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sur001

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged

We all were talking about Guddus is growing feeling towards Runjhun.......but never got Runjhun's feelings but today we caught a glimpse of her feelings in the precap....youn would have noticed they were really very close but Runjhun\ was  not at all nervous......rather answered with a sweet smile ......so I tried to capture what have I seen today in written piece........Give your views ........and do comment                                         

 
 
                                                 Love is making its way.......
 
Love is making its way.....
breaking the boundaries
I set for thee
But you make me sad
By the words which offend
leaving me think.....
Is this real or a mirage
 
Maybe real or a mirage...
But I wanna trust you
Give my heart to you
More than the colour or fabric
Of the gift you presnted
I am seeing ....in that
Is love making its way
 
I thought you will come
And appreciate my beauty
with your words
But you again broken my heart
By your words like stone
Then also I am assuming
Is love making its way
 
You dont trusted me
but blamed me of the crime
which I never committed
I can see more than me
you are in pain.....
Is this the way.....
Love makes it way
 
I unfolded my last card to see....
have you understood me even a little
and you proved me right
By trusting me
Your trust  made me feel
The story has gone far away
From challenge....and
I and you are in the way
to make we and our
leaving yours and mine far away
Is love making its way
 
Time has changed
I dont feel uncomfortable now
When you stand very close to me instead
I enjoy your breath.......
I tease you to make you work
But I have no idea
When I started flirting wid you
I assume like this only
Love makes its way 
 

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
sur

what can i say awesome

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
awwwwwesum work yaar Clap

Faaaab
Keep up d gr888 work dear

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Meri Jaan perfect....yes mayb just mayb our Princess has started feeling for her hottie prince charming .....your poetry is perfect for her situation......but i still want them to take their sweet time falling in love....not that they should drag this show for centuries

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Sur
Yea, first she made a place in his mind, now his heart &soul are next.
Its getting there.  He is already emotionally connected, & I think he was always physically attracted to her.  

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
perfect Sur

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sur001


More than the colour or fabric
Of the gift you presnted

...........

I can see more than me
you are in pain.....

..........
 
Time has changed
I dont feel uncomfortable now
When you stand very close to me instead
I enjoy your breath.......
I tease you to make you work
But I have no idea
When I started flirting wid you
I assume like this only
Love makes its way 
 


love your poetry sur001.  i just quoted the passages that i like most. 

"more than the color or the fabric of the gift you presented."

love this image.  as it is a beautiful sari.  but it's not the sari that makes the gift great.  it's the giver of the gift, and his intentions, that made it very precious.

"i can see more than me, you are in pain"

what better testament to love.  it has never been about oneself.  it's about the other person.

"i enjoy your breath"

yes, very much obvious.  this means that she is already moving towards a physical attraction towards Guddu, which is necessary for any true relationship between husband and wife.  Clap

really, i want to see runjhun checking out guddu, much like what mahadevi does.  we already know that guddu is physically attracted towards her.  now, all we need is for her to realize that she is physically attracted to him.

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Wonderful! Touches my heart! Tongue

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