New FF War and Pyaar

ArhiSarunholic Senior Member

Joined: 15 February 2009
Posts: 306

Posted: 04 May 2011 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
Hello everybody you all know me Henna i thought to write an FF too i miss my roka badly CryCry
hope u all like my story and comment i am not good writer but try my best, character will be intorduced as story go on
Setting: Robbie is  rich spoilt brat and gets what ever he desires for, he has no respect for anyone where kasturi comes from middle class family she understand family value she is in desperate need of money for her darji operation when she goes to give job interview at sabarwal industry devika likes her lot she enquire about kasturi family and call her to the office next day and strike a deal with her that she will give her how much money she want and in return kasturi has to marry robbie basically it contract marriage and in yr kasturi has to reform him, kasturi agree as she need money despratly for her darji operation, devika brings robbie rishta for kasturi the family is happy and agree marriage prepration are on where kasturi is unhappy and over there devika tell robbie who is angry. stay tuned for more by reading my ff this was just basic setting so you can get story in your mind Big smile
Part 1
Robbie: mom apne mere shaadi fix karde hai mujse puche bina woh bi aik middle class larke se are you out of your mind yuck eww kabhi bi nahi Dead
Devika: son jo meine kiya soch samajh ki kiya hai yeh shaadi hoge simple as that
Robbie: kabhi bi nahi mein yeh hon nahi doga i am going and breaking this proposal right now
devika: theek hain soch lo agar tumne yeh shaadi nahi ki to yeh jo aish aram ki zindagi jeer re hon nahi mile ge aik din streets mein raho ge samaj ayge
robbie: aap mujhe blackmail nahi kar sakte mom Angry
devika: blackmail samjo yah damki tumhare marze aab excuse me mujhe nandani, ranauk se mil kar shaadi ki tyare karne hain
robbie: AngryAngry shit mom serious hain dude yeh shaadi karne pare gi magar kasturi chawla tumhe nahi pata tumne kya panga liye hain robbie sabarwal ki patne bana chaati hoon aab maza ayga Evil Smile
ok here is my part it short i update tomorow tell me how you find it plz comment on my story Big smile

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Gunjan. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 January 2010
Posts: 4941

Posted: 04 May 2011 at 11:16pm | IP Logged

hey henna so u've finally started off wid u'r ff..gud goin..

btw d concept's really niceClap..it'll be fun to read how robbie tries his level best to make kasturi's life hell n how she tries tackling d situations...
but devika wanting to get robbie married to kasturi here is soo unbelievableConfused...but it's nice...atleast she won't becum a kabab mein haddi after robbie n kasturi fall for each otherEmbarrassedd 1st part is awesome..looking forward to d next...update soonBig smile

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Posts: 16913

Posted: 05 May 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
reserve LOL i knw i put that on everyones ff but i will surley unreserve give me some tym to finish work off

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Iloveroka IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 September 2008
Posts: 2558

Posted: 05 May 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
PartyYou started an FF tooDancing
WOW amazing story line...
WAhhh..Roka ki shaadi!!!
And DEVIKA here is playing a positive roll!!!
Amazing yaar...chalo...zyada intense and romantic scenes honge..oye balle balle!!!!!!
OMG...Robbie in full form...AHHH i can imagine him..
He is looking sooo hawwttt!!!!
Welll AWESOME FF...and Please update the next part jaldi..
Mughe wait mat karana!!!!

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Angelmrjn Groupbie

Joined: 25 November 2010
Posts: 98

Posted: 06 May 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Hi henna...am marjaan, a craziest fan of RoKa.while chekng kasturi forum i saw ur ff nd just lykd it.i luk 4wad 2 read ur ff coz i realy mis my roka.hereaftr pm to me too dear...post next part soon...

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-KaranPatel- Groupbie

Joined: 10 May 2011
Posts: 139

Posted: 14 May 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Hello Henna...wow...
Waiting for next part...
Update soon!!!!Wanting to knw what is gonna happen in the story

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hazra66 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 February 2010
Posts: 3014

Posted: 06 July 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged
nice ff
add me in ur pm list...
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