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New MN FF- Simple But Complicated(update)pg38 (Page 5)

alishaL786 Senior Member

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Posted: 07 May 2011 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
wow! great concept!! Clap
please add me to your pm list! Smile
amazing job! Thumbs Up
love it to the core!
please update soon!

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anishalakhani78 Goldie

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged
amazing job!!Thumbs Up
I love the character sketch!!Heart
thanks for the pm!!LOL
update soon!!Smile
love you!! Heart

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--Loser-- IF-Achieverz

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 4:28am | IP Logged

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drmaha IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
gr8 ff...and spoil mayank...

looking fwd to read...Clap

update soon...

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_TheJoker- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
hey guysHug
yes i am updating and that too so early..lolz
but i had time so thought of updating...Embarrassed

ok want to clear a all are thinking that mayank is a bad guy but not he is just a care free matured person..not that kind of bad boyLOL

thanks for all your comments and appreciation Smile
means a lot to me

ok now scroll down for the next partEmbarrassed

Edited by vampire_girl - 09 May 2011 at 6:50am

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_TheJoker- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Canada,  Torrento

"mayank beta..come on utho ab"…a sweet voice said..a voice that lightenen evryone's life in sahrma mansion… "umm no mom..let me sleep"…he said hiding his face on the pillow… "oh god mayank..tum jante ho na apne dad ko…come on get up now...unhe tumhar ye late uthna bikul bhi pasand nahi..chalo uth jao ab"…she said and sat beside him… "mom meri koi adat batao na jo Hitler ko psand ho"…he said putting his head on her lap… "mayank..!! he's you dad..!"…shilpa shouted… "ya ya I know mom"…he said and finally got up… "mayank tum kab sudhroge?…apni jimedari ko kab samjhoge?"…she said with a disaapointment tone… "not again mom pls haan"… he said avoiding the topic…he was not in a mood to arugue on that not so ever ending topic and that too early in the morining which was by the way lunch time for any normal human being… "ok fine"… shilpa said and left with dissapointment thinking what will happen to mayank…such a careless nature…she prayed in her mind for her one and only son…oops..spoilt son

India, mumbai

"oh god di kya karrahi ho tum??"…..gunjan got up with a jerk ..irritation was clearly visible on her face… "arey kya hua maine kya kiya"…nupur also got up and said with a cute smile… "di..!! mujhe subah college bhi jana hai..aur tum mujhe raat ke dhai baje apne sapno ke rajkumar ka kissa suna rahi ho…uppar se puch bhi rahi ho ki kya kia?"…she said with amusemet… nupur hugged her from side… "tu nahi sunegi to aur kaun sunega"…she said so cutely that gunajan couldn't be angry anymore… "uff..!! di..itne sapne..tum bhi na..acha batao jo bhi kehna hai keh dalo chalo"…. She said sitting comfortably… "nupur also sat conforatbly cause she's going to take a lot time… "uo na..she was about to start with her list but suddenly stopped… "chal chod waise bhi mai to tujhe yea 20 bar already suna chuki hoon ..aaj mujhe bhi neend arahi ja"…she said and coverd herself with blanket and slept..leaving a shocked and confuse gunjan behind… "di! Tum pagal ho"…she said and angrily slept

Canada. Torrento

"mayank got ready and went downstairs only to find his father on the dining table…ofcourse to have his lunch..mayank silently came and sat…his father looked at him from the corner of his eyes and then to the clock… "to finally apke uthne ka time hogaya?"…he said with a taunt… "papa..uo..uo aaj to Sunday hai na…to isiliye mai..bas"… he tried to give some excuse… "bas kijiye mayank..!..ab app bache nahi hain…kab samjhenge app ki zindagi sirf mazak ya mauj masti nahi hai…apko apni jimedariyan smajhni hogi"…. He said in a strict tone..mayank's mom whao was watchinh all this in silence finally spoke… "dekhiye aaj jane dijiye..aina uo aisa nahi karega"… she tried to save her son… "bas kijiye app dono…dono hi bas bahane dena jante hain…app logo ko kab akal ayegi mujhe to samjh hi nahi ata…ab mujhe hi luch karna parega"..he said and left with anger..but maynk cared a damn..he took his breafast as lunch…while his mother were again trapped between her husband and son

India, mumbai

"papa… apki dawa le lijiye"…nupur said handing shashi bhushan his tablets.. "thanks beta"..he took the medicine…nupur was about to leave when he stopped him… "nupur humare paas baitho"… she sat down.. "jee papa"… she said with confussion..she some how guessed that something was wrong.. "nupur ..mujhe pata tum pehle bhi kai bar mana kar chuki ho..aur mujhe uski waja pata hai..par phir bhi… tumhare liye ek rishta aya hai"… he said with a hopefull eyes… nupur looked at him with shock… her eyes started to get teary… somehow she controlled them to come out.. "papa..ap jante ho mai"… she tried to say something but her wprds got stucked in her throat.. "haan beta mujhe pata hai…par phir bhi..ek baar age barne ki kosish to karo"… he said hoping that this time she would agree… "nahi papa..mujhe waqt chahiye..pls..aur behat hoga ki ap mujhse aisi koi umeed na rakhein…mai uo sab itni asani se nahi bhul sakti"… she said amd left but stopped at the door to see her mother intears.. " fikar mat karo..bas mujhe waqt do pls"…she said and hurriedly left…she didn't want to show her tears to her parents…they were already tensed regarding her..if she broke down infront of them they will get more tensed

Next day

Canada. Torrento

"mayank?!! What are you saying?"… a girl shouted… "come on ria ..don't shout..take it easy babay"… he said sitting on the couch… "mayank…tum..tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte ho"…she said as tears welled up in her eyes.. mayank instantly got up.. . "oh pls ria..! ab yea sab rona dhona mat shuru karo…I knew it,..koi Canadian ladki hoti na..itna drama nahi karti..tum Indian ho na isiliye..gosh!"..he said surprisingly… "mayank…tum jaisa ghatiya insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekha… tumse maine sache dil se pyar kiya..aur tumne ek pal me sab khatam kar diya.. mere sare sapne tod diyen"..she said as her voice started to shake her voice…. "ria pls…don't try to make me feel drama band karo aur jao ihan se pls"… he said and turned around as if he didn't care… "ja rahi hoon mayank…tum jaise ghatiya aur battamiz insaan ka saya bhi mujhe bardast nahi..par yaad rakhna aaj jahan mai khadi hoon na..ek din tum bhi isi jaga khade hoge aur tab tumhe pata chalega dill toot ta hai to kitna darad hota hai"…she said and left.. "ya ya…idiots ..emotional fool"

samrat came in… "phir se?"…he aksed him… "kya?"…he said while looking down in the file… "yea kya yaar..tu har roz yahi karta hai..har roz koi rote uye tere cabin se jata hai…tujhe zara si takleef nahi hoti?"…he said with amusement… "samrat pls yaar…tu yea lecture mujhe  roz deta hai…tu thakta nahi kya?"… he said with a laugh… "mayank yaar,,hum ek dusre ko tab see jante hain jab se hume chalna bhi nahi ata tha…and I know that you have heart of gold..then why…is tarah har roz ek ladki ka dil todna..tujhe zara sa bhi kuch ek ehsaas nahi hota kya?"… he said as he sat on the chair opposite mayank.. "ummm..nahi!"…he said and burst out with laugh…samrat gave him a disgusted look.. "yaar tujhe zara si bhi sharm nahi hai na"..he said as he put the file infront of him… "kya yaar sam…mai teri tarah nahi hoon ..aaj tak tune kisi ladki ko date kiya hai..hah! date to chod tune nazar uthake bhi nahi dekha".. he said as if by not doing all this samrat had done something really shamefull…samrat looked at him from his glasses… "tu na apni choch band rakh aur kaam kar..samjha..warna mai tera murder karne me zara sa bhi time nahi loonga"… "haan haan karto raha hoon na…attitute mat dekha"… and as usaual they worked in their cute little fights.

India.,  Mumbai

"gunjan!!!"…nupur shouted as if some strom has come…gunjan came runningly… "kya hua di..sab theek hai na?..!"..she said with a serious expression… "nahii!! Kuch bhi theek nahi hai"… nupur said adding up the tension of gunjan.. "di bolo na kya hua?"… she was now impatient… "tujhe pata hai…SRK ki nayi movie relies hone wali hai..aur..aur..mujhe uo dekhni hai"… gunjan took a deep breath… "di tumne kabhi apna ilaj karwane ka socha?"… gunjan said crossing her arms… "haan socha tha…phir decision change kar diya"… she said as she trew herself on the bed… gunjan also slept beside her… "to change kyun kiya..karwa lena tha na"…she said with a giggle.. "haan par mai tujhe akele chodke kaiise jati..chal saath challenge pagal khane"…she said and they both broke into laughter… as if the whole room..the whole house was laughing with them…life cant be more beautiful can it?… suddenly nupur stopped and got up with a jerk… "gunjan…hume orphanage jana tha na"… she said shocking ly… "arey haan di..mai to bhul hi gayi thi..tumna di..khud bhi bhul jati ho aur mujhe bhi confuse kar deti ho"…she complained… "arey haan meri maa samjh gayi mai…ab chal bhi"…she dragged her
Canada. Torrento

"what?!!!"…mayank shouted… "dad you are kidding right?"… he again asked … "mayank hume ek bath bar bar kehne ki adat nahi hai…humne jo keh diya so keh diya…aur yahi humara akhri faisla hai"… mayank got up unable to bear the shock… "dad I am not going to India..noways..!!"… he said sternly… "mayank humne apse apka faisla nahi pucha…humne apko humara faisla bataya hai"… he said still looking in the file.. "dad you cant do thi to me… mai..mai India kaise ja sakta hoon… no..!! dad pls think over it"… he almost pleaded…  "mayank..!!" was mayank's dada's tirn to shout.. "humne kaha na ki humare India wale office ko apki jarurat hai..aur apko uhan jana hoga..aur hum kuch bhi nahi sunna chahtein..apki fligh 2 din baad ki hai..tayiari kar lijiye"…he said and left a shocked mayank behind…

"mom..mai India ja skata..i life ihan hai..canda mein..i cant go"… he said hoping that his mother may help him in any way… "mayank is bar mai kuch nahi karsakti… behtar hoga tum apne papa ki baat man lo..iske ilawa tumhare paas aur koi raasta bhi nahi hai"… "par mom…but before he could say anything his mom also left the place… "shit!!"…he banged his foot on the floor


samrat was drinking water which came out due to shock… "kya???!!!"… mayank gave him a angry glare.. "sunai nahi deta kya?…mai India ja raha hoon"… he said in a dissapointment tone… "hey bhagwaan..!! finally apne mere kaam kharab kar diyen..yea kaisi ajeeb aur asaambhav bartayen sunne ko naseeb ho rahi hai mujhe"… mayank gave him a confuse look.. "what is barteayen?"… "arey I mean strange things"… and he broke into laughters… mayank threw the cusion to him… "tujhe mazak suj raha hai..ihan meri band baji uyi hai aur tu..kaminey..yahi teri dosti hai"… "arey ab mai kya kar sakta hoon… mai thodi tere saath India ja sakta hoon"… he said and got busy in eating his burger..little did he knew he himself put his life in danger..but it didn't took him time to realize what was cooking in mayank's mind..he instantly looked at him only to see a evil smile on his face… "mayank..aisa sochna bhi nahi smajha"…he said with a glare… "maine aisa kuch abhi tak socha nahi tha par ab tune idea de hi diya hai to bura nahi hai…ab tu bhi chalega mere saath India..and that's final"…. He decalred and got up to leave..samrat also got up.. "no..mayank..meri"..but before he could give any excuse… "airport pe milte hain buddy bbyyee"…he said and left with a mischevious smile…. "hey bhagwaan..kaunse paap kiyen the maine,,jo is kamine jaisa dot mere palle band diya"


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Edited by vampire_girl - 09 May 2011 at 6:49am

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.VanishingDream IF-Sizzlerz

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