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Tamanna - maaneet (ss) part 12 pg 62 pdated (Page 28)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
superb... lovely update...

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        THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT


Part 6

Lucky couldnot say anything after that. He understood that maan took a strong decision and he is not going to change whatever the situation may be. maan spent  almost whole night in searching geet. He completed almost 75% houses. but still he could not find her.Moreover he got hurt while climbing and jumping.His elbows and knees were bleeding. But still his urge to see that girl was strong that he ignored all the pain and hurt. Lucky was impatiently waiting outside for maan looking around in fear. Maan came out with huge disappointment. Lucky saw blood on maan's knees and elbows. He came running near maan...

lucky: bas...ab aur nahi...mein tumhe iss halath mein nahi deksaktha...agar papa ko patha chala woh aur bhi pareshan ho jayenge...chalo maan ghar chalthe hey...

maan became too tired and weak...that he was even unable to talk...

maan: nahi lucky..ab ithna mehnath kiya...bas bahuth kam ghar hi bacha hey ab

lucky: agar uss mein bhi woh ladki nehi hey tho

maan became worried...gathering whole energy he started to search for geet in next house...but lucky stopped him...maan snapped away lucky's hand and went ahead...lucky with a little high voice said...:maan rukh jao" which made the person sleeping outside to wake up...that person when he opened his eyes saw maan climbing radheshayam's house...he then screamed...chor..chor...

lucky not knowing what to do...started running..to divert people's attention from maan... when maan saw villagers running behind lucky...maan felt bad..and he tried to comedown...but due to weakness he lost his consciousness and fell through the window into geet's room..

radheshayam,tej also woke up with sudden shouting of villagers...they both went outside to know what happened...villagers said that they saw a thief...who tried to entered their house and ran away after that...

radheshyam: tej jao usse dundo...uske ithni himmat ..radhe shyam gi ghar mein gussne ki

tej took out his bike and went in search of the thief...Villagers were after lucky thinking that he is the thief...lucky ran with all his energy...finally he reached the fields ...from there he escaped...by then tej reached there and asked about the thief...one of the villagers said what actually happened...tej became furious as he failed to catch him...he too returned home along with other villagers...lucky sighed in relief and called maan...but maan's mobile was switched off...

geet woke up suddenly when she heard the noise...she got up and looked around...window was open...the entire room was dark...geet switched on the lights...her eyes widened in shock...when she saw a man lying on the floor...she got scared and tried to scream...but stopped instantly when she noticed bleeding from his elbows and knees...her hands started to shiver...she stood silent for few min not knowing what to do...his face was not clearly visible as he was on his chest lying on the ground...

geet: patah nahi yeh koun hey aur yaha kaise aaya hey...dikhne mein chor nahi lagtha...khoon bhi bahuth beh raha hey...kya karu...agar ghar walon ko batha diya tho...isko zinda nahi chodenge...tej bhaiyya..isko aise hi mardalega...samaj mein nahi aaraha hey..ab mein  kya karu...hey bhagwan aap hi mere madath karna...

geet for few moments closed her eyes and prayed to krishna...then she felt that it is not humane to leave a person like that in unconscious and bleeding state...geet slowly approached maan and turned him towards her side...as she saw maan 10 yrs ago that too from a distance she couldnot recognize him...but her heart skipped a beat when she saw him and touched him. She immediately removed her hand and looked otherside in embarrasment

geet: patha nahi..yeh iss gao ka hey ya nahi...khair jo bhi ho...iss chot ko kuch karna hoga

said these words geet slowly came down to get first-aid box...by then she saw tej entering the house with anger...geet quickly went to her room and switched off all the lights...

radheshyam: tej ..woh mila...

tej:  nahi dadaji...

radheshyam: tho yeh bathane keliye tu ghar aaya ...sharam nahi aatha tujhe...jao kisi bhi tarah unko doondo...yeh hamara izzat ka sawaal hey...agar unko chod diya tho kal ek aur aajayega...

tej left the house in anger...when geet saw tej leaving...she slowly came down, took the first-aid box and came back to her room...

geet closed the window...took a candle and approached maan...she brought pillows and kept under maan's head...she slowly cleaned all the blood...on knees and hands...she did antiseptic dressing to all wounds on hands,elbows and neck...then she took scissors and cut maan's pant at the knees...applied antiseptic and applied bandage...she then wiped maans face with a cold cloth...then she sat beside him not knowing what to do further to regain his consciouses...she then rushed to get her krishna idol...geet kept the idol near maan's head...and prayed...after few min geet too slept at a distance from maan sitting with her head on the chair...

next day morning...7am

maan slowly opened his eyes...he felt severe pain all over the body...it was a new place...he tried to recollect what actually happened...but all could he remember was villagers running after lucky...he got worried about lucky...he tried to take out the mobile from his pocket...then he saw bandages on his hand...and knees...he then looked around to get clear idea of the situation...he then saw the same girl whom he saw in the temple sleeping before him...maan rubbed his eyes in disbelief...he stood up and took few steps...but as he was weak...he fell down...with that noise geet woke up and looked at maan who was struggling to get up...she immediately ran towards him...maan looked at geet ...in a shock not knowing whether it was dream/real...he was speechless...he lost himself in her beauty...

                                                                                                to be continued...

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Edited by jwalamukhi - 21 May 2011 at 3:39pm

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
awesome part 
cant wait for next part
plz update soon
thansk for pm

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it
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pls cont soon
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:12pm | IP Logged
loved the update...
omg maan took so much pain to c geet...
bechara lucky...maan ke pyar ke liya bali ka bakra ban gaya...
uffo geet ko patha nahin yeh maan hain...hamesha aisa hi tragedy hona tha...
maan ka toh hosh udd gaya hain...
kaun kisko i love you keh raha...maan geet ko ya phir yash geet ko keh raha hain...
kya maaneet kabhi ek ho payengey

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preethia

loved the update...
omg maan took so much pain to c geet...
bechara lucky...maan ke pyar ke liya bali ka bakra ban gaya...
uffo geet ko patha nahin yeh maan hain...hamesha aisa hi tragedy hona tha...
maan ka toh hosh udd gaya hain...
kaun kisko i love you keh raha...maan geet ko ya phir yash geet ko keh raha hain...
kya maaneet kabhi ek ho payengey

lekin iss kahani mein yash nahi hey na?Confused

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jwalamukhi

Originally posted by preethia

loved the update...
omg maan took so much pain to c geet...
bechara lucky...maan ke pyar ke liya bali ka bakra ban gaya...
uffo geet ko patha nahin yeh maan hain...hamesha aisa hi tragedy hona tha...
maan ka toh hosh udd gaya hain...
kaun kisko i love you keh raha...maan geet ko ya phir yash geet ko keh raha hain...
kya maaneet kabhi ek ho payengey

lekin iss kahani mein yash nahi hey na?Confused
i am sorry forgot the name of the person with whom geet's marriage is fixed...got mixed up with names i guess

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