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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
wow Awesome update
maan cooking some thing 
yaar jaldi update karo
he told only one choice is left
what ??????
pls cont soon
Say it with Roses - apricot, bloom, bouquet, buds, flower, leaves, pink, rose, spray

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aww, a very cute update! Thumbs Up

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Part 32:
 
 
"Kya kaha tumne??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", came Meera's deadly tone.
 
Yash and Rahul turned around, and came face to face with a seething Meera.
 
And she looked mad
very
very
very mad!!AngryAngryAngry
 
"HERE I'VE BEEN GOING CRAZY SHOPPING FOR OUR WEDDING, AND YOU'RE BUSY PITYING YOURSELF!!! 
AGAR KHUD PE ITNA HI TARAS AA RAHA HAI, TO MUJH SE SHADI KYUN KAR RAHE HO!! 
YEH LO, KISI AUR LADKI KO PEHNA DENA YEH ANGOOTHI!!!!!"
 
and saying this, she slammed the engagement ring that Yash had bought her from Tiffany's on the American chopsuey that they had been having, and walked out of the restaurant.
 
Yash stood transfixed, so she had really done what she had been threatening to do all along.
 
Fishing the engaement ring that he had payed  $50,000/- for, out of the gravy of the American chopsuey that he had been enjoying, he looked at it with a sorrowful face.
 
"Yaar, ek chauthai bank balance is ring pe khali kar diya tha. Agar use patakni hi thi, to table pe, ya mere haath mein de deti, ab in diamonds ke beech mein se yeh tomato gravy kaun nikalega!! Aur uske upar se meri chopsuey bhi kharab kar di!!", he whined.
 
that was when he noticed Rahul making weird gestures.
"Ab tujhe kya hua?? Mujhe laga tha ki sirf Meera ka hi dimaag kharaab hai, par tujhe dekh ke lagta hai ki tujh par bhi meri fiancee ka bura asar ho raha hai.
Main samajh sakta hun. Tujhe meri dosti mein kya kya jhelna pad raha hai."
 
"Yash shut up!!!", Rahul finally blurted out.
 
"Ab tu bhi Meera ki tarah shuru mat hoja!"
 
"You're SO DEAD MATE!!"
 
Confused at what Rahul had been looking at behind him, he turned around, and got the confirmation of his wedding being called off, written all over Meera's furious face.
 
"Oh SHOOT!!", he whispered to himself.
 
And without saying a word, Meera turned back the way she had returned, and marched out.
 
"Go after her, YOU IDIOT!!!!", Rahul yelled at him.
 
"Meera sweatheart, I was just kidding!!", and saying this he rushed after the category 5 hurricane that his pumpkin-pie had become, all thanks to him of course.
 
 
"Should we go after them?", Geet, who had been watching all this silently asked Rahul.
 
"No need! Let them sort it out.
Waise bhi un ke beech mein padne se humme hi chittar padne waale hain", rahul smirked.
 
Geet giggled and sat down to enjoy the American chopsuey that Yash had left behind.
 
"Hey look, he left behind his $50,000/- worth engagement ring from Tiffany's", they both threw back their heads and laughed.
 
Rahul cleaned the ring with his napkin and said
 
"May I?", as he held out his hand to Geet.
 
Confused, Geet nevertheless placed her hand in his.
 
Rahul winked at her and got down to his knee.
 
"O my dear!!
How shall I ever express the depth of my love for thee
Marry me , marry me and make me the happiest of men"
 
Shocked at Rahul's cheek, Geet composed herself and winked back as she faked wiping away tears of happiness and replied with equal dramatic effect
"Oh Rahul!! I thought you'd never ask!"
 
 
...
 
 
 
From a distance Maan watched Geet laughing and having lunch with that Rahul.
 
And if that wasn't enough fuel for the fire burning in his chest, he saw him get down on his knee and propose to Geet in front of everybody, and she accepted!
 
Maan formed a fist as he saw Rahul slip the ring onto her finger, and his eyes burning red as he saw them get up and hug.
 
The last thread of forbearance snapped, the fire in his chest burnt to a supernova, and Maan got up with murder in his heart.
 
 
 
 
So people,
That was PART 32Tongue
 
Hope you enjoyedWink
 
 


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Woow Great part dear!!!

Continue soon honey!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
wow nice update

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no offence here, i will rather see geet with rahul
my ego dsnt want geet to bend down for maan

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lovelyy part

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