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Tamanna - maaneet (ss) part 12 pg 62 pdated (Page 17)

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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
chala bagundhi anna and thanks for the precap anna

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superb update...!
loved it...!
sorry for commenting so late...actually m busy in my exam preparation!!!!!!!!!!

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lovely update broHug
dun like this jay Ouch
waiting for the next partBig smile
do cont fastSmile

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Interesting story.
I cant believe radheshyam is willing to get geet married off for d sake of contention wif maan's dad.
Am kind upset wif savitri as well. How could she agree to match jay-geet, when she knoe jay doesnt have any good intention. He is really disgusting.
Waiting for maaneet's meet.

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Thanks for pm

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interesting storyline...superb update...loved it

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payal906 Newbie

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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Cant wait for them to meet!!

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jwalamukhi IF-Dazzler

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Part 4

maan: deekhiya hua...dubara iss ghar mein uss mangini ke baare mein kisi tarh ki baathein ya yaadein nahi hona chahiye...kyunki mein aapko iss halath mein nahi dekh saktha...

said these words maan left in anger...

maan in his jeep reahed his favorite spot...the lake side...he got down the jeep...took off his clothes and went to swim in the forget all his tensions...after few hrs of swimming maan cameout...changed his clothes and went to the temple on the hill near by...just to get some peace...on reaching the temple...he got delighted to see the amazing view of temple with the lake surrounding it...he sat there on the rock...enjoying the view...

geet was unaware of the fact that maan's engagement was broken...she was drowned in her own emotions that she locked herself in her room not allowing anyone...she cried untill her heart accepted the fact that maan is engaged to someone...just then rano knocked the door...radhika and mallika left the minute when they saw radheshyam and tej...they are too scared of them...wiping her tears geet opened the door...rano understood geet's situation...few hrs before she herself assured geet that they will never do anything against her wish...but now she came to convince geet for marraige...she tried to convince geet...but her words got struck in her thoat...rano looked into geet's eyes..she couldn't give any answer to thousands of questions which geet eyes were asking her...she simply patted geet's cheek and stood to leave with tears in eyes...geet hugged rano and cried...

rano: hume maaf kijiye beta...hum mazboor hey...hum kuch nahi karsakthe...tumhare bathkisamth hey ki tum iss ghar mein janam liya...mann kartha hey ki tumhe yaha se dhur bheju..achcha se pada lu...lekin hum kuch nahi karsalthe...

said these words rano broke down before geet...geet wiped rano's tears...

geet: maa..aap chintah math kariye...aap ke saare baath maanne keliye mein tayyar hu...

rano got hurt with geet words...she cried hugging geet...later she tried to lighten the mood

rano: geet...chalo tayyar ho jao...hum mandir chalenge aur thoda shopping bhi karenge...

geet: nahi maa...mujhe mann nahi kar raha hey...

rano: meri liye geet...

geet got ready white dress...

rano and geet came to mandir...mohinder also joined them...

To reach the temple which is located on a small hill they have to climb atleat 100 steps...looking at those steps mohinder got tired...

mohinder: geet beta...mein nahi aasaktha ithna upar...ek kaam karo tum jaao..hum dono yehi se hi pooja karenge...

geet nodded and started climbing the steps one by one...finally reached temple...

maan who was amazed with scenic beauty...took out his cell phone and went on clicking pictures...he was focussing his phone in different one angle his eyes stopped suddenly...he saw geet in his camera focus..his eyes widened...he became speechless...he could not take of his eyes from her who is  looking like a pari, descended from heaven...he zoomed his get better view...when he looked up to see her actually...she was not there...he looked around...but no sign of her...

maan: yeh sapna tho nahi...kya ladki...tha...pari jaisa...ab thak yahi tha...kaha gayi hogi...

said these words he started searching for that girl he saw in the get atleast one glimpse of her...finally he found her standing infront of krishna's idol...with closed eyes praying to lord...he was on cloud nine...he rushed to reach her...but by then his mobile rang...irriatinly he looked at was the call from his father...Cursing his fate he answered the call looking at her so that she will not be missed this time...

maan: haan papa ...boliye...

hariprakash: maan...tum kaha ho?

maan was looking at geet...and was not paying any attention to hariprakash...

hariprakash: maan...hum tumse kuch pooch rahe hey...

maan: haan papa...(still looking at geet)

hariprakash: maan..tumhe kya hua?

maan: kuch nahi papa...busy mein hu...bas thodi hi dher mein ghar aajaonga...

said these words he cut the call and looked at geet side...she was not there...he turned around...he saw geet leaving the temple...

maan: ek baar uska chehra dekhna hey bas...lekin kaise?

he then went near the temple bell and started hitting the bell hardly with a force...hiding behind the pillar...because of sudden noise geet turned back to see what actually happening...that's it maan was lost in her beauty...her eyes...he became speechless...he just kept looking at her without an eyeblink...

on the other hand geet coludnot see maan as he was behind the pillar...she didn't found anyone near the bell...she shook her head and left the temple once again praying to lord...she camedown...with her parents she left for home...

maan sat down...after loosing himself in geet's beauty...he drove to his home with a smile on his face...maan entered the house...smiling within himself...hari called him...but maan didn't gave any answer ...he went to his room smiling and fell over his bed...nainatara,hari and adi looked at each other confusedConfused...shocked with maan's weird behavior

                                                                                 to be continued...
next: maan planning to meet geetEmbarrassed

Edited by jwalamukhi - 16 May 2011 at 3:36am

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