Posted: 04 May 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
idea proposed by: Adeena A. Qadir (sweetcherry96)
composed and written by: Adeena A. Qadir(sweetcherry96)
Noor Fatima Khalid (NoorFatima)
Maan ka safr: Dhaba say Driver tk..
A black mercedes stopped outside the blue building of Khurana Construction.. car's backseat door opened and a man stepped out.. "i want everything to be done by this sunday AND no excuses".. he stepped inside the building along with his body guards.. everywhere the staff members were running to get the work done..
the man had sharp figure and a stubble which went well with his sharp features.. he was about to enter the cabin labelled "Maan Singh Khuran M.D Khurana Construction" when he heard a voice calling him "maan".. the voice was sweet and quite melodious.. he turned around to see the girl of his dreams; Geet.. maan was shocked to see her here.. he wasnt sure if this was true or not.. he stood there looking at her.. geet stepped towards him and kept saying his name.. not getting any responce from maan she said his name loudly.. and then screamed in his ear "MAAN UTH JAEY"
maan singh khurana woke up from his dream to see his wife fuming with anger.. maan stood up and went near his wife jaani kyu itna gussa ho rahi ho?
gussa na kru tou ap se pyaar kru?? maan hugged her from behind.. wo bhi kr k dekh lo meri soniye.. geet got out of his embrce and turned to him.. maan khuda ka wasta hay ye kaam chori chod dijeay.. bohat hogai apki susti.. kabhi mann lga k kaam bhi kr lia kray.. agr mujhay pta hota k ap kaam nahi bus khwaab he dekhtay hay tou may ap se pyaar wyaar k chakr may pd k apni araam ki aindagi na chorti.. ab jaeyay apnay kaam pe lg jaey bahar log intezaar kr rahay hay apni baari ka.. geet went out talking to herself her wqt soey pday rehtay hay tou khana mera baap aa k bnaey ga..
maan irritated, went to his department.. took a cloth and kept it on his shoulder.. he picked up a doi(bra chamcha) and started to stir the kadahi.. kitna hukm chalati hay.. aik wo meray khwaab wali geet aur aik ye geet.. hmph.. kitna frk hay dono may.. chal maan tera iss geet ne tou kaam krwa krwa k keema bna daina hay, tu khwaab wali geet se he guzaara kar..
bahar chaar chicken kadahi aur do sabzi chaheay came geet's voice.. chaar chicken kadahi aur do sabzi.. hmph maan mimicked geet
the whole day went by busy as usual..
at night maan was thinking kya soch rahay ho? maan looked at her ,ye soch raha hu k ye dhaabay wala kaam ab chor day.. kitni kmai hoti hay hmari iss say..? mushkil se guzaara hta hay.. may soch raha hu k kuch bara kru..
per maan mushkil se guzaara hota hay per ho tou jata hay na.. iss pe bhi shukar kia kray..per geet may kuch bara karna chahta hu.. may ab aik bhens(cow) paalu ga aur dudh bechu ga.. dekhna phir hmaray din kaisay badaltay hay
geet tries her best to keep maan into running their dhaaba but maan wouldnt budge from his idea of keeping a cow.. maan takes a cow from his friend and starts his new business of being a "dudh wala".. geet not willing for all this then closes the dhaaba and helps her husband by cleaning the milk..
Days went by and the milk business went smoothly untill one day maan came home saying ye log apnay aap ko smjhtay kya hay?? hmay tou ye log insaan bhi nahi samajhtay.. ab mehangai barh rahi hay tou apnay guzaaray k leay bhi hum ko dudh mehanga krna pray ga na.. bohat ho gya ye sb.. ab may ye kaam nahi kr skta..bohat sunn li in logo ki per ab nahi.. ab may ye kaam chor raha hu.. logo ko dudh-pani(milawat wala dudh) jaisi nemat ki koi perwah he nahi.. may ab ye bhens bechu ga aur phir un paiso se faluday ki chexay lu ga aur faluday ka dhnda shuru kru ga
geet gets irritated by all this and says bohat ho gya apka ye roz roz ka dhnday badalna.. kisi aik kaam ko dil se kro tou kaam ho na.!! ap her kaam ko 'khala g ka ghr' smajhtay ho.. may apko ye bhens bechnay nahi dugi..
maan gets angry at this tum ya tou mera sath do ge ya iss bhens ka
may ab apka sath nahi du ge..
maan who was sitting on a chair gets up angrily tou phir ye tay hua k tum ab iss bhens k sath raho ge.. mujahy agay he tum pr shaq tha k tum kisi aur (looking at the cow) ko pasnd krti ho.. agr itna he isko psnd krti ho tou jao issi k sath reh lo
geet who was in tears gets up and leaves the house with the cow
after geet leaves maan sits on the chaarpai.. cools down abit and then thinks.. he then remembers bhens tou wo lay gai ab may kaha se paisay lau ga..?? he gets up mujhay geet ko dhundna he hoga
on other side geet is in the streets of amritsar with the cow.. maan tou mujhay he galt samjh bethay.. agr wo ye samajhtay hay k hum dono may kuch hay tou hum ye saabit kr day gay k hum may waqai kuch chal raha hay.. saying this geet hugs the cow..
GEEET a voice comes from behind.. geet turns to see her cousin Teji.. teji come forward tu yaha kya kr rahi hay aur tera so-called pati kahan hay?? aur tu iss bhens k sth kya kr rahi hay..??
geet in tears may nay uss bhens ki body walay ko chor dia hay.. ab ye(huging the cow) he mera maan, meri abroo, meri izaat, mera sb kuch hay..
tu chal meray sath ghar chaltay hay.. geet: nahi mujhay nahi jana..
teji: tou tu kaha jaey ge? geet turns to the cow may iske sath jau ge.. apnay honay walay sasuraal jau ge..
hearing this teji pulls geet with him and takes her home..
on reaching home teji sees his brother.. lucky is bhens ko lay ja aur qatal kr day.. shaadi say pehlay akeli lrki ko apnay ghr le ja rha tha..
lucky: per veer ji ye tou bhens hay, bail nahi
teji is shocked (uski aankhay khuli ki khuli reh jati hay) KYA????????????????? geet aik female hay aur aik female (bhens) k sath ghr basana chahti hay...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
teji to lucky le jaa iss bhens ko aur bund kr day issay.. and drags geet upstairs into a room..
geet screams to let her go chodieay mujhay.. mujhay us k paas jaana hay.. chod dain mujhay
maan started his search for his dream building COW.. he searched all of amritsar but could not find his cow... and also geet...
maan stepped in a dhaaba and sat on a charpai sipping his tea.. he remembered the days when he his beauty used to stare into eachothers eyes.. he would tell her about his dreams and should listen to him and at times saying "mooo"..
he was about to continue his search for the BHENSE when he over heard an old man talking to some one
... nahi nahi wo apnay masi k betay k sath reh rahi hay.. geet, dhabay waali, apni maasi k ghr hay.. pta nahi us k us k pati k beech kya hua jo wo apni maasi k ghar chali gai.. may nay tou ye bhi sunna hay k teji keh raha tha k geet ko ye rasta maan ki wja say he chun'na pra hoga warna wo aisa kabhi na krti..
mama ji apko bhi ye sb pta hay.. said another man.. mama ji: ye baat tou saaray amritsar ko pta hay..
other man: mama ji nai khbr tou ye bhi hay k teji keh raha tha k agr maan nay un kay ghr ki gali ka rukh bhi kya tou usay kach'cha chaba jaey ga..
maan got out of the dhaaba and thought may ab geet say apni bhense kaisay lu??? kuch tou sochna pray ga jis say may teji say maar bhi na khau aur geet say apni bhense bhi lay lu.. aur ho ska tou geet ko bhi mana lu ga..
maan was waling and saw an add of "driver wanted"..
AND this the journey of Maan Singh Khurana from Dhaaba to Driver..
adeena and noor..
Edited by aaq_nfk - 04 May 2011 at 1:24am