas

Geet:ye ring muskan ke body ke pas se mili ha

Dadimaa took rahul inside with yash now there were aarman arjun and geet

Aarman:ye chori ho gai thi

Geet:acha ye a/c kis ka ha 66578x

Aarman:mere to

Geet:kiddnapper ne ye ac kyun manga aur us din jis din sameera ka khoon hua tha to tmhre pas kiddnapper ka phone kyun aya tha aur jab us ne tmhe phone kiya to tm aisa baat kar rhe the jaisa us ko jante ho

Aarman:mjhe kiya pata ac ke bare me aur kiddnapper ka phone aya tha meer pas.geet kiya itna kamzor tha hamere pyaar.he said crying and he left

Geet:ill make sure ke me tum ko jail bhejwa du

Arjun:geet hum body ko shamshan le kar ja rhe hein hum he us ki family they

Geet sat there crying hum he us ki family the pyaar karne ke itni bari saza kyun mili mjhe kyunnn arjun took muskans body and geet went toward rahul room she hugged him and cry

Dadimaa:geet ap ko himat rakhni ho gi hamare liye rahul ke liye aur arjun wo bechara to kuch  bol bhi nhi rha ha

Geet:ji dadimaa aur aj se me office join kar rhi hu

Dadimaa:ji

Geet:dadimaa yash ki company ha aur arjun ab meer sath kam karge aur chahe to apni company join kar le

Dadimaa knew geet was keeping all her pain inside her

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maan saw geet in her own thoughts he knocked the door

maan:me ajao

geet:hmm

maan:geet I m sorry me ne buhat bol diye

Geet:nhi maan aj tm ne sahi kaha shayad me ghalat thi tum sahi keh rhe ho mjh ko khush rehne ho ga.thanx sameera mjh ko dekh kar ab khush ho gi I miss her tum ko pata ha maan us ko me ne pala tha bachpan se.she smiled

Maan:geet tm ko pata ha jab past dard dete ho na to sirf us past ke achi batein sochni chahiye

Geet:are maan ab to tm sahi ho kal mere sath yash ki party me chaloge waha par dev aur annie bhi arahe hein

Maan:sure why not

Geet:dinner kar liye

Maan:tm ne kiya

Geet:nhi

Maan:to me kaisa kari

Geet smiled chalo

At dinning table.rahul and arjun were whispering

Rahul:did has rhi ha kuch to hua ha

Arjun:pt anhi kiya hua ho ga

Rahul;dekho to maan kasia ghor rha ha

Arjun:kitne sweet ha na

Rahul:ziyada mat bolo geet aur maan aur maan ki behen annie kaisi ha

Arjun:chup

Geet was listening

Geet:kiya khusar phusar ho rhi ha

Dadimaa smiled

Geet;btao

Arjun:kkuuuccchhh nhi

Geet:dadimaa kal mein, maan,arjun aur rahul yash ki party me jaienge ap chalein ge

Dadimaa:nhi beta mjh ko gahr part kam ha

Geet;theek ha

Maan:kal se me office join kar lo

Geet:theek ha to me subha 09:00 am nikal jao ge aur arjun aur rahul tm meer sath chalo ge maan tm bhi

Rahul:didi me kyun itni jaldi subha nhi plzzz

Geet:me ne keh diya na

Seeing geet angry rahul agreed

They had there lunch and went to sleep

 

Precap:

Past:

Armaan:geet mjh ko baat karni ha plzz arjun ke sath mere ghar ao plzz meri jaan ko khatra ha plzz

Geet:acha hum ate hein

They reached arman home it was pitched black

Geet:aarman

Arjun light up the place and saw aarman hanging

 

Present:

Annie and arjun talking,meera and dev shocked and happy to see each other and maan and geet walking hand in hand and is maan again in danger?

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