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Posted: 12 years ago
Life has a role to play...

Far and far I tried to reach
But never could keep my silence asleep.
For better or for worse I did not know
That I had to surrender all my needs.

Time to time I came across
The different versions
Of all I knew, but never ever I thought
Of the roles that were kept for few.

Thinking of all the colors of life
As to how it turns into black and white.
Such strange roles do we all perform
That we don't come to know as to when our parts are over after all.

The image we portray is familiar to all
But no one knows the pretentious of it all.
As another fact of life that comes our way.
We know our parts are not meant for all!

The only answer was the river never stops
And always continues to sway.
Sincerity and patience is all that you need
As life is nothing but what you want it to be.
Everyone has a role to play...

***

The role-play by Maan and Geet was intriguing, sexy and seducing.
Great take H!:)

ps.. prime number galore ... 113 & 701
Edited by night13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
liked d update...
especially dat mirror concept...
addme to ur pm list...
chao
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
I thought Geet was pregnant at first.. Lol.. even though it was because she saw the gay couple..

The role playing was really interesting and sexy i would say. I loved it.

You really are a talented writer, i love the way you write, sometimes it seems like poetry :-)

Am missing Abhi and Naini 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
And then it began slowly, the process of losing herself in him, seeing her unbiased image in his eyes...affirming in a wordless language, that she never did need a mirror after all.
                Wow,words so perfect...they touched my soul. Isn't this what every girl,every wife dream of??Hats off to you Hasini..you are truly amazing!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hasini..
i am glad you are back...

i quite like it...
the way you expressed her insecurities..
i loved when he said that true lovers didnt need mirrors but could see in the eyes...
i dont have words to describe the impact of it...
its so overwhelming...
and the even better part was when she asks for her husband back..
the depth of their love can be seen...its just incredible the way you connect me with the story...
and even better was the last part of the update..
when she saw her completeness and assurance in his eyes...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, another beautiful update!

Geet needs more time for the truth to sink in completely and get over the feeling of betrayal. Loved the wordplay and the subtleties. Maan's words..."For people who are truly in love, they don't need a mirror to start with. They look at themselves in their partner's eyes"...so beautiful and true. All in all an amazing update! Do continue soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
35 likes and 9 comments...

1 out of every 4 people who read, are commenting. Should I throw tantrums like others?😆  Like, PM the update to only those who commented? 😉

To all those who commented, THANKS so much guys. I loved reading every word of your comments and feedback.

Hasini
Edited by 6thElement - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: night13

Life has a role to play...

Far and far I tried to reach
But never could keep my silence asleep.
For better or for worse I did not know
That I had to surrender all my needs.

Time to time I came across
The different versions
Of all I knew, but never ever I thought
Of the roles that were kept for few.

Thinking of all the colors of life
As to how it turns into black and white.
Such strange roles do we all perform
That we don't come to know as to when our parts are over after all.

The image we portray is familiar to all
But no one knows the pretentious of it all.
As another fact of life that comes our way.
We know our parts are not meant for all!

The only answer was the river never stops
And always continues to sway.
Sincerity and patience is all that you need
As life is nothing but what you want it to be.
Everyone has a role to play...

***

The role-play by Maan and Geet was intriguing, sexy and seducing.
Great take H!:)

ps.. prime number galore ... 113 & 701



Ah! Thanks night. I loved the poem. Looked it up and its by Nandini Garg?
This is update 97 (prime) and your prime dedication! Thanks again.

I wish I could have gone more with the role-play. But sorry I couldn't, my eyes were closing down last night.

Was 113 the first post? Because I was thinking 113 for NY times too 😆
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: -dia-

Beautiful part ...awesome.

Somewhere Geet is still not able to digest the fact.



Yes, we can't expect such closures to come by easy.  Thanks Dia.

Originally posted by: ayu14

It was awesome
The role play thing was really great
How much things are their to explore when you are in love
colours you don't see everyday the passion you can't express through words The poetry which have no words
I saw these all in your update
Do update soon I really enjoy reading ur updates



Ah! thanks Ayu. I wanted to write more, but I couldn't. But there will be more of such role plays, between them given that they will taking this as a way to talk to each other with fair indifference, the next couple of times, they will fight.

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

ha ha ha

the starting was funny,
and i liked the conversation between them,
the best line of the update was maan telling that couples dont need mirrors, that was wow,
please keep updating.



Glad you liked it hamini. Funny? I doubt I have that bone in me. But I will take your word for it. Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: lively-piia

liked d update...

especially dat mirror concept...
addme to ur pm list...
chao
 



Thank you Pia. Yes the mirror part was deep, even for me 😆

Originally posted by: Lov26

I thought Geet was pregnant at first.. Lol.. even though it was because she saw the gay couple..

The role playing was really interesting and sexy i would say. I loved it.

You really are a talented writer, i love the way you write, sometimes it seems like poetry :-)

Am missing Abhi and Naini 😊



😆 We don't want to get her pregnant now. Not just yet. Glad you liked it. Poetry? Ah! someone old timers here should tell you that I don't take well with compliments. Thanks Gurl.
Yeah Abhi and Naini are coming in the next update.

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

And then it began slowly, the process of losing herself in him, seeing her unbiased image in his eyes...affirming in a wordless language, that she never did need a mirror after all.                 Wow,words so perfect...they touched my soul. Isn't this what every girl,every wife dream of??Hats off to you Hasini..you are truly amazing!!



Ah! Gurl, Glad you liked it. Guess the mirror thought of mine is sinking well with you people. Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: libra25

hey hasini..
i am glad you are back...

i quite like it...
the way you expressed her insecurities..
i loved when he said that true lovers didnt need mirrors but could see in the eyes...
i dont have words to describe the impact of it...
its so overwhelming...
and the even better part was when she asks for her husband back..
the depth of their love can be seen...its just incredible the way you connect me with the story...
and even better was the last part of the update..
when she saw her completeness and assurance in his eyes...



Libra! My ever present buddy. Thanks so much for being there.
You noticed her asking for her husband back...Nice. Yeah that tells a lot about a person, doesn't it? Me too...I'm attached to this story as well and I can only hope I can do justice to it.
THANKS so much.

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Wow, another beautiful update!

Geet needs more time for the truth to sink in completely and get over the feeling of betrayal. Loved the wordplay and the subtleties. Maan's words..."For people who are truly in love, they don't need a mirror to start with. They look at themselves in their partner's eyes"...so beautiful and true. All in all an amazing update! Do continue soon.



Another one of my old-timers. Thanks Starry night. Word play...I wish I can do more of that. I always feel I suck at dialogues. That is one constant feedback I have got. Thanks so much gurl.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for the late comments
The part was beautiful.
Geet didnt even recover fully from Dev's shock and she got
to face another gay couple.
No wonder she had such nauseating feelings.
Maan must have surely been concerned by her sudden disappearance.
Though geet tried her level best to cover up her disgusting feeling maan surely got it.
Loved the role play started by Geet and played along by Maan.
The mirror image part was super good.
You can change mirrors but the image will always show yourself so true .
Maan's words about people in love not needing mirrors was so beautiful .
The way he played along making her comfortable and excited was so sweet.
Though their role play was going superb Once they got intimate Geet so wanted her hubby back and loved the way Maan too reassured her.
Waiting for the next part.