Originally posted by: -dia-
Beautiful part ...awesome.
Somewhere Geet is still not able to digest the fact.
Yes, we can't expect such closures to come by easy. Thanks Dia.
Originally posted by: ayu14
It was awesome
The role play thing was really great
How much things are their to explore when you are in love
colours you don't see everyday the passion you can't express through words The poetry which have no words
I saw these all in your update
Do update soon I really enjoy reading ur updates
Ah! thanks Ayu. I wanted to write more, but I couldn't. But there will be more of such role plays, between them given that they will taking this as a way to talk to each other with fair indifference, the next couple of times, they will fight.
Originally posted by: hamini_yash
ha ha ha
the starting was funny,
and i liked the conversation between them,
the best line of the update was maan telling that couples dont need mirrors, that was wow,
please keep updating.
Glad you liked it hamini. Funny? I doubt I have that bone in me. But I will take your word for it. Thanks so much.
Originally posted by: lively-piia
liked d update...
especially dat mirror concept...
addme to ur pm list...
chao
Thank you Pia. Yes the mirror part was deep, even for me 😆
Originally posted by: Lov26
I thought Geet was pregnant at first.. Lol.. even though it was because she saw the gay couple..
The role playing was really interesting and sexy i would say. I loved it.
You really are a talented writer, i love the way you write, sometimes it seems like poetry :-)
Am missing Abhi and Naini 😊
😆 We don't want to get her pregnant now. Not just yet. Glad you liked it. Poetry? Ah! someone old timers here should tell you that I don't take well with compliments. Thanks Gurl.
Yeah Abhi and Naini are coming in the next update.
Originally posted by: tanya_vi
And then it
began slowly, the process of losing herself in him, seeing her unbiased
image in his eyes...affirming in a wordless language, that she never did need a mirror after all.
Wow,words so
perfect...they touched my soul. Isn't this what every girl,every wife
dream of??Hats off to you Hasini..you are truly amazing!!
Ah! Gurl, Glad you liked it. Guess the mirror thought of mine is sinking well with you people. Thanks so much.
Originally posted by: libra25
hey hasini..
i am glad you are back...
i quite like it...
the way you expressed her insecurities..
i loved when he said that true lovers didnt need mirrors but could see in the eyes...
i dont have words to describe the impact of it...
its so overwhelming...
and the even better part was when she asks for her husband back..
the depth of their love can be seen...its just incredible the way you connect me with the story...
and even better was the last part of the update..
when she saw her completeness and assurance in his eyes...
Libra! My ever present buddy. Thanks so much for being there.
You noticed her asking for her husband back...Nice. Yeah that tells a lot about a person, doesn't it? Me too...I'm attached to this story as well and I can only hope I can do justice to it.
THANKS so much.
Originally posted by: Starry_night
Wow, another beautiful update!
Geet needs
more time for the truth to sink in completely and get over the feeling
of betrayal. Loved the wordplay and the subtleties. Maan's words..."For people who are truly in love, they
don't need a mirror to start with. They look at themselves in their partner's
eyes"...so beautiful and true. All in all an amazing update! Do continue soon.
Another one of my old-timers. Thanks Starry night. Word play...I wish I can do more of that. I always feel I suck at dialogues. That is one constant feedback I have got. Thanks so much gurl.
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