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FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 (Page 110)

Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
hasini..Hug...i am back...n now i will make sure that i catch up on all ...LOL

ok...haan my comments might be short on my focus is on completing the parts i have left so that i can come to where the story is now...Wink

Part 91 (1-5):

omg...they both r saying things that they dont want to ...but want in u understand naa...deep desires r coming out in open...WinkLOL

In the short period of time she had been married to him, he had rubbed off, a few of his not-so-fine qualities on herEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

even maan has a fear that this distance will get to her...n to some extent he is right...only their love can save them...n still keeping them together...

the silent n cold treatment started...again...D'oh

what r they upto...toe...then...headache...sari...uff...stop all this...we know what u need..LOL

i am loving the foreplay...maan is too much...but geet is also not far behind...Wink

peppermint patty n mittens did the trick what others could not...Blushing

Part 92 (1-2):

lovely...geet in a bath robe...maan in a towel...hugging...running...n dadi n naini staring at them...LOL

bechari geet...with all the things scattered around...she surely must have wished to be invisible...LOL

n now to face them when he is gone...she will be all...BlushingBlushing

they heard the name misti..LOL..geed is surely going redder n redder...if that is even a word...LOL

geet is surely getting bolder...Blushing...loved it...all of it...Blushing

dadi is really tensed abt naini n maan...especially naini...glad maan understood it n tried to make it better from his side...

 the color scarlet was deep etched in her...not just in her cheeks, but in the core of her that shimmied with every time she found him close.EmbarrassedClap

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jazzerette IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Loved the updates!! 

Naini is pregnant ...awww!!

Beautifully written!! Absolutely amazing!! 

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ajenn IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 July 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Beautiful part Hasini.
Rishabh was in
cloud nine with the feelings of being a father.
Naina sounded really cute when she said she wants Rihabh to company her for her medical check-up.
Loved the way Rishabh's asked her to come back to their house forever.
Rishbah's uncertainty to get close with Naina and the way Naina starts to undress afta he spilt the water was really beautiful and passionate.
Thanks for the amazing part.
Eager to read next...

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Tyro IF-Sizzlerz

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Part 93 (1-3):

naini was checking out rishabh...n wondering y he didnt compliment her...LOL

geet had her insecurities ...but was glad she voiced it...n maan was able to make her understand...that she is his love...Embarrassed

dev...seems like both of the guys were about to burst out...loved the way geet handled it...

dev was scared that geet might slap him...LOL least he realized that he is no longer imp in her life...

the men left...maan it seems wanted to talk with rishabh...n naini knew that it is not the right time to oppose him...

what did maan want to talk abt...even rishabh was confused...bechara dev...thinking what is going to happen...Tongue

i am so happy that rishabh punched him..Big smile...maan seems like was in control...or at least trying his best not to let his anger out...otherwise no1 could have stopped him...

maan surely knows how to tackle the situation...making rishabh act drunk...n seeing the look on nainis face,,,rishabh knew...

i was thinking right...when i read the 2nd part...the only conclusion i thought was that he was gay...n part 3 confirmed it...Big smile

loved the talk between naini n rishabh...he indeed is very possessive,,,,...

Part 94 (1-2):

naini took rishabh coz of geet...she understood that geet needed maan at the moment...

 Like the fall of a pebble on thin sheet glass, she felt the crack disperse in blinding speed and just like that her will to budge disintegrated. ClapEmbarrassed

naini dent want to wake him up...but it seems like she didnt want to let go...

both of them held onto each other,,,...Embarrassed

loved that she has no feelings...but still she is unsure of she thinks that she wasnt able to c the signs...


Part 95 (1-5):

naini n rishabh r in love with each other since a long time...

loved  the flashbacks...the stalker...the possessive new bf...her first kiss...awesome...

he was trying to make small talk n she was not even looking at him...

by watching maan n geet...she is remembering her moments with rishabh n that is making her go mad...LOL

lol...again checking rishabh other man can ever take his place...Embarrassed

omg...she wasnt even doing anything...but another man touching his way is rishabh going to tolerate that...

she wore a sari...Shocked.he surely was surprised...LOL

finally she let her facade fall n told him what she wants...n that is never to leave him...Embarrassed

PS --- only part 96 is left...which i think is still going on...will comment on it later...again sorry for the late comments...was busy with exam n project...Embarrassed

Edited by jyoti_l - 25 July 2011 at 3:09pm

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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nice part..Smile

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hey! please update soon yaar

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