Part 82 Memory lane: Week-end
at Catalina…WHOA! Seems like fun! I can't wait…hopefully week-end of good
memories and fun….loads and loads of fun! Cold crisp wind tickled and played their senses reviving every
emotion to play out differently...more buoyant on their faces, when their
hearts carried a deadweight in wraps.- So utterly beautiful…I love it so much….the
use of the words buoyant and deadweight…lovely! RisNi
scene was so cute…the rain in the BG and then her face to face with him!
AWWW!!! He has soft brown eyes that dazzle. Wait…that's Abhi….so confused, who's
Abhi?! Wow!
Catalina sounds so beautiful…have you been there?! Okay that was just a side
thought…the description is really really really nicely written! she was ingrained inside of him to such
depths that he would have passed the moments with the same agony anywhere else.- This one is my
personal fav…makes my heart beat a little faster…that's have good it is! How
the love story started was so cute…and he was "bound by her charms"….nice! What
a cute beginning and now after all these years…this is where they stand! I
demand a happy ending! Dadi
and Geet rock…time for plan B….what's plan B….can't wait! It's gonna be great!
Geet is so smart! Awesome
update…time for the next part! BTW:
I'm so inspired by you that I'm going to start writing a Gurti FF!!! I can't
wait…I hope you get a chance to read it!
Part 83: Submission Update 1: This sounds good and ohhh….there's 2 parts! PSCYHED!
OMG!
Dadima was supposed to faint and Geet did…so funny! So this is where it starts….she's
preggers?! AHHH!
The house is such a dream…willow trees…my favs!
Such
a beautiful song…and so utterly disappointing…and it suits them perfectly…these
2 knuckleheads need to read between the lines!
"it spoke volumes of the man's surrender to his lover, which he had claimed to be his state ever since he laid his eyes on her"- Love love love this so much!!!
And the ending line…just "bas ek pal"---one moment was all that was needed to break them apart…EPIC!!!!
WHOA! This part was so short…can't believe it's already over!!! LOL!!!