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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Finally ... finished it!!!!!!!! Smile'

         First of all, thank u for posting such an wonderful story. Kudos to u, Debasree!Clap

            The way u have managed case & at the same time, the emotions... is really unbelievable... Also, i must mention the twists ... U have kept the suspense throught the story very well... SmileSmileSmile

                    I was expecting something about the Biker... that he might be a criminal... I thought that ACP's injury might be related to the case... but anyway, it's okay. Smile

      Freddy, Sachin, Vivek... all had done their jobs very well... but of course, Abhijit & Daya are the dynamic marvelous ones... StarStarStarStarStarStarStar


                            So all in all, a very good story... expecting to see more from you soon.

                                  Keep it up! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Thanx DK for reading it...

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_cid_shreya

Will read it as soon as possible. Smile

Edited: I meant to read the story a few days before but my Internet was down so I just finished reading it. Overall, I loved the story Debashree. You really captured everyone's characteristics with great ease. Keep up the great work. Clap

Thanx Sri

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Posted: 09 May 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Sree I finally read it

Its a lovely story.
You have portrayed the character of Abhijeet so well

His caring attitude comes out so well

You have kept the pace stable and the dialogues are vivisd. You have really integrated the emotions into the case well

Great workClap




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Thanx Nandini for reading...Smile...I'm happy that u like it...

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 wow... wonderful DEBA...
yaar... U used very excillent UV prints!!!!!
use GR8 songs...
but yaar all CREDIT goes to U...
main nay tou bus BHAGAAR lagaya hayWink
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Nehin Yaar GD u help me a lot otherwise i cant create this...thanx once again 

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