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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 113)

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Life has a role to play...

Far and far I tried to reach
But never could keep my silence asleep.
For better or for worse I did not know
That I had to surrender all my needs.

Time to time I came across
The different versions
Of all I knew, but never ever I thought
Of the roles that were kept for few.

Thinking of all the colors of life
As to how it turns into black and white.
Such strange roles do we all perform
That we don't come to know as to when our parts are over after all.

The image we portray is familiar to all
But no one knows the pretentious of it all.
As another fact of life that comes our way.
We know our parts are not meant for all!

The only answer was the river never stops
And always continues to sway.
Sincerity and patience is all that you need
As life is nothing but what you want it to be.
Everyone has a role to play...

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The role-play by Maan and Geet was intriguing, sexy and seducing.
Great take H!:)

ps.. prime number galore ... 113 & 701


Edited by night13 - 02 August 2011 at 7:11am

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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
liked d update...
especially dat mirror concept...
addme to ur pm list...
chao
 

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I thought Geet was pregnant at first.. Lol.. even though it was because she saw the gay couple..

The role playing was really interesting and sexy i would say. I loved it.

You really are a talented writer, i love the way you write, sometimes it seems like poetry :-)

Am missing Abhi and Naini Smile

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And then it began slowly, the process of losing herself in him, seeing her unbiased image in his eyes...affirming in a wordless language, that she never did need a mirror after all.
                Wow,words so perfect...they touched my soul. Isn't this what every girl,every wife dream of??Hats off to you Hasini..you are truly amazing!!

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hey hasini..
i am glad you are back...

i quite like it...
the way you expressed her insecurities..
i loved when he said that true lovers didnt need mirrors but could see in the eyes...
i dont have words to describe the impact of it...
its so overwhelming...
and the even better part was when she asks for her husband back..
the depth of their love can be seen...its just incredible the way you connect me with the story...
and even better was the last part of the update..
when she saw her completeness and assurance in his eyes...

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Wow, another beautiful update!

Geet needs more time for the truth to sink in completely and get over the feeling of betrayal. Loved the wordplay and the subtleties. Maan's words..."For people who are truly in love, they don't need a mirror to start with. They look at themselves in their partner's eyes"...so beautiful and true. All in all an amazing update! Do continue soon.

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