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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Smile hi guys!!Hw r u all??I thought that I would start a new FF for maaneet...I had dis idea before but Was busy Wink I just wanted to use some of the pts of the original story lyn nd create a FF wid 6-8 pts hope u lyk it Big smile CONCEPT:a beautiful luv story of a guy who hates gals nd gal who hates guys..they both hav dark pasts but fall for each other... Embarrassed

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nice concept to start wid
so wen'll you post the first part?
 
 
 
 
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Part 1:

Maan Singh khurana was fuming wid anger.he was yelling"I hate u!!I hate all the gals.u dont even deserve to b my mom!"aditi was sobbing"but beta u loved sameera""no the only gal I wil always lov will be dadi.u killed my dad.u left me,dev,Vicky nd Annie just to b wid him dat mr.chopra!""maan u shud nt talk to mom lyk dat""dadi pls,security don't even dare to let her inside"he shouted nd went into his room.dadi was thunderstruck.she used to take care of him frm childhood bt his anger never changed.

.At Hoshaiyarpur,nupur was shouting at her daugter geet"u wer d 1 who chose economics nw u want to study eng literature!""ma chill!it's my lyf nt urs.nd u also want me to get married at the end if dis week!I'm just 21"her ma didn't seem to listen.days passed the handa family was joyous celebrating d weddin of geet.evry1 was happy except geet not dat she didn't lyk dev bt worried abt her career.she had a chat wid dev d prev day nd he assured to help her in her career.so she trusted him.but she didn't think Wat was his character?finally d marriage was over.everything was Gud bt aftr 3 days geet felt dizzy she had symptoms of pregnancy she was so happy nd went on shoutin" dev ji, wer r u?" but dev was no where.der was a letter written fr her,,,



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Guys dat was d end of d first pt..PRECAP:dev ditches geet!guys I hope u lov d part I wil b sure to update ASAP..i'l update the nxt one in two days tym..pls leav ur comments.PS:der s a prob wid my computer.I wil align d txt.(dis s my first tym so bear wid me!) Cry

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nice pls add me to ur pm list:)
nicely written:)
pls update as soon as possible:)

ankita:)

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hello
plz pm me

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First of thanx 4 ur comments,I'm new,I kno d 1st part was short bt I jst saw a preview I'l really update the nxt 1 longer,,,SmileI'm enjoyin my hols so I'l uodate u guys faster...I'm updating the 2nd part nw...

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pls continue soon and add me to ur pm list. thx

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