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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 15)

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
awesome...
now may be rishabh goes into retrospection and see the incidences in a different light...
it is very true that whatever you see is not always the truth and half truth is more dangerous than a lie...
so he as well suspects her of having a relation with dev...it seems...
i also liked when he asked him that does she miss them when she sees maneet romancing...

i read somewhere that how you treat memories is upto one's will and heart...
it can be treated as bed of roses and dwell in the happiness they bring to us...or as well as stack of thorns that bring a shower of tears whenever thay visit us...

i really like rishabh and naini in your ff...
continue soon

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
both the parts are lovely . somehow i still feel geet is pregnantWinkhope it comes out true in next updates. rishabh and naini's scene is very well written.

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
great one sweetheart.. I am liking Naini-Rshab

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
I liked the title "Seeing and believing". It increases curiosity. 

Loved how the first update started. He was there and held her in his arms. Ok, now it is clear, she is just sick from an upset stomach. It is nothing else. But since daadi caught them in an awkward position, she is bound to assume that they are pregnant. It will be good to see how they clarify that bit. 

Huh, did Geet actually call Maan Jaan? That was sooo cute. And Maan's reaction was much expected. 

With each update about Rishab and Naini I am liking them more. It is understandable why Naini is so upset with him. But they are beginning to get close again and the resistance won;t hold for too long. 

Great updates Hasini. Loved both of them. 

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged

I'm glad Maan is back. We needed someone to take care of his ailing wife. I love how Dadi is the epitome of bad timings and awkwardness. I can't wait to see how they manage to explain that she isn't pregnant and he was just getting back at his wife for calling him jaan, which I must say was absolutely adorable.

The second part was great. My heart goes out to Naini because she feels betrayed yet still loves Rishabh but doesn't want to succumb to him. I feel for him too since he obviously is repentant and desperate. Like he said time is ticking and I hope he makes his move quick.

Thanks for both parts they were wonderful Hasini!

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Posted: 08 May 2011 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Loved Geet's slip of tongue part.
Tats so sweet n unexpected.
Wrong timing by Dadima..

Feeling sad for bof Naina n Rishabh.
I really loved d whole part. Their inner feelings were well explained.
I understand how would Naina felt when Rishabh blamed her.
She still have feeling for him but doesnt wan to give in.
Thx for wonderful update.

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