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maaneet FF... Matterz of heartz... note on pg 93 (Page 5)

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sorry guyz for late update me was down with heat stroke... anyhow every1 sad with latest new so guy this 2 cheer u up so enjoy reading it...Embarrassed n do leave feedback...     
      Matterz of Heartz  (Part 2)

Part 2….

Sun rays were entering the room through the little gap in between the curtains which was the reason Maan woke up. Once he woke up the event of last night play inside his mind and he at once look at his bed. Sleeping beauty was still in dream land, she was breathing slowly and there was light smile on her lips. In day light she was looking more beautiful and once again strange pulling force pulled Maan towards her and he couldn't stop his feet walking towards her. When he reached near her he kept looking at her for a long time without blinking.

But his staring session was over as soon as there was gentle knock on the door. "Come in" he permitted in low voice.

Mary entered the room and asked "what do you like for breakfast young sir?"

"Pancakes with strawberry syrup and coffee." Maan replied with little irritation in his voice.

"That's good! And what should I get for Ma'am, sir?" she asked with sweet smile.

"Wait for her to wake up!" Maan replied with little more irritation in his voice.

"Your breakfast will be ready in few minuets sir" Informed Mary with wide smile.

"Good!" said Maan picking up his towel, then he left for bath and Mary left for kitchen leaving sleeping beauty behind in the bed.

Geet travel from unconscious state to conscious state and as soon as she reached her destination her senses become more aware of her surrounding. She heard water falling from shower near by, she can also hear water hitting shore and she can also hear wind chimes adding sweetness in atmosphere. Her nose can pick scent of something very delicious cooking in kitchen and her tummy reacted to scent at once and her mouth filled with water. Her head was aching really badly and she guessed that she drink a lot last night she pushed the memories of yesterday away and turn over and found herself lying on something very soft. She opened her eyes slowly, very slowly and looked around. She was lying on a bed and her body was cover with white comforter with tiny black flowers.

She looked around and saw beautiful room where everything was organized, she thought that she was sleeping in display room of some furniture shop.

"She was sleeping in someone's room" thought took the life out of her body. Without thinking she sits up with jerk and her head start spinning badly. She holds her head in her hand to stop it from spinning but it didn't help much. She looked at her body and little peace that was left inside her body flew away. She was wearing men kurta all the possible horrible thought came running into her mind. Tears start building up in her eyes and then she heard the door opening and closing.

Maan walk out of bathroom after taking shower and saw that sleeping beauty had finally woke up and once again he was hit by her beauty. But this time effect was different and an untamed monster woke up inside his chest and start roaring. Unfamiliar and unnamed desire took over his entire existence.

When Geet look at the man who step out of bathroom for some time all the horrible thoughts vanish from her mind. He was one of the most handsome men she had ever seen and she was sure he was giving tough time to even Greek gods. He was standing there with just covered in towel and water drops were shinning on his bare broad chest. Few water drops are dripping from his hairs. Geet look into his magnetic dark brown eyes and find it difficult to look away from them. They kept look at each other and their staring competition was broke by the noise of something falling in kitchen.

All the terrible thoughts make their way back to Geet's mind. Without thinking she jumped out of bed. She didn't realize that her head was spinning like top. As soon as she put her feet on ground she lost her balance and she was heading towards the floor when pair of hands held her.

She looked at her rescuer and found the handsome stranger holding her and for moment she forgot everything.

As soon as her senses make way back to her head she pushed the almost naked handsome stranger away.

"How dare you touch me?" Geet yelled at him with tears stocking in her eyes.

He didn't say anything in reply just stood there with blank expression.

Geet waited for him to deny or accept but even after many minuets had passed he didn't bother to open his mouth.

When Geet's bucket of patience start over flowing and anger took over her without thinking she start screaming and hitting him on chest.

Maan was looking at angry little sleeping beauty who was at the moment screaming and punching everywhere on his chest yet he found her beautiful. Maan thought that sleeping beauty is combination of ice and fire. "She don't trust him" this thought hurt him a lot and monster in his chest roar with rage.

At that moment Maan hold her both hands in his own hand. She look at him tears fell from her eyes tearing his heart and monster in chest moan in pain.

She stopped at once and her anger is taken over by fear. Silent tears were rolling out of her eyes and her beautiful thin lips were trebling slightly. Maan let go of her hand with jerk and start walking towards her.

Geet saw strange desires filling up in almost naked handsome stranger eyes, he start walking towards her. She start walking backwards and he keep on reducing distance she created by stepping back. She never knew when her back hit the wall as she was so lost in stranger big beautiful drowning eyes. As her back hit the wall she become still, the almost naked handsome stranger keep on walking and stop when there was not even space of air to pass in between them. There bodies were touching; she could feel his bare chest under her kurta. Geet felt like she will be burn by the heat of his body but at the moment she was liking his touch. He moved his face towards her and without thinking she closed her eyes but waited for her lips to be touched by his. She could feel his cool breath on her lips and then on her face.

Maan so much wanted to kiss the trebling lips of sleeping beauty but some how control himself.

Geet felt his lips near her ears followed by his cool breath. Geet heart stops beating and her breath stop somewhere in her wind pipe.

She waited for his next action she waited for his touch but she only heard his slow sexy whisper "Lucky for you! I don't have such a bad taste!"

Geet opened her eyes at once and look into the deep dark brown eyes of strange but she saw something else in his eyes it was not what he was saying it was completely different.

They kept on looking into each other for long time and then Maan break staring competition and walk out of room leaving sleeping beauty behind.

As soon as the almost naked handsome stranger walk out of the room Geet head once again start spinning which was on pause mode for few minuets!

"What does he mean I am not his taste?" thought Geet but her thought shifted towards other "why did she want him to kiss her?", "why do she want to feel him", "why do she want to feel his touch?" each question add little more headache to her head. The thing she hates most about this situation is that she has no answer.

But the thing that irritates her most was "what does he mean I am not his taste?" tears which had stopped pouring out of her eyes start flowing again.

Her head was spinning already and her life was already messed up and he tangled more her messed up life just with his few second presence.

Geet hit the floor with light thud and she wrapped her arms around keens and wish she could wrap her scattered life in her arms like her keens but she know she couldn't do that.

Tears spill out of her eyes at her helpless state.
to b continue...Smile

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Nice part...

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Amazing Update
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thanks for the update

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lovely update

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brilliant work
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Great Update Soma. Clap

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