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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
hey guys sorry for the late update . i had to go for shopping suddenly .. left the update in a half way .. 
okay now its ready ,,, so do comment and hit the like button ..Wink

PART -24.

Recap ::The three jodies are now officially engaged !!!!!!

             The party soon heated up ' maan and geet danced

 soon all the family members and office staffs joined  .. they were entirely in a new land '  happiness beyond words !! they cant thank enough of their family !!! they felt so blessed to have such a family ,,, 

The party was over and everyone were so exhausted . They decided to take  go for sleep . The farmhouse had only 8  rooms . So it was agreed that the room would be shared as

                   1.    Mr & Mrs  . Handa

                   2.    Mr & Mrs . Khanna  (varshika's parents )

                   3.    Mr & Mrs . Basu  ( preet's parents )

                   4.    Mr & Mrs . Yadhav ( aditi's parents )

                   5.    Dadi (maan and dev's )

                   6.    Geet , Varshika  and  aditi

                   7.    Maan  , Dev and  Preet.

                   8.    Brij and his friends .

(guys geet and maan reach delhi around 12 pm . so engagement was scheduled at evening . party got over by late night . I guess time scale ll be clear. Regarding surnames I just googled it as I haven't heard of any before ..)

Every one retired to their room . preet was little cautious of staying with his boss . sensing his hesitance  maan started talking with him friendly .

Maan : hey preet , why so  quiet ha ?

Preet : nahi sir , everything was so unexpected .

Maan : yea unexpected but ended happily . hey we aren't in office now . moreover we gonna be relatives soon . then why calling me sir ? call me maan .

Preet : yes maan sir , no sir I mean maan .

Maan and dev just laughed at his nervousness and drifted to their dreamland . the same was the case of geet , varshika and aditi . everyone had a very well contended sleep with that day's happening ..

 Next day

The sunrays started  showing inside the room . Elders woke up early as they had arranged for the puja that day .  Mr. Handa called brij and asked him to woke the boys up while Mrs. Handa went to the girls .

Brij entered the boys room . he saw maan , dev and preet sleeping in king sized bed with each facing different directions and not forget to mention with smiling faces . he thought " oh may be in some dream with their would be's" . he laughed to himself and made his way to the bed . he pulled of the dwets and shouted " BOYS WAKE UP. ENOUGH OF DREAMS" . all the three woke up with a start and looked here and there.

Preet : where is aditi ? I was dancing with her ?

Dev : varshika ?

Maan : wow I had a baby girl  !! she is so cute !!   he was literally imagining a girl baby in his hand !!

Brij looked at them as if he was seeing a ghost . 


then the trio realized it was all dream . but a baby girl  ?? is it a little more ? everyone looked at maan who was giving his dreamy looks which was another shock to them .

Maan : what why are you looking at me like that ?

Dev : hmmm bhai , you had changed a lot . you dint hide anything !!

Maan : hey man , I too need to change . how long can I remind like that ?

Preet : haan maan , these girls changed our life a lot .

They started again with their dreamy talks completely ignoring brij .

Brij coughed a little in order to gain their attention which worked though .

Brij : guys there is pooja here and you are still sleeping . come on get up and be ready exactly by one hour .

Maan mumbled : you spoiled my dream man and made his way to the washroom .

Brij shook his head and made his way outside .


It was even more worse in the girls room . Mrs. Handa had totally given up the idea of waking them up . the girls dint even show any signs of stirring up . geet was so smiling in her dream . preet giving a small smile while varshika went a head of all "blushing". (guys now you got what they were thinking ??)

Rano gave them a look and took the whole jug of water . suppressing her laugher she poured the water on their faces individually . all the three screamed together giving the whole place a mini-earthqauke .

Geet : maaannn'

Varshika : bufflow devvv'

Aditi : preeet'

Rano would have fallen the floor laughing . she had a very hard time laughing on seeing the girls who were clearly dreaming of their to be husbands..

Rano : ha ha ha !!! now you woke up ..

Geet : mom , what is this ??

Varshika : haan aunty .

Aditi : what happened ??

Rano : have you seen the time .enough of your naughty dreams . now go and get ready .  Be there in the puja with an hour .

Geet : hmmm' ..

Rano : no more excuses .

Varshika : okay .

Rano : aditi you to get up . chalo jaldi se thaiyar ho jao. Warna your dad ll be so angry ..

With that she left the room , leaving the girls to get ready for puja .

so how was the update ??hope u guys like it ...

part 25 :

guys nowadays am not getting comments like before .. is it going on a boring track ??if so do let me know ...waiting for ur comments ..

Durga Krish

Edited by mrk_1 - 10 August 2011 at 4:20am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:36am | IP Logged
wow awesome update 
all three dreem very nice
but love maan dreem with cute baby girl
Lovely loved it
pls cont soon
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Edited by kahkashansakina - 11 May 2011 at 6:37am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
awesome update...too short...loved it. Please update soon but y no pm wen u update

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
finally a update that was sweet maan dreaming of baby girl was so cute he really has change a lot geet sab aapki daya hai

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Wow!!! lovely update
do pm me

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
lovely dreams
loved it!!!

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lovely update

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wow...lovely update

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