Abhiya FF: Entwined Bk-1 .Ended. - Page 101

Very emotional... nice to see Piya saved Abhay but now Abhay is changing his attitude towards Piya...hope  he will come around soon 😊

awesum update..hope they unite soon!plz do pm me,shalini!Edited by abhiora - 12 years ago

hey shalini😃

aweosome update dear👏👏👏...

very emotional update dear...loved that pia save abhay's life...

very sad dear that abhayt will change his behaviour toward pia...

plz update soon

hav a nice day

luv u

sunita

Hey Shalini!

Great going! Found your FF interesting and finished it in one go. The story has been captivating, with the vampires and the werewolves. AbhIya romace all along kept the romance factor present along with the many revealations and occurences in the story. Now that there is a misunderstanding between them, I guess it might stretch a while? Loved how you've included Jeremy and Jordan, however, it would've been even more fun had they been more involved in the story. Haseena and Naina are total sweethearts! The story of the ancients (A & Z) was well done and reason enough for the werewolves to want Pia. Do update soon and yeah, I've already added you to my buddy list so that it's easy for you to PM me.

Cheers,
Tia

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Hey Shalini!

Great going! Found your FF interesting and finished it in one go. The story has been captivating, with the vampires and the werewolves. AbhIya romace all along kept the romance factor present along with the many revealations and occurences in the story. Now that there is a misunderstanding between them, I guess it might stretch a while? Loved how you've included Jeremy and Jordan, however, it would've been even more fun had they been more involved in the story. Haseena and Naina are total sweethearts! The story of the ancients (A & Z) was well done and reason enough for the werewolves to want Pia. Do update soon and yeah, I've already added you to my buddy list so that it's easy for you to PM me.

Cheers,
Tia

Thanks for liking Tia! I'll pm you.

Originally posted by: sunu123

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hey shalini😃

</div>aweosome update dear👏👏👏...

very emotional update dear...loved that pia save abhay's life...

very sad dear that abhayt will change his behaviour toward pia...

plz update soon

hav a nice day

luv u<div>

sunita</font>

Thanks Sunita!

Originally posted by: abhiora

awesum update..hope they unite soon!plz do pm me,shalini!

Thanks Tora! I'll pm everyone this time.

Originally posted by: prernasinghking

poor abhay

Thanks for reading.

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

<font size="2">Very emotional... nice to see Piya saved Abhay but now Abhay is changing his attitude towards Piya...hope he will come around soon😊</font>

Abhay's hurt but he'll recover soon.

Originally posted by: prerna26

WOW IT WAS NICE!!! POOR ABHAY...IT FEELS BAD WHEN SOMEONE BEHAVES LIKE THIS...SHE SHOULD HAVE GIVEN HIM ONE CHANCE...ABHAY LOVED HER LIKE ANYTHING...I'M EAGERLY WAITING FR NEXT ONE...I THINK NOW PIA WILL REGRET HER DECISION :((

Thank you! Keep reading!