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Pride and Prejudice:Maaneet Style THREAD 2 (Page 55)

bhanu_rekhag IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
nice parts...
but seems like u r in hurry.. as u winded up every thing so quickly...

r u planning to wind up ur ff or wht...

dear give us some more...

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doosheeka Goldie

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
awesome as usual...

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felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Awesome updates
loved them all loadz
wow maan and geet got married
glad everything is fine
awww she gave both 2 baby boy 
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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gangesegb IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
all parts were simply awesome...
loved dem ...
plz cont soon...
waiting 4r nxt part...
tanx 4r pm

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tazzo Groupbie

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
awesome! Big smile...but thora jaldi jaldi nahi ho gaya sab? r u planning on wrapping this ff soon? itna kuch ek saath itna jaldi ho gaya ki it's hrd to believe

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nahtani88 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
All The Updates Were Superb
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM

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wajiha-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged


"Maan chodiye mujhe, Maan maine kaha chodiye mujhe"
"Aur maine sun liya"
"Sirf sunne se kuch nahi hota hai, baat par amal bhi karna padta hai.
Samjhe aap!"
Geet gave her husband an annoyed look.
It was Rahul's wedding going on.
The var mala rasam was to start in another half hour, but the var mala and the jay mala were no where to be found.
Geet was sure that she had kept it with all the flowers ordered to decorate the suhaag raat bedroom, but the room had been decorated, and the malaas gone missing in the process.
And there was no way that she'd be able to find them in time, cuz Maan wouldn't let her go!
"Mujhe pata hai ki jo tum dhoond rahi ho woh kahan rakhi hain"
Geet's head shot up at this.
"Aapko pata hai!
To aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya!
Chaliye, mujhe woh jaldi se dijiye!"
"Sawaal hi paida nahin hota."
"Maan tang mat kijiye!"
"Theek hai de doonga, par ek shart par"
"Kaisi shart?"
Maan whispered something in Geet's ear that made her turn beetroot red.
She looked away in embarrasement, refusing to meet his eyes, and shook her head for a no.
"Soch lo.
Tumhare best friend ki shaadi hai.
Tab tak puri nahin hogi jab tak tum meri shart puri karne ke liye maan nahin jaati."
Geet thought that she'll commit right now, and then refuse later.
So she nodded in a yes.
But little did she know that her husband could read her like an open book.
The wedding rituals were done.
Rahul and Pari were now happily married.
Maan and Geet returned to their room.
Geet was sitting in front of the dressing table, taking off her jewellery when Maan walked upto her.
He  started caressing and kissing her bare back.
"You really love to torture me don't you"
"Ab maine kya kiya?"
"Tumhe pata hai jab tum yeh backless blouse mein aur logon ke saamne nikalti ho to mujhe kaisa lagta hai!"
"Kaisa Lagta hai?", Geet asked, teasing him.
She knew he was over possesive about her.
That's why she deliberately wore backless blouses only.
She loved that jealous look on her dusht danav.
"Yeh jo aaj ki shart thi na, yeh isi baat ka badla lene ke liye thi!
Mujhe pata hai ki tum yeh sab jaan mooj ke karti ho!
Aur kyunki main tumhe kuch keh bhi nahi sagta, to tum uska fayada uthati ho!"
"Accha?", Geet said controling her laughter.
That was when Maan swooped her up in his arms, and threw her on the bed.
All her jewellery was already off, and the sight of Geet in her beautiful red sari with open hair were putting very very naughty thoughts into his head.
He pounced on her, ripping off her clothes, and taking his off as well in the process, and made very very violent love with her that night.
Geet was standing in the conference room of H&G, addressing all the architects.
They were discussing a highway project.
They had been commissioned to construct highways in the eastern staes, and connect them better with the rest of the nation.
She was just adressing the problems regarding the topography when the door opened and Maan walked in.
Aap yahan kai..."
but before she could finish her statement she had been engulfed into Maan's arms, and was being kissed violently in front of her senior staff.
People in the room gasped, and giggled.
But Maan wasn't ready to let go.
And then he lifted her in his arms, and carried her out and into her cabin.
He then threw her on the couch and then locked the door.
What was that!", said a breathless Geet.
"I'm just fulfilling the promise you made me"
So that's what this is about!!
On the day of Rahul's wedding Maan had made Geet promise that she'll let him kiss her anywhere in public, whereever he liked, and then carry her off in front of everyone to make love .
But she hadn't thought that he'd really do it!
She had thought that she'd wriggle out of it.
But alas, she could see that that wasn't going to happen.
And then Maan again pounced on her, for another passionate love making session.
Geet was now beyond annoyed.
It had been two weeks now to that silly promise, and Maan was holding his side of the bargain very well.
He'd just start kissing her anywhere!
In front of dadi maa, Annie-Arjun, Rahul-Pari, Yash-Meera, guests, staff, strangers!!
And he wouldn't stop there!
He'd then carry her to either their bedroom, or a hotel room, or his or her cabin at the office and make love.
And there wasn't a thing in the world she could do to stop him.
He was Maan Singh Khurana after all!
Her staff had started lauhing at her behind her back.
People would giggle whenever they'd see her, and all her friends and family members would openly pull her leg, all the time!
Even Nakul had started cracking jokes on the matter!
Roshni-Abhay, their kids, Shyla, Annie's daughter, and Manav-Maansi, Yash and Meera's twins, were all very confused at why everybody would laugh at Maan and Geet.
Maan would obviously not take such liberties in front of the kids, but the kids' questioning everybody about the reason of their laughter just cracked them up even more.
It had become the talk of KM, their neighbours, KC and H&G.
Frustrated, Geet marched into Maan's study one evening.
"This has got to stop!"
"Don't you act all innocent with me!
You know exactly what I'm talking about!
I've become the laughing stock of the town!
Everybody is laughing at us, all the time!
I know you don't care, but I do!
It's very embarrassing Maan!"
Maan looked at his wife's plight and decided to end it.
Though he had been having a lot of fun lately, he had something else on his mind.
We can end this!
If you give me another baby."
"Another baby!
But we have two already!"
"Yes, but Roshni is now eight and Abhay is four.
It's time to have another one"
Geet sighed, this was the only way out!
So guys,
This was the EPILOGUE
Let's just say that
Hope you enjoyed my FF
This your lovely writer signing off

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