Gunahon Ka Devta


Gunahon Ka Devta
Gunahon Ka Devta

OS Love Will Find It's Way Completed SR on Page 20 (Page 2)

yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged

Avdhesh was walking in to his office with a flashing smile everyone women in the office was staring at him while he was cheekily grinning at them then she was about to take a right turn a girl who was wearing a  black halter top and blue skinny jeans came and hugged suddenly from back when he saw who it was he became angry and threw her down then called his body guard and the girl looked stunned named Nisha where as everyone in office neither they look stunned nor surprised it was daily entertainment for them yet women love him crazily.

"Take her from here and make sure that she will never step in to area where i am there " he said to his head security chief then he look at that girl and said "we are through Nisha and don't show me your ugly face again to me" Nisha looked stunned and tears were flowing from her beautiful eyes but quickly composed her self  

 "i thought you love me Avdhesh"Nisha asked him while he smirked and said "i never loved you and i will never love anyone in this world except her."

"So you used me right? " she asked him

"Yes"simple answer came from him without any hesitation while she smirked at him and said "Yes that right similar how you used Arpitha too and because of you today she is not there in this world " he looked stunned and then he slapped her it stunned whole office including Avdhesh too because he never raised his hand against women.

"Never Ever take my Pari's name from your dirty mouth also she is pure like angel unlike you who sleep for money with any man." then he removes money from his wallet threw on her and said "take this and get lost" then she picked the money and said "one day you will realize the true value of  her love" 

"one day she will forgive me and come back in to my life and just watch it " he snapped at her furiously then she was left from there before saying "if she comes then don't make same mistake like before." he stopped her and said " i am sorry raise my on you but you have crossed the limits and good bye" then he left to his cabin after winking at his PA Maya.

Once he came back in to his cabin and closed the curtains then tears started flowing from his eyes continuously.Avdhesh Singh Thakur the cold,distant and ruthless CEO never cried as he is crying today after that faithful day of his wife Arpitha and when she left him his whole world got scattered then took Arpitha picture in his hand and he started talking with her picture and it become his routine before he start working  

" i know that i destroyed our fruitful life and because of me you are not there is this world also everyone calls me mad because i became insane without you Pari and please come back to me " he cried clutching her photo "i know you will come back to me one day or i will come near you " he decided that no one will ever separate him from his love,his pari not even god 

His Pari she was one who brightened up my day. She was always elated to see me. She would jump on top of me to greet me hello. She'd tease me until I was truly a tomato color. She listened to my problems attentively and offered her advice and i lost her due to my mistakes.

He placed the picture on his desk before returning to the window but this time opening the window and climbing out to the ledge and He was the most powerful man in all of Lallanpur yet he couldn't have the one thing he wanted, the one thing that made him happy and now he was going to end his life.

He stared down at the ground and the crowd that was beginning to gather then he gulped being scared for the first time in a long time but his pride wouldn't let him give in. He closed his eyes and called out for Arpitha before falling.

Avdhesh opened his eyes when he felt the sudden rush of being pulled upwards followed by a gasp by the crowd below.

'Is this what death feels like?

His yes widened in surprise when brown eyes met mesmerizing eyes that were crying. Was she an angel that had come to take him to the next life? It couldn't possibly be the real Arpitha. 

" I Love You Arpitha and i know you will come to me back " then kissed he kissed her and fainted on her lap.

When he said her Arpitha then wiped her tears she was passing the company with her friend Simple then she heard someone shouted from the top of the building Arpitha and fell down but luckily he didn't get hurt after he fainted  that and girl looked stunned and many questions where going on her mind why did he called her Arpitha and mostly importantly he kissed her.

Before she would ask him anything he fainted then someone people from his office came to him but before they Simple pulled her from there.

Completed Part 1  

thanks for reading it Embarrassed

Waiting for you views and any mistake i'm sorry...feel free commentWink

Edited by yoga23priya - 13 May 2011 at 2:24am

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged

Me first!!! me first!!!...Yayy!!!

Update was

Wohhoooaa..Avi is such a machoDay Dreaming bt he slapped a girlOuch

He is still waiting fr Arpi...awwwCry

Who is the girl? Pihu??Shocked

Update it soon...

Ur 1st update created a suspenseLOL

me waiting fr next partEmbarrassed

Edited by prash_t - 06 May 2011 at 12:51pm

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
My Sweetu!!!!!!HugHug

Wonderful Part dear!!ClapClap

OMG!! Well I was shocked dat Avi slapped a girl...ShockedShocked

Beautifully written..It was if I was watching it on T.V. while reading it...StarStar

I am really eager to knw what will happen next...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Edited by jes_jade - 04 May 2011 at 2:33am

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Wat 2 say bout u di u r jst


i don't have words 2 say bout u n ur work

bas yahi dua hai ki aap issi tarah humare 

liye yunhi aise interesting OS laate rahe

or hum apke shaan mein or shabd jodte

rahe luv u alotttEmbarrassed

Edited by jasveensokhi - 09 May 2011 at 12:01pm

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Aziya IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Res. .hv exams 2mrw.wl cmnt latr priya ponnu

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zash_LubUKriYa

Res. .hv exams 2mrw.wl cmnt latr priya ponnu

Azi poonu Hug

r u not studying and tommorow is your exam Angry

u can comment later Embarrassed

love you Hug

Edited by yoga23priya - 02 May 2011 at 2:22pm

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
its really good dii
next part kab likh rahi ho

Edited by rubal223 - 02 May 2011 at 9:33pm

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Loved it...I was smirking when I read the begining...but when Nisha came in first I thought whats wrong with this did a fantastic job next of unfolding the truth...Avi was hiding his grief behind the flirt facade...felt bad for him when i tead his dialogues to Arpi's photo...but honestly dear jumping from the windowShockedShockedShocked...loved it when Arpi (with memory loss i guess) asked him the question...waiting eaaagerly for more...give youStar5 stars for youHug

Edited by Nidhsara - 02 May 2011 at 2:55pm

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