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gr8 part
continue soon...

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update soonAngry
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Hey GuysHug. Sorry for updating late. Here is next part. Hope You Like it.

Part 29

Next day in the morning. Mahi was getting ready for school and Riddhima was in the kitchen making breakfast for her. Sid was in living area thinking how to talk to Riddhima. Then he thought something and went towards the kitchen. In kitchen Sid tried to talk to her.


Sid: Good Morning….baby…


Riddhima didn't reply. Sid came and stood infront of her but Riddhima wasn't looking at him.


Sid(made a puppy face): Ab bhi gussa ho….(he took her hands in his) baby I m sorry….I didn't mean to….(Riddhima looked at him but still looking angry) Now give me a smile….(Riddhima turned her face in opposite direction) where is my baby's cute smile (Sid tickled her and she started laughing)


Riddhima(laughing): Sid…stop it(and hugged him n he hugged her back)


Sid(broke the hug): I m sorry….


Riddhima: Its OK….


Sid(with mischevious grin): So where were we last night…


Riddhima looked down and blushed. Saying this he came close to her and Riddhima closed her eyes. They were about to kiss when….


Mahi: I m here….


Again they moved away from eachother and felt embarrassed.


Riddhima(feeling embarrassed): Beta… ap ready ho gayi….


Mahi: Ya  Mama…. And if you are not forgetting I m getting late for school…. So can I have breakfast…. (and smiled)


Riddhima: Beta breakfast ready hai ap bahar chalo main abhi lati hoon….


Mahi: Agar main bahar chali gayi then I m 100% sure ke main aj late hone wali hoon….


Sid and riddhima felt embarrassed and Sid moved out of kitchen. While having breakfast SR kept looking at each other. After having her breakfast Mahi noticed bothy Sid n Riddhima lost in each other's eyes.


Mahi: Ahem Ahem…(breaking SR eyelock)….Papa… can we leave now….


Sid: huh…Ya….


Mahi(in naughty mood): Papa you know my Science teacher…. (Sid looked at her puzzled) Oho Miss Sheela….. actually she wants to meet you….


Sid: But why?


Mahi: Well….(rolled her eyes)I think you know it much better.


Riddhima's face was again :O Sid looked at Riddhima with his eyes widened and he signaled her that he don't know any thing. (Song in the back ground: Sheela ki Jawani…lol ROFL)


Sid: no no….Riddhima I seriously don't know any thing… I swear….


Riddhima: SHUT UP!!!!


But Riddhima was not ready to listen any thing she was fuming and before he could clear any thing she moved towards her room and Sid followed her.


Sid: Ridd…Riddhima PLZ listen to me….


Riddhima(shouting): SID…DON'T YOU DARE FOLLOW ME….


And she shut the door on his face. Sid came back in living area with sad expression where Mahi was sitting on sofa. (remember Sid's expression in the scene when Riddhima broke her bat with same back ground music) Sid came and sat on sofa. Mahi covered her mouth with her hand to control her laughter. Sid caught her laughing at him.


Sid: Bohat maza aa raha hai na….


Mahi(came towards Sid and hugged him): Oh papa…. Main to sirf mazak kar rahi thi….


Sid: You know your Mom na…. phir ek haftey tak mujh se baat nahi kare gi….ab main use kaise manaoon ga.


Mahi: Papa….Ap ko kya zaroorat hai un ko manane ki….I mean ap hamesha mama ke pechey pechey ghoomtey ho….un ki har baat mantey ho….in other words ap un ke isharoon par nachtey ho….kabhi mama ko apne isharoon par nachane ki koshish ki… (Sid looked at her puzzled) Look Papa…jab bhi Mama naraz hoti hain ap un ko manatey ho…. Kabhi aisa hua hai ke ap naraz ho aur mama ap ko manayain…. Think Papa….


Sid: Wo din kabhi nahi aaye ga….is liye soch kar koi faida nahi….


Mahi: Kya Papa….ap apni biwi ko bhi nahi pata saktey….


Sid: Because it is impossible….


Mahi: Nothing is impossible….


Sid: But it is….


Mahi: Agar main impossible ko possible kar doon to…


Sid: Kaise?


Mahi: OK I have a plan….(then Mahi whispered something in his ear)


Sid: Do you think it will work?


Mahi: I m sure ke agar yeh sab karo gay to mama ap ko zaroor importance dain gi….


Sid: No…. I can't do this….agar tumhari mom ko pata chal gaya to wo to mujy maar hi daley gi…


Mahi: Papa kuch pane ke liye thora risk to lena hi parta hai na….


Sid: No…no…Never….


Mahi: OMG…. Papa ap mama se kitna dartey ho….


Sid(stammering): Its…its not like that….Siddhant Modi kisi se nahi darta…. Its just that ke main use preshaan nahi karna chahta….waise bhi use baat baat par rone ki aadat hai…. You know I can't handle tears….


Mahi: Ohh Really….


Sid: Ya….


Mahi: Papa…. mama is just behind you….


Sid's expression suddenely changed to scared one and he turned around but Riddhima wasn't there. Then he looked at Mahi who was laughing at his reaction.


Mahi(laughing): Come on Papa don't lie…. Atleast not to me…. Agar ap sach main mama se nahi dartey to ap wahi karo gay jo main keh rahi hoon….


Sid: OK done….I'll prove ke main kisi se nahi darta…


Mahi: Great then…


Sid: To kya karna ho ga mujy….


Mahi: Wo sab baad main….if you don't mind I m getting late now…. So shall we?


Sid(looked at his watch): OMG…. seriously late ho gaye lets go…



I don't know what I m writing. I am writing in a hurry so I just couldn't write it properly...sorry if you didn't like it. Actually I have an entrance exam on 16th July so I m quite busy these days but still I somehow managed to update. I tried my best but I m still not satisfied…You might be thinking ke how could a girl of 6 years be that clever but I have actually seen such cases. My couzn is just 7 years old and he is on Facebook in this age, God knows what he use to do there….lolLOL. If you want me to change my writing style than you can give me suggessions. Its my weak point that I can't describe feelings the way other writers do so sorry for that….  



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aamirkhanfan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
great update...mahi is so naughty...she's teasing Sid...
jacobharry10011 Goldie

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Really lovely update
Sid getting some gyaan from Mahi.Awesome
Mahi is seriously very naughty
RestlessWriter Goldie

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged


This wasn't boring.. This was cute and funny and interesting... and I agree aaj kal ke bachche tho.. tauba tabua.. Khair.. really appreciate it that you are taking time out from studying to update.. Don't worry, we understand... and all the best for your entrance exam Smile
P.S - I wonder what plan Mahi has come up with to get Riddhima to dance to Sid's tune LOL

Edited by neet06 - 13 July 2011 at 7:41am
fariya94 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 July 2011 at 8:05am | IP Logged
it wasnt boring... it was a funny update...nicely written...all the best for ur exam on 16...its really commendable that u took out time from ur busy studying schedule and thanxx for updating.

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