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"The series of murder"(AR fanfic) (Page 4)

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ksg_ritika

hey nyc concept ... AR as crime officers ... do add me 2 ur pm list ... 

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thnx n i will pm me u

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
nice concept

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
hey seems reallly interesting...ar officers...its new


update soon

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nice start..
continue soon..
n do PM me ADD ME TO UR PM LIST!!!


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Hey
gr8 concept
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged

Wow guys I am very happy

I didn't expect such a warm response for my ff.

Thnx, thnx, thnx

Now without much chitter chatter here is part 1

 

 

 

The Series of murder

 

Part 1

           Armaan and Ridzi on reaching the crime scene saw that the forensic team headed by Dr Muskaan had already reached there and had started their work. Ridzi was more than happy  to see muski's (muskaan) team because muski was not only her best friend but also one of the bests doctor of their forensic department.Muski on seeing them both came towards them and then she started while they were walking towards the body,' the girl is a 9year old she is stabbed by a very sharp knife, the murder has taken place around  an hour ago i.e. at 1:15.' ' Great job muski' said ridzi examining the body. ' By the way whose heading this case u or ur hubby?' asked muski.'My dear bhabhi I am here escorting my pretty wife' replied armaan'stop teasing me Armaan your stupid Bro hasn't proposed me yet' said muski making a sad face and while they both were chit chatting ridzi was examining the crime scene. The body was lying in an upside down position i.e. the girls front side was touching the floor and her back were she was stabbed was lying facing them. The forensic team had already marked the area were her body  was lying so she asked one of the helpers to turn the body .meanwhile she enquire about who had seen the body first and reported about it

         Meanwhile Armaan and muski had also joined her, ridzi after talking to the person who had informed the police came to know that he had seen the girls body around at 1:30 on his way home after a party and he also told her that the street was deserted and when he stopped here he had not seen anybody close to the body, then ridzi allowed him to leave and went towards the body.

 Ridzi – armaan, muski (she called them as they were examining the crime scene for clues).

Armaan - wats it dear?

Ridzi – see on her right hand "Ranveer" is inscribed

Muskaan – why would a small girl tattoo someones name on her arms

Armaan – even I would be scared to do that, by the way riddhima is the girl's identity known?

Ridzi – nope Armaan, I have called rahul and asked him to look if there is any missing complaint lodged for a nine year old girl

Muski – and the most amazing thing is that there is no bruises on her body means..

Armaan – the girl very well knew her murderer

"Tring Tring", ridzis phone rings and she sees that its rahul calling

Ridzi – hello, did u find any missing complaint, when was the complaint lodged?

Rahul – listen ridzi I will update u about that but first u have to deal with one more murder, just at a distance of about seven kms from where u are,muskis team is also suppose to join u.

Ridzi – Rahul are u out of ur mind, here I have just started this case and  ur giving me another one?

Rahul – chill ridzi, for now u r close to the crime scene so u have to go, we will see later wat can be done.

Ridzi – hmm…fine

She cuts the phone and then turns towards muski and armaaan

Ridzi – muski we have a new case just few miles kms away from here, let half ur team stay here I will ask Anjali(ridzis assistant) to head them so we have to leave quick and armaan u better go home and catch on ur sleep

 

Precap:-the next victim is also a 9year old girl with "Ranveer" tattooed on her right hand.

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 7:43am | IP Logged
woah...amazing one
dis is getting so interesting...
m just totally luvin d mysteries...
cont soon
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woah...amazing one
dis is getting so interesting...
m just totally luvin d mysteries...
cont soon
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