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SR-FF LOVE WINS (IMP NOTE Pg-117) (Page 118)

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Posted: 19 November 2011 at 8:34am | IP Logged
n ol ma condolence wd u n ur family! May her/hs soul rest n peace. . . .i knw its vry dificult 4 u bt u knw na its lyf n v hve to move on! Keep smilng BS Smile. . .

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
HelloHug. Disclaimer: This update is a complete non-sense...because I myself have no idea what I have writtenLOL. But PLZ do leave ur comments if u want me to update againTongue

Part 33:

They kept coming closer n closer. They were just a breath away from a sensuous passionate liplock when
TRING TRING!!!! (so what if Sid lost his mobile...landline to hai na Tongue)
Thankfully "TRING TRING" brought them back to their senses. Sid took a step back, away from Riddhima n Riddhima feeling all shy ran towards bathroom. Sid moved to attend the phone.

Sid: Hello...

Receptionist: Good afternoon Sir..

Sid: Good afternoon...

Receptionist: Sorry to disturb u Sir... bt there is a call for you...should I transfer...

Sid(to himself): yahan kis ka phone aa sakta hai... (to receptionist) Ya... PLZ...

Receptionist: OK...(she transfered the call)

Sid: Hello...who is this?

Mahi(almost shouting): WHAT IS THIS PAPA... MAIN KAL SE AAP KA PHONE TRY KAR RAHI HOON...AAP KA PHONE KAHAN HAI...

Sid: Saans to le lo...

Mahi: NAHI AAP BATAO MUJY...

Sid: Relax Mahi main batata hoon...(then he told her all that happened... ofcourse the edited versionWink)

Mahi(started laughing): aap dono Honeymoon par gaye ho ya adventurous trip par...(just then something strike her) magar pauhanch k to mujy phone kar sakte they na...kyu nae kiya...

Sid(how could he tell her): Wo...wo kuch zaroori kaam aa gaya tha...is liye bhool gaya...

Mahi(sarcastic tone): Ohhh...Aap shaid bhool rahe hain ke aap kisi conference pr nae honeymoon pr gaye hain...to kaisa zaroori kaam... aisa kya kar rahe they...(suspicious)

Sid(thinking of an excuse...of course can't tell her what he actually was doingWink): Wo...wo actually...aisa hua k...main...main...

Mahi: Bas... bas...samaj gayi... *shook her head* mujy pata tha k yeh sab hone wala hai... I guess I was expecting too much from u both...Its all my fault, main aap se expect bhi kaise kar saki hoon k aap mom se door raho gaye...(after a pause) aap dono ko to bas mauka chahiye... kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho...even apne hi ghar k kitchen main jane se pehle b knock karna parta hai hai k pata nae kab kya dekhne ko mil jaye... (Sid embarassed by Mahi's comment)

Sid(stammering): Nae nae... aisa koi baat nae hai... wo to main...

Mahi(sarcastically): Chill Papa... na main itni bewakoof hoon aur na aap itne Shareef...so no need to lie...not to me atleast...

Sid(tried to change the topic): Acha tumhain yahan ka number kaha se mila?

Mahi: Bas mil gaya...mere dil ne kaha k aap ko meri vishesh tipniyoon ki zaroorat hai...to maine kaise bhi kar k number dhoond nikala...wo kehte hain na kisi cheez ko dil se chaho to puri Kainat tumhain us se milane ki koshish main lag jati hai... (Kainat means universe not meLOL)

Sid(irritated): OK OK... Cut this crap n come to point...phone kyu kiya...

Mahi: How rude...maine itni mushkil se wahan ka number dhoonda...wo bhi sirf aap ki help karne k liye...instead of saying thank you to me...aap mujy attitude dikha rahe ho... I know aap ko mera phone karna kyu acha nae laga...apka romance session jo intrupt kar diya... (doing emotional attyachar)Aap to wahan jatey hi mujy bhool gaye...

Sid: Baby its not like that...you know na how much I love you...

Mahi: Bas aur kuch kehne ki zaroorat nae...(after a pause) upar wale ne sirf shakal hi gori di hai...pr dil to boht kala hai aap ka...LOL

Sid: OK...I m sorry...ab to maan jao...

Mahi: hmm...its OK...n don't ever talk to me like this...

Sid: OK...(after a pause) acha batao to sahi phone kyu kiya...

Mahi: actually main bore ho rahi thi...to socha kisi aur ko bore karti hoon...

Sid(confused): huh?

Mahi: Nothing leave it...

Sid: Acha...Bore kyu ho rahi thi...Vikky hai na wahan pr...

Mahi: I don't wanna talk about that idiot...

Sid(serious): Mahi!!! wo tumhara bhai hai...

Mahi: I don't like him...he use to pull my hair...irritates me 24x7...aur aaj...aj to wo mera lollypop bhi kha gaya ...aur aap us idiot ko mera bhai kehte ho...aap ko kya pata yaha mere sath kya kya attyachar ho rahe hain...

Sid:(laughed slightly): Mahi aap se chota hai na...jab aap ka apna chota bhai ho ga to aap us ko bhi aisa hi kaho gay...

Mahi(raised her eyebrows): Chota Bhai (stressed on this word)...mujy aap k irade kuch theek nae lag rahe...you better concentrate on Sheela than indulging urself in such Blushingactivities...

Sid(again changed the topic): aa...Acha..acha... batao ab aagay kya karna hai...I guess ye Sheela ka topic boht ho gaya...tumhari mom ko boht bura lag raha ho ga...main kehta hoon ye darama khatam karte hain...

Mahi: Hey bhagu!!!! meri saari mehnat pr pani dalo gay kya...aap ko mom pyaar k do shabad kya keh dain...ap to foran phisal jate ho... aisa karo gay to puri life phisalte raho gay... soch lo papa...(Trying to brainwash Sid) aisa mauka bar bar nae mile ga... ap mom ko prove kar do that you are a man...aur ghar main sirf aap ki chale gi...just imagine...

Sid began to imagine himself dressed like an emperor (Mugal-e-Azam types imagine Saleem) n Riddhima who was dressed as "Anarkali" feeding him grapes... (My Sid n Riddhima have nothing to do except imagining faltu stuffLOL)

Mahi(loudly): HELLO!!!!!

Sid(Mahi's voice brought him back to reality): huh...

Mahi: So...???

Sid(thought for a second): OK...we'll continue this drama...

Mahi: Great...(Anji called Mahi)...I m coming Masi...(now to Sid)...OK Papa have to go now...will call u later... Bye...

Sid: Bye...n Take care...love you...

Mahi: Love you too...Bye...

After disconnecting call he moved out of their cottage...n scene shifted to Riddhima who was hiding her self behind bathroom door n over heard all this...n was shockedShocked

Riddhima(talking to herself): To itne dino se dono baap beti mil kar mere sath game khel rahe they... how mean they are... isi liye Sid itne din se mujy ignore kar raha tha... un dono ne mere against plot kiya n how dumb I m k I fell for it... is ka badla to main le kar rahoon gi... Mr. Mean Modi...ab dekho tumhari ye Mrs Chudail Modi kya karti hai *evil smile*Evil Smile

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Yes...yes...I actually updatedTongue. I have no idea where this story is headingErmm. Jo dil main aaya likh dalaWink. I m writing after so long so PLZ ignore spelling mistakesLOL.n that Mugal-e-Azam wala part, just ignore it...I don't know what have gotten into me that I wrote it.LOL
Hope u all did have read my note... thanx a lot for showing ur concern towards me n my family. I know life is not in our hands, we can't change our fate... we have to accept it n move on...So from now we won't talk about it anymore n Yes I m continuing this ff bt don't expect regular updates, I don't know when I'll b able to update again as I m being too lazy these daysTongue.
DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS...its a dhamkiEvil Smile...LOL




Edited by sonia1000 - 21 November 2011 at 12:36am

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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:06am | IP Logged
omg!! res Shocked

*edited*

m 1st *dhinka chika* Dancing

ROFLaap dono ko to bas mauka chahiye... kahin bhi shuru ho jate ho...even apne hi ghar k kitchen main jane se pehle b knock karna parta hai hai k pata nae kab kya dekhne ko mil jaye.. ROFL

i luv u Mahi LOL

d mughal- e- azam part ROFL

ohhh so Chudail Modi is back!! EmbarrassedLOL


Edited by veena_rocks - 20 November 2011 at 11:28am
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Posted: 20 November 2011 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Mahi is super cute and Poor Sid kaha phas gaya ...LOL ek tarah maa toh doosri taraf beti ... LOL

Now the interesting part would be to see Riddhima taking revenge ... She will be in her chudail mood fullon... Sid teri ab khair nahi ROFL

As for the FF  take your time and update ... in case you are not sure how to take it forward take it to a logical end and then start a new one EmbarrassedWinkLOL
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sheela ki jawani...wah! go for rhiddima!

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