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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
read it... its really efreshing as vis has said,,,, a mixture of 2005 to 2007 cases really!! but a small observation, if u dont mind! i cant recollect any story where acp ever apologised to his officers... anyway, fantastic and different!! well done!SmileClap Kp it up!

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Thanx Suhaani for ur comments.Big smile good observation...definitely I dnt mind it...frankly speaking...I also not fully like the last part...but I'm not able to change it...
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by debasree04

Thanx Suhaani for ur comments.Big smile good observation...definitely I dnt mind it...frankly speaking...I also not fully like the last part...but I'm not able to change it...


dont change it yaar!! Smile

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
excellent storyClapClap
i really like ur way to describe the every moment...
gud keep it upThumbs Up
hey dear can u provide me the link of ur first storySmile

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
great work!ClapClap

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Thanx a lot Shivani...
My first story is story of contest Smile
 
Thanx a lot Shreela


Edited by debasree04 - 05 May 2011 at 9:18am

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
reading it now...


Edited by darkknight007 - 08 May 2011 at 12:28pm
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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Finally ... finished it!!!!!!!! Smile'

         First of all, thank u for posting such an wonderful story. Kudos to u, Debasree!Clap

            The way u have managed case & at the same time, the emotions... is really unbelievable... Also, i must mention the twists ... U have kept the suspense throught the story very well... SmileSmileSmile

                    I was expecting something about the Biker... that he might be a criminal... I thought that ACP's injury might be related to the case... but anyway, it's okay. Smile

      Freddy, Sachin, Vivek... all had done their jobs very well... but of course, Abhijit & Daya are the dynamic marvelous ones... StarStarStarStarStarStarStar


                            So all in all, a very good story... expecting to see more from you soon.

                                  Keep it up! Thumbs Up

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