New OS!!! ~*Love Happens*~ Updated!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: ivy_11

Thanks for the OS, Bushy😊

I really enjoyed reading it...short but with a happy fairy tale ending...and they happily lived ever after😃

Originally posted by: kiran255

OH Bushyyy ! Hey Kiran 😳

First of all Glad u are back 

and not just back  

u are back with a bang ! Yeah, am back with a BANG 😆

LOvely os !

teh feeling which D goes through when seing Naku are beautifully expressed ! Aww thank you so much 😳

It was so ncie to read something which feels like fairy tale ! Yeah just like the way u wanted 😃

Realy beautiful !

enjoyed every bit :d

and thank god it was o trgic 

it was all about love and happiness ! Yeah, i couldn't make you sad again 😳

Looking forward for more :P Aah...will TRY 😆

Originally posted by: preety_219

Hey Bushy🤗 Hey Pooji 🤗

Fantastic OS👏 Thank you 😃

I felt as if i was reading a fairy tale😍 Aww...😳

I loved how Dutta realised that he always had feelings for her,but never really understood it.Aise hi hum usse gadha thodi bulate hai😉 Exactly...he is a born gadha 😆

I also liked how how tried to connect his past memories with his present.👍🏼 Thank you so much 😃

 

Thanks a lot for this beautiful story. My pleasure 😳

Dutta & Nakku -these are just two ordinary names,but together they helped so many FF writers to creat a wonderful love story.❤️ Aww yeah, they are the inspiration 😳

 

Now i will wait for ur next story.😉 I hope i can come up with something 😃

Lots of love🤗🤗🤗 Love you too...🤗🤗🤗

Pooja😊

Originally posted by: Lekz

Bushy that was awesome 👏👏👏    very well thought out and well written too. Thank you so much Leks 😃

 

Loved the way you weaved things together...and finally they lived happily ever after. Yeah, finally 😳

 

Just my kind a stuff, takes me to a different land. Aww 😳

 

Do send me a PM when you write something. Yeah sure...😃

 

Keep writing, only way to keep TaSha alive. Will try buddy 😳

 

 

 

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

ok...bush firstly thanks for the pm... that certainly did it.acted  upon it prompty.  👏 from start to finish...  contemporary setting,a much in demand job of arranging marriages,was quick to hold my attentionfrom the start. Thank you so much hammie...😃.his cocky love of himself when eyeing his reflection..whet my appetite. Wow...you mentioned this point...lovely 😳The way the story moved was very mature,as it reminded me of individual scene changes on the screen, yet you managed to maintain the consistency of the sequence of events.  Aww thank you so much 😃 There were some one liners ' nice girls have many requirements' that were ingenious and showed his flippant yet mature thinking. Aww u even picked this one out..Lovely again 😃His preoccupation of a non commital take on marriage was also very credible,as men usually shy from marriage ,unless pressed by culture and family,and mostly men like him,who have fun! Yeah, i had this in mind while sketching his character😳 The way ,he became inclined towards her  was indeed beautifully written, it was it was in the stars. So,bushy,short but certainly meaningful,and well put.xxxwelldone hammie Hammie..i love you for analyzing this OS so beautifully...You picked some points and analyzed them...Love you... 😳

Originally posted by: prncz

Hi Bushy ,Srush ki chulbul  , 🤗 Hi Raj 🤗

 

i am finally catching up with all my readin,,swrriiee for this late comment but u knw na ,,was busy 😛 No probs buddy 😃

 

but here i am ,loved reading this Os ,, truly well written ,,i couldnt stop Aww thank you 😳

 

,,,the way ur story moved from flash bak to present was good ,,and consistent Thank you again 😳

 

I liked dutta's cool attitude was a flirt but could never find the rite girl becoz she was always before him and he was internaly comparing her standards😆 i liked their being Kick-Ass partners😆 totaly opposite but they say na opp attract ..perrrfecct jodi banayi hai  bushy lved it 😛 Yeah i know Perfect Jodi 😉

 

he was agentle man as usual ,,drop her /escort her to the car Aww yes..he is a true gentleman...and Nakku a true gentlewoman 😆

 

finay it was the waiter  who  woke him up ,,😆  bless the waiter , he probably dint realise wht a punya ka kaam he did ,,😆 Yeah poor guy..usko pata bhi nahi usne kya kiya hai 😆

 

keep them coming ,,chulbul

Raj

 

 

Originally posted by: chithoo

bush i have edited my comments😃