The track certainly sounded promising and alot promising...as the
The initial thought was:
" Dev will be harrassed as Maan" and " Maan will be enjoying with Geet far from eyes of everyone."
What works with "Geet" is a 15:5 minutes formula...
15 minutes of Maaneet scenes atleast and 5 minutes of others...and the episodes shud be planned like this while writing,directing and editing but the present scenario is just badly messed...and its side effects will be felt when all of a sudden fans will get saturated with present track and makers will be left wondering what exactly is going horribly wrong.
Hope with 5 days pattern back things will improve..
But still even if it is 5 days but if mentality of the makers does not change from Dev Maama to Maaneet no hope lies but yes Geet will still air and continue like just another TV soap but certainly with fading passion for Maaneet which is the USP and differentiaing factor of Geet which keeps it at the top.
"What is the point of the track if "Maan does not spend night in arms of Geet." far from eyes of family members who are busy torturing Dev considering he is Maan.
Wont that be loved by fans?
"Fans want Maaneet romance and if writers and makers feel it is not possible to show every day then they are wrong,contact me I will send you once scene in written format everyday for Maaneet and not like just another fan fiction but with a feel that it can be a part of the episode."
"What is desired is in detail Maaneet scenes with no disturbance,leave the disturbance to imagination of fans where a scene involving teji,mamaji or anyone else coming near Maaneet and passes by them without seeing them...thrill fun will come only then."
Now it is more of interference making Geet kick Maan out and in the process Maan is made look one coward and a joker who is afraid of Geet's family members...
Ideally right from day one when Maan comes to meet Geet in drivers disguise,makers shud have shown their scenes as far from eyes of other family members and leave their presence around to imagination of fans who wud be left worrying if anyone comes in between.
But unfortunately for fans,actors Drashti and Gurmeet and the producers and StarOne the present writers have taken the parallel tracks far more seriously than they should.
"The lack of vision for Maaneet was clearly felt when to add or stretch the scene others came in."
"A clear case of incapability to write scenes for Maaneet with passion and intensity in it."
All this when the track provided scope of loving,romancing secretly,but just to add parallel track or characters the writers are continously interrupting Maaneet scenes and in wrong impression that it is loved and is the best posssible option are promoting the strategy more which will in future for sure wud leave nothing left for series...
To start with:
"Maan Singh Khurana we know is dashing"
" kisi ke baap ko nahi darta"
Maan Singh Khurana which the present writers have shown is a man who is made understood by Dev,is afraid of Geet's family and is running around for no reason.
Common folks there is a different way of potraying and presenting "Maaneet"..
Maan singh Khurana can also be shown as smart enough to fool Geet's family members,romance with Geet and then get away giving his kamini cute smile,making Geet and fans feel he is just too smart and that is how he wwas potrayed before and was loved.
That is the MaanSingh Khurana which we know,attitude and smartness runs in his blood and that smartness was given to him by Swati Pande,Vincent,Priya Ramanathan and Mrunal.
If you consider the mentality of present writers they are simply concentrating more on Jugnu mama's now getting irritating comedy and other forced scenes and Maaneet scenes either interrupted,shot pathetically by the director with no clue whatso ever to use which angle for which particular line or conversation or scene and add to it the way it is written,designed and executed,all just sub standard giving one a feel that those who directed Arjun and Annie scenes are now handed over the job to try the same things on Maaneet.
There was certainly a better manner of showing a misunderstanding between Maan and Geet without the all unacceptable holi sequence..anyways...
Last month I had flooded the forum with articles to bring to notice that the present writers are heading Geet towards an even more bad phase and many are loosing interest and feel Geet is no more the same Geet which was still intact when Ved Raj took over from Swati and despite his AA crap Maaneet romance was kept intact and I was certainly right when many who fear they will be bashed if they agree to me and are now messaging me to let me know I was right.
Certainly AA crap was pathetic and when the new writers showed Geet forgiving Dev it was still acceptable but things went horribly wrong there after and the first signs of present writers all set to ruin what was built with so much effort came when after MC,just to show DEV innocent he was shown relating to Geet and add few more fictional circumstances which were shown for the bigger drama when Maan calls Geet begairat and Geet leaves Maan.
Geet is the only series I have watched till date and such is my love and connection with Drashti and Gurmeet that despite bashed,banned and literaaly abused with baseless personal comments,I still come back with a hope that maybe someone from creative team will read my points,relate to them and compare it to reactions of fans,TRP's and understand why the present track the track in the past shown in Geet did not work as per expectations and where they could possibly reach if they dont take corrective actions.
I right the harsh truth which was proved right everytime in the past when fans initially bashed me for writing and then later agreed to my points when they came out to be true,it happened with AA track and even before.
Initially I am made look negative instead of understanding I am higlighting valid points which will not work for series Geet at any stage and wud rather take it to disaster than gain.
I am currently writing episodes for Geet Season 2 on the toughest concept on Maan and Geet though a common concept but still which no fan can imagine but just incase to help the makers with a concept which can be used in future if there is no other track left and I am nearing 200 episodes of it with more emphasis on treatment rather than concept.
"In case ever out of blue makers feel an admirer too can help the makers with some concept and too justify his concept has also written episodes of it despite being a non professional writer."
Find it here: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1673922
How I will write it next in the same article:
I am busy with Geet season 2 episodes which I preferably want to see on drashti and Gurmeet so that they can work together for long and geet runs for a longer period of time.
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