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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 84)

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res... Much to write so will do it...
 
BUT thanks a ton for bringing in a closure to the DEV chapter with details. I will comment more on it as to why i wanted this to be brought up... Smile

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Another res... So i can keep a count of the comments i owe you... Will definintely update once  i read and have sometime off from my work Wink

Thank you for confirming my doubts Wink So Dev was a GAY or rather is GAY LOL Thanks ... more later... Wink

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hi.. i went through ur thread occasionally  and got hooked to it.. wat a presentation style u hav.. really mind blowing portrait of characters.. the monologues which u carried out in previous chapters revealed the depth of ur writing skills and it was very real and vivid picturization.,, i read the whole ff in three weeks .. and i wanted to say that i love this ff to the core... thank you for giving such a masterpiece of human emotions and characters.. the way u chose to bring maan and rishab was really very nice .. Clap

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Lovely one again
Wonderful seeing the couples together sorting out.
Cant type any more feeling super sleepy
Will comment in detail tomorrow
Good night

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i was so right about dev after the last update...
such a jerk...i mean this is even worse than polygamy...cheating someone to hide your identity
i loved how maan very tactfully played with naini and rishabh situation...

his conversation with geet was incredible...
just perfect...her reaction and words were so real...
very well penned...

thoroughly enjoyed rishabh and naini finally talking ...
really looking forward to a progress in their relationship...

plz continue soon

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Okay!

so, i know I haven't commented in a while now and I think the last i commented was on the Blindfold update...so I will go on in an ordered way,trying to cover all the updates!

Four States Updates-

the way you put forth th

e turmoil in two hearts along with the clear love brewing in the other two was brilliant.

Rishabh's attempts to avoid something that is actually far deeply engraved in him than even his own self...Naini's fight with her emotions, feeling angry at having lost herself to him yet again, took my attention away fron even Maaneet in the first one!

The second one however was just for Maan. the way he gave a sense of direction to Rishabh-the subtlety of his confession was mindblowing, and no doubt I was blown away!

 

In Plain Sight::

Ahhh! i love Rishaini! And I am glad that Naini closed the gap!Embarrassed
 
 
Crush the grapes:
The whole set-up was so warm and not to forget inviting and they gave in  and it was just beautiful!
 
 
War and Peace:
Sweet, and most importantly, as I went back to re-read the updates, i realised that i had indeed missed the second one and hence had blamed myself for not being attentive enough after the Rishaini encounter in a recent one as I wasn't aware of hi shifting over. But, i am glad he finally made that effort!
 
Rush Updates:
I can't help but admire his love and craving for her when she informed him of her imeding delay in arriving in NY!
She was hurt and he had serious making up to do, and I confess that i was eagerly looking forward to how you would make him do that because you keep surprising me with your fresh ideas!
I completely love Naini and Daadi for giving them the privacy that they needed and used pretty well. I would also Like to give it to dadi for her act to bring the other pair of her grandchildren together too, yet feel sad for the failure of her plan, coz now I am really looking forward to the union pretty much as I look forward to Maaneet. But, the pain that shines through your words makes me feel that Naini might not be wrong in taking her time.
It must have felt utterly horrible, if hat word can capture even a bit of what she must have gone through , after getting a cold shoulder from the only support she had, and the only she needed most badly at that time!
But,she will come around soon, and I am waiting eagerly for that!
my dying laptop battery forces me to stop now as I am in the midst of a power-cut!
hope to be back with the rest soon enough. I again apologise for the delay...
Love
Swati
 

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