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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Thanks a ton fopr the PM.. Will read it ASAP.. Have high expectations from you.. Title is damn interesting... Curiosity building up...

Edited by Saadrita - 04 May 2011 at 12:22pm

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
 its very good. You have truly shown the true nature of Abhijeet, sacrificing, risk bearing and loyal to ACP. the last scene was too good and the way you have shown him in command was very apt.Smile

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 4:09pm | IP Logged

Very Very nice story...Clap

Mood ek dum fresh ho gaya... thanks for sharing

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
 superb and awesome...
connected a PLOT from THREE aspects... really amazing
buddy... kub wo time aayeyga... jub i will write like U and all
others...

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Nice Story..

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Finally read this. Indeed a very good story Debasree ... and as your thread name suggests ... it's totally dedicated to Abhijeet ... really loved the way you portrayed the character of Abhijeet !! Excellent !!! He was in full form ... sacrificing,caring,supercop ... and above all I loved the leadership side of Abhijeet you brought out !! In total ... I really liked it ... the ending was very nice !!! Great going Deba !!

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hey, will read the story soon...Smile

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Read it...it was a very refreshing change. ACP was injured - that was a bit sad. Maybe you could have sent him off somewhere else...but never mind. You had to make Abhijeet the 'boss' so it was fine.
 
Also, you need to leave some more space between the lines. It makes it easy to read and causes less strain on the eyes. Otherwise it was a good story. Looking forward to more from you. Smile

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