Gunahon Ka Devta

   

OS Love Will Find It's Way Completed SR on Page 20 (Page 3)

Post Reply New Post

Page 3 of 24

MeraCheekuVirat

IF-Rockerz

MeraCheekuVirat

Joined: 03 July 2009

Posts: 6815

Posted: 02 May 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
wow dat was awsum!
 
srsly luved it! part 1 was awsum!
wa8in for more 2 read..!!! m gettin addicted 2 ur updatess!!!! luvin it!
thx for d pm dear!

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoul-Prashu-yoga23priya

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "OS Love Will Find It's Way Completed SR on Page 20 (Page 3)" in Gunahon Ka Devta forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

Sidda8

IF-Rockerz

Sidda8

Joined: 15 December 2010

Posts: 7750

Posted: 02 May 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
Oh dear, Avi attempted to commit suicide in this story as well. The poor guy is dying every second already. When will his miseries end. BTW, when did Avi start going to hookers? This scene reminded me of the scene in New Moon where Edward attempts to commit suicide and he sees Bella and believes that he is in heaven. So cute that Avi believes he is in heaven, he can continue to dream.

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoulBenNevisyoga23priya

joliefille

Goldie

joliefille

Joined: 28 October 2010

Posts: 1677

Posted: 02 May 2011 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
OK, i read it,it was nicely writtenClap

first part was quiet good n engaging ,
Thumbs Up

i have to admit , u shocked me again,
Avi is paying  girl
n more over his behavior toward that girl nisha stunned me ,Angry

n top on all he jumped from window, i thought it must be a dream or somethingBroken Heart

but finally she came, Heart

waiting for next part dear update soon n don't take too much pan killersOuchtake some rest too
Embarrassed

The following 4 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoulBenNevis-Prashu-yoga23priya

chatterbox

IF-Sizzlerz

chatterbox

Joined: 01 May 2005

Posts: 22111

Posted: 02 May 2011 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
oh man i m confused who is who

wud read again and comment

The following 4 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoulBenNevis-Prashu-yoga23priya

danno

IF-Rockerz

danno

Joined: 07 October 2010

Posts: 8441

Posted: 02 May 2011 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
priya...HugTongueTongue
i just love  ur all os nad this is also one of them
amd hatts off to jhatka queesWink


Edited by danno - 12 May 2011 at 7:54am

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoulBenNevisyoga23priya

-Amri-

IF-Dazzler

-Amri-

Joined: 31 May 2009

Posts: 3401

Posted: 02 May 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
That was nice! Waiting for more.

The following 4 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoulBenNevis-Prashu-yoga23priya

yoga23priya

IF-Sizzlerz

yoga23priya

Joined: 06 November 2010

Posts: 10931

Posted: 03 May 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zash_LubUKriYa

Wow!!excellent intro. .waiting 4 d nxt part eagrly. .lub uuu priya ponnu. .

Azi Ponnu Hug

i am glad you like it Embarrassed 

Love you too Hug

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoulBenNevis

yoga23priya

IF-Sizzlerz

yoga23priya

Joined: 06 November 2010

Posts: 10931

Posted: 03 May 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille

ok the intro is sooo intrestingClap

i love the concept , Ramona dear love you for asking Priya to write thisEmbarrassed

n Priya dear plllzzz no more shila here, how can he marry anyone else when his soulmate is there in front of his eyes, Cry

but i have full faith in you(keep it haanAngry)
you will give us happy story it may be full of tears n slaps (for AviLOL)
but finally his soul connection should be right n above all things,
waiting for OS dearEmbarrassed

Jo Hug

all i can say is wait and watch Wink

u know my writing better right Tongue

love you Hug

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

PristineSoulBenNevis

Post Reply New Post

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Gunahon Ka Devta Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.