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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Chapter 1-Hamare Raaste Ab Alag Hai(Our paths are now diiferent)
*Runjhun*
It was over.He was leaving.I lost the challenge ..I was not able to make him my ideal husband.I failed.But I don't know why , I had this feeling whenever he was with me it made me feel like I was a Princess Embarrassed,like I was free ,like I was...in love ?!?! No thats not possible.I don't love him , I don't ,it was just a ...a..you know what I mean.Confused
*Guddu*
Im going now and she hasnt said a word to me all day.Well,what should I expect a grand farewell?She never understood my feelings for her , she never cared to notice the love in my eyes ,but most of all it hurt seeing she didnt care I was leaving.I mean if not husband&Wife We were friends.She must only be thinking about our challenge.Well ,Runjhun you have won this challenge.You may not havechanged me but i have fallen in love with you ,your charms and your bravery to face Guddu ShuklaHeart.As I always told you ,you're the quitest but the most clever.
"Im going now,bye" I said as I slowly walked out the room.She just slightly turned her head.Am I that bad that she doesnt even want to look at whem Im leaving.She is The Bhagonwali , she brought good fortune to everyone except me.She took mine away the day she never responded to the confession of my love.Broken Heart
*Runjhun*
What was happening?Why am I tearing up like this ? I turned my head because Guddu would have got the wrong idea if he saw me tearing up like this.He would think I love him too ,But I didnt...or did I? Let me not think of this.But then I saw him leaving.
I jus had this urge to stop him.
"Stop" i said
he turned around
"Its already 2:00 itll take you a while to reach home,eat and then go"i said
First he looked hesitant.
Then agreed
*Guddu*
Why did she stop me ? Shes making this SO hardAngry.But still I wanted to spend every last minute with her.She handed me the plate with my favorite dish Palak Paneer.
I ate slowly not wanting thismoment to go.But unfortunately it did.
*Runjhun*
In the wink of an eye he left. I felt my face getting hot,I felt tears in my eyes waiting to
drop.I couldnt help it I ran upstairs and cried my eyes out.Cry
(Chalte Chalte song playsCry)
*Amma*
I saw my bitiya crying.How is she gonna feel when people call her divorcee?When boys down the streer call her "used"? she must be thinking of all that and crying.I guess Ill have to do something and I know the right person for it.
------to be continued Chapter 2:Amma's shocking decision-----------


Edited by NaiiNa1 - 26 July 2011 at 9:38pm

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hey naiiNa1

I loved your fanfic. It was superb, the way you brought gunjhun's emotions to life

Please continue soon

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 4:15pm | IP Logged

Amazing start Naina1!! looking forward to ur ff... loved the wya u described their emotions... Keep it up!! Thumbs Up

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
thanx for the compliments guys ! Just a note that if I recieve less than 3 likes or comments per a chapter I'll end this FF.Also if it gets boring at any time jus look out for chapter 3 the best part is in that chapter

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Nice start to ur ff!! Please continue soon!!Big smile

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Naina...go on with your update its nice...
Update soon


Edited by sur001 - 26 April 2011 at 4:47am

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Very interesting.. Good one.. Smile Update soon,... 

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Posted: 26 April 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Naina...awsome start hun...you have begun from a whole new dimension of GunJun's story...these two are awsome at same time tough to write couples...do cntnu soon...waiting to know what our Amma will do

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