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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 52)

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 7:54pm | IP Logged

Part 79: Displacement Update 1: Again 2 parts….WHOA! Wonder who is displaced and who's doing the displacing…or better question what is doing the displacing?! Time to see….

 

So they finally are separated…what will happen now…hmmm…love how you writing this angle b/c post-marriage there hasn't been a long separation between the two so very interesting to see this story play out.

 

Poor Geet all along…the use of diction like:"filled her void", "no solace", "aimless walks", "choking anguish"….all excellence descriptions to describe her state.

 

That phone call was so cute…and so realistic…can totally see myself doing that. Honestly, I feel so bad for her and this is so sad to read…I want her to go back, but this is very important for her too….such a dilemma!!!

 

his own sense of displacement reverberating in the lone hallway- this is so intense…what an insane ending…left me on the edge of my seat…hoping for the best!

 

 

 Part 79 Displacement Update 2: still hoping for the best…nothing bad…PLEASE!!!!

 

Okay…rishabh just pops by…W*F?! ( excuse my French) No offense but this part was so comical..."apparently your family thinks you're missing"…it made me chuckle…the whole scenario…and getting him involved!

 

HA! I love this….the whole gang in SF…and Maneet playing cupid to RisNi (yes I'm calling them that now)…plus I read others' comments so I def know Geet is preggers soon and Maneet are playing cupid!!! So uber excited!

 

YIPPEEE! No more displacement…replacement if anything…YES! Maneet re-united now time for RisNi to get their act together! 

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Part 80 Homecoming: Are we in high school again?! What? Homecoming? Kiska? I know too many questions, but still I wanna know! Your unique style of naming titles is so intriguing!!  BTW: I'm listening to Thuli Thuli while reading this part…do you know the song?! It's so good!!!

 

This rishabh monologue wasn't bad but very phika compared to Maan's…chai kum pani H…need something much better more you to fall in love with R! Which reminds me…can we get more of Maan's monologue…so missing them like crazy!! Pretty pretty pretty pleazzzeee!!!!

Awww! Poor Naini…but I'm really not diggin' this Rishabh guy…he seems so emotionless or maybe I'm just reading into him as much!  And all the awkwardness is making me feel awkward!! Arrogant ass indeed…he really comes off like that….like I said so cold…and not sexy cold like Maan.

 

This one dumb act of his homecoming was breaking her, centrally rifting to pull her apart into pieces- so beautifully written…so poetic and love the way it's describing her pain.

 

Part 80 Homecoming Update 2: The 2 pre-caps were very nice…can't wait to read about the kiss!!!

 

Man….everyone is feeling awkward…..how awkward is all I can say! Geet and her ideas…male bonding…fun to see what fits the description! Tai chi?! Sorry I'm so Lucky-Maan inspired…thank god Rishabh is smarter than Lucky!

 

Awww! Geet the angel…making hearts meet….I can see her plan a mile away….what a babe!!!

 

RisNi alone at the dinner table…make it happen guys! Actually make it happen Hasini….I want fireworks love!!!  Ohhh! Hand touching…so elementary…a notch up please! Stubborn ass…nice…that's too much for me to handle! Okay one more notch!

 

And whoa…that fight! Such an angry fight, but still comedic in a dark way!

 

I really thought breakfast would be a wonderful time to clear all misunderstandings…how nave of me! UGH!!! I really want this to stop….and Naini actually came off quite the immature little brat!

 

Awww! He still cares…the bleeding finger scene…but that anger was so quick too come along! Oh man…stupid RisNi…stop being so childish….I know I'm being so insenstitive but I want Maneet scenes only b/c these 2 are gettingon my nerves! I want Yash-Meer scenes please….wish them! Really hope I warm up to them soon!!!

 

Hahahahaha!! WWE event…if only! LOLZ!!!!

 

Promo trailer..…so adequate for sure…..picture abhi bakhi hai!

 

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Part 81: Spooky affair: Hmmm! I love a good scare…super psyched about this!

 

Alam pana MSK…so chweet! Love the new nickname! Maneet exchange was much needed….so addicted to them…a lack of a cute scene puts me into withdrawals. Thanks so much for them!

 

Holy mother of peaches….WHOA! Tearing of the anchal off her blouse…and that cutie shields her chest…you think the shyness factor must have evaporated away by now…Oh geet!

 

Besharam Singh Khurana….honest to god…love his naughty side…can imagine him smirking while saying that like on the show!!

 

Not making love is not an option –BEST LINE TO DATE!!! Okay maybe I'm exaggerating too bit, but OMFG! I effin' love it….encore to part 67 please….or 69 please!!!!

 

You foolish woman...it's not the same once you taste sin AND  sulky pout- uff! Teri ada…Love you MSK! Thank you for writing this…I'm so gone! I'm gonna have fantastic dreams b/c of you! (big winky face..and I mean a huge ass face)!

 

KISSING LENGTH!!!!! KYA?! More more more!!!!

 

He's so sly! She's getting closer and he's totally doing that cheesy arm around shoulder bit!!

 

No S-E-X for 2 weeks….nice to know that Maan is like all men and that's on his mind too!  Zealous and feverish impact of kisses oh boy if only I were in Geet's place…well a girl can dream!

 

YUP! Agreee….horror movies always work…a full proof successful plan indeed! Such a fun update!

 

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update.
I am jumping in joy because Geet   is back
The family picture is complete now.
I remember Dadima's words during Maaneet's wedding
about the family pic not being complete.
Poor geet had to change her travel plans because of Rishabh.
Since Maan was unaware of it he went crazy and stressed himself
But looks like that didnt help him either.
In the last few lines their longing for each other was so beautifully described.
Maan's words were beautiful but Geet's I miss you more said it all.
Waiting for the next one.

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
*Edited* Embarrassed

Sorry I was absent for 1 long month due to exams...but I done n I'm here Smile

Ah! finally done with the thread 4...and what should I say??? I'm enthralled...gosh it was something of a  whole roller coaster ride...SF...NY..Maan Geet...Rishab and Naini too...the way you've carved each n everything is indeed beautifully...something right out of the pages of life..could feel each n every emotion they were coursing through...you indeed are a very wonderful writer...i won't go in the intricacy of all d posts but in all they all were brilliant and the way u linked up was awesome...u c continuously studying for a month has reduced my words..and I'm falling short of them...

Wonderful read...waiting for the further turn of events...!!!! Smile

Take   Care,
Fatima



Edited by -shabnoor- - 12 June 2011 at 7:34am

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
awesome update...loved it... superb...

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Hummm, How is Geet going to make it up to Maan now... Blushing

cannot wait to read more. 

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
I really missed Yash-Meera's track. Been some time didnt hear but them
Opsy Dadima thinks Geet is pregnant. She is in dilemma for an conformation.
I hope she wont make it as an announcement before confronting anyone.
Wow Rishabh is moving to NY!!! That a great news. Am loving this.
Loved the way everyone tries to  convince Rishabh to stay back at NY.
All are trying hard to pack back this love birds.
Wonder how long Naina going to resist Rishabh, having him staying just one floor below her.
This is going to be really fun..
aww~~ Maaneet are really missing each other.
Geet should be regretting on her own act to stay away from her family.
Really hope that she will be coming back soon to NY.


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