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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 95)

libra25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
this part is a lil hard to write...
there is so much emotion a mixed platter...
both maan and geet have their thoughts and feelings...
i felt the you could have made it a lil longer by extending their discussion...more explicit probably...
but still i could catch on the emotion very well...
this is something she will have to deal for a long time and maan and herself are the only ones who can bring her out of it...
i felt it was a very beautiful scene...
really looking for some rishabh naini moments...

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hamini_yash Senior Member

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 2:18am | IP Logged
you depicted it well. it is difficult for geet to display her response as well as it will be bothering maan to take her guilt away. but you showed it really well. hope geet just forgets everything about her past.

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Soapoperasrfun IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Great update Hasini. I am glad they spoke. I do hope Geet can get past this... I am sure she can. Loved it, 

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
the story is progressing well..keep up the good work going...please do continue soon..Smile

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Great part.Glad that they spoke.No matter what Maan will be there always with her.

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shalini01 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
loved it. so dev is gay huh. wow and rishabh...i like the way he got all angry and punched dev. please PM when u next update. love this FF alot.

Edited by shalini01 - 16 July 2011 at 7:40am

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Beautiful emotional part.
Geet was so shattered and broken coz she was not able to sense something wrong with Dev earlier.
But Maan her savior came right on time to the rescue.
Loved their chat which was much needed for Geet to come out of her state.
Maan as always seeking her permission for everything was so sweet.
Loved Geet questioning Maan about not beating up Dev and his answer.
Though Geet was so vulnerable and close
Maan chose to control himself and give her the required space and solitude.
Guess that was not what Geet wanted and so she grabbed hold of what she really needed at that moment.
Thank you for the amazing part and waiting for RishNaini.

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Escapist Goldie

Joined: 22 March 2010
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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
The update was complex...complex coz it explored another set of emotions...and expressing emotions in words is a very difficult task...words too fall short to pour the insides of a person's heart...and its tumultuous at times!

But somewhere I felt you did justice to what you've portrayed...the confusion and the obscurity of Geet's mind  and her venerability towards Maan and Maan's un-obstructive support and understanding nature helped a lot...

Somewhere the whole plot seemed to be trying to bring a sort of peace to her mind...and live in the moment and not wander her mind in the past, and I guess that's what is needed. I even adore Maan you know..he's always been the gentleman with it asking permission, privacy respect and even while making love to her...yes every person gets carried away but despite that he has shown the right amount of care and concern she requires and most importantly been true to is very important in a relationship and I'm glad she can trust her husband! 

This time round I'm glad you took them into consideration, Rishab n Naini can wait for another update :)

Continue soon...

Take Care  

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