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-Ehtesaab- SS maaneet thread 2 (Page 147)

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Broken Heart.. god .. its soo painful... can actually feel an aching lump in my throat. 

to know without a doubt that  someone who you love soo completely does not return the feeling , not now atleast.. cuz they love someone else.. or just prefer playing games with you.Broken Heart feel for bothUnhappy.. but Maans pain just killsCry... the precap sounds ominous.definitely not looking forward to  it.Confused

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Thank you for another wonderful update.
The first time they made love it was Maan taking all of Geet's pain.
And now its Geet absorbing his pain.
Their kismat pain connection is beautiful.
Strange are the ways fate brings people together,
Maan caressing her stomach was the best part.
Finally Maan faced the truth.
Loved the way Geet opened up everything in front of him.
She must be feeling so light now since
this feeling of keeping Maan in dark was lingering in her for quiet sometime.
Maans emotions and thoughts through out Geet's talk
were described beautifully.
Precap sounds a bit scary
Continue soon.

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Fab part...!!!
This time Geet giving in to Maan's pain...
I sooo wish they come out of their pain soon...
Good that Geet cleared everything abt her past with Maan even if he didnt want to..
It was necessary for Geet to come out of her past...
Falling more in love with the new face of Maaneet...
Just waiting for some happy atleast contented moments for them...
Now who is broken beyond recovery???
Kya Muskan they are so sweet and adorable...
Aisa mat karo inke saath...
Please update soon...
As always waiting for the next part eagerly...
Love
Sakshi

PS: Sorry for the days being in absent mode, but I was not away from ur FF for much longer than 3 days... Exams and stuff keeping me busy...
Will comment more regularly from next week once I am done with my exams...

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Vaidhumom Goldie
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskanp

Originally posted by abisamratgunjan

the love is ossum
just wann to see hw he takes the truth when he sees it...
Originally posted by princess_aakshu

it's awesome 
loved it muskan 
Originally posted by 286pearl

nice update
Originally posted by Asha2010

nice update
Originally posted by mrk_1

wow it was an awsome one yaar...lovd it ..continue soon 
Originally posted by AmeenaForEva

Really amazin update
Cnt wait fr more
Update soon
Originally posted by doosheeka

awesome as usual...
Originally posted by seemamary

Loved the update, continue soon.
Originally posted by shaaranya

ooohhh Muskan sooo nice!!!
Originally posted by Gurlygirl

Superb update!! Cont soon...
Originally posted by PaintedSky

I just love Maaneet... :) wonderful story
Originally posted by wajiha-1

excellent
do continue soon
Originally posted by gunjar

loved it ...awesome!!! Maan's outburst was beautifully narrated ...Waiting for ur next update...
Originally posted by s-o-m-m-i-e

wow..wonderful update
Originally posted by MeetPremeer

loved it dear
Originally posted by janu_2006

hey
gr8 part,,
cont.sooon
Originally posted by Shalve

awesome...loved it...
Originally posted by nihatri

awesome
Originally posted by Vaidhumom

Ehtesaab is a Depressing FF but still liking it.Maan and Geet going thro different depressions in their own life. Wish they get married and lead a happy life...before that, Geet must tell the truth to Maan. I guess Maan is shocked knowing Geet's truth (Precap)Please update Ehtesaab regularly Embarrassed
yah sweety it is a little depressingCry
thanxs for still liking it
Originally posted by zaara2212

thanks for the update Muski...What geet is doing is not right, in her quest of pain she is only giving pain to Maan who loves her
true dear she is hurting maan...in her pain!!
Originally posted by sweet scorpio

awesome!
geet herself have no idea what exactly she wants!...poor maan!...continue soon!
Originally posted by kareena32

NICE UPDATE feel so bad for maan poor him
Originally posted by Nav2010

awesome very very nice poor man did not know about geet and man relation.
i agree mera bechara maanCryCryCry
Originally posted by basicquestion1

Can't wait for the part whn maan learns the truth.
Update soon plzzz
Originally posted by MeetPremeer

nice one muski dear..plz update soon
Originally posted by mansi95

lovely updateClapClapdo cont fast...Embarrassed
update on its way dear
Originally posted by kawaii_geet

awesum part muskan...
both r in pain...
maan...i dun even have words for him ryt now...his feelings...his pain...
am still in tears!!!!!
geet...shez trying her best to make up with dev...sharing her happiness...but tht jerk...
can't do n e thing ut hurt her in sun way or the other!!!!!waiting 4 next...plz update soonEmbarrassed
Originally posted by blueopal

hey  nice  update  dear...
geet  is  really  fool ... still   believe   in  egoist  devAngry...
precap  is  interesting...looking  fwd...

Originally posted by JayaR

when that Dev had an affair she had to tolerate and forgive him...but when she is pregnant...he cant tolerate and physically abuses her??? kyun now she is not his wife phir kis hakk se yeh sab kar raha hai??Damn these men are so double standards...
Originally posted by --ANGEL--

loved it...dev still is the same jerk...i hope maneet sort out their problems...update soon
yah that dev is real jerk!!!AngryAngryMCP
Originally posted by jasraj123

awesome update. good now dev chapter is over forever. hayee geet is concerned about maan and the hug is sooo passionate. ur writing is tooo good muskan. me fida on it...thanks for pm and pls continue. sure it is happy tuesdayWink
liked the way u looked at the brighter sideEmbarrassed
thanxs a lot
Originally posted by maansee

beautifully written by muski...
 waiting for next part ...Wink shocked maan by geet action...in tonya words (tonya ka AK.)..Action Kiss
u only want kissShockedD'oh...u will be disappointedWinkWink
Originally posted by maneet1985

that was so sweet and beautiful... geet cares for maan so much... she doesnt want to hurt him...
maybe she will tell about her past to maan soon!!!!!
maan was just hurt seeing her with the man who hurt her most!!!!
they are just getting there... they share a relation that seems to give only pain to each other...still they are there for each other...Embarrassed
Originally posted by khwaishfan

Fantabulous update. Loved it...angry Maan. Please update soon. Hate Dev. Thanks for the pm
I know angry maan is dreamyDay Dreaming
Originally posted by nan_10

awesome update Thumbs Upthey r struggling with many emotions
so many emotions.. OuchOuchOuch pain seem to ruleCry
Originally posted by mamathasridhar

these words are too gud muskaan
"even the ear of silence remain to be deaf forever even it hears disdain. The eyes that seems to see blind again and again since the lips still close to shout for silence to reign"ClapClapClapClap
wow thanxs for pointing it..I really worked around it.. thought it was not falling correct ..then got it together.. had read similar. Embarrassed
Originally posted by sdtashin

UFFF...DIS GEET IS SO CONFUSING...POOR MAAN...
not actually dear..she is just madly in love with devOuchCry
Originally posted by zahra15

amazing part...i hate dev for thinking that geet was to plead him...so tth baby is that of dev...continue soon...
no the baby is maan'sEmbarrassed
 
Muskan...that's really nice of you to like and further comment on our comments.
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by abisamratgunjan

wonderful
no words ot say abt t his
really love dit
the way mann have taken the truth is great didi
thanks a lot
Originally posted by ninand

Broken Heart
.. god .. its soo painful... can actually feel an aching lump in my throat.
to know without a doubt that  someone who you love soo completely does not return the feeling , not now atleast.. cuz they love someone else.. or just prefer playing games with you.Broken Heart feel for bothUnhappy.. but Maans pain just killsCry... the precap sounds ominous.definitely not looking forward to  it.Confused
thanks a lot..
true my heart goes out for maan tooCryCryDead
Originally posted by Ramhari

Thank you for another wonderful update. The first time they made love it was Maan taking all of Geet's pain. And now its Geet absorbing his pain.
Their kismat pain connection is beautiful.
Strange are the ways fate brings people together,
Maan caressing her stomach was the best part.
Finally Maan faced the truth.
Loved the way Geet opened up everything in front of him.
She must be feeling so light now since
this feeling of keeping Maan in dark was lingering in her for quiet sometime.
Maans emotions and thoughts through out Geet's talk
were described beautifully.
Precap sounds a bit scary
Continue soon.
thanks a lot ..yah their painful relation!!
Originally posted by zaqxsw

Fab part...!!!
This time Geet giving in to Maan's pain...
I sooo wish they come out of their pain soon...
Good that Geet cleared everything abt her past with Maan even if he didnt want to..
It was necessary for Geet to come out of her past...
Falling more in love with the new face of Maaneet...
Just waiting for some happy atleast contented moments for them...
Now who is broken beyond recovery???
Kya Muskan they are so sweet and adorable...
Aisa mat karo inke saath...
Please update soon...
As always waiting for the next part eagerly...
Love
Sakshi
PS: Sorry for the days being in absent mode, but I was not away from ur FF for much longer than 3 days... Exams and stuff keeping me busy...
Will comment more regularly from next week once I am done with my exams...
nahi baba main kuch nahi kar rahi!!! its just that they r so entangled in relations...consumed in painOuch
how was ur exam dear??
all the very best...will be waiting Day Dreaming
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
 
Vaidhumom Muskan...that's really nice of you to like and further comment on our comments.
thanxs a lot dear..I am just trying toEmbarrassed..

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
amazing update muskan...
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Comming to part 18...
The most happiest update of Ehtesaab till date...Clap
 
Geet telling Maan all what happened in her life...
 
Maan is upset not for knowing that she is married, but for Geet and for the pain she has gone thro in her life
 
Loved the line when Geet says..."Everything was fine...until" and maan continues...with the exact day and date when things started going wrong between Geet and Dev. That was the day when Maan didnt see Geet crossing the road when his car waits in that particular traffic signal...That was simply simply amazing way of expressing how well Maan Knows Geet and how much he still loves her.
 
dont know why...I'm finding the precap a bit scary. I am not worried about Dev and what he will do next. But wish Maneet to be together henceforth and no misunderstandings between them.


Edited by Vaidhumom - 18 May 2011 at 10:17pm

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