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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutiepie12

it ws gr8...liked it alot


Thanks :)

I am glad that you find it great...

Thanks a ton :)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by a little faith

Those facebook quizzes.

I loved the title, very hip, relatable and intriguing.  Thank you <3 I am glad that you think so :)

The opening statements introducing themes of fatigue from holding at bay a feeling that wishes to flow freely through you.  I am tired...I am tired...I am terrified. I am in awe with you. I just wonder how you manage to see the hidden statements and words. Awesome!  I loved the dam you built stopping those deep, still and silent emotions that are upon a brink. Thank you. Glad that you think so :) Just one break, one crack and they will pour over, gushing profusely.  So true..must say, you are very observative.

I loved how you weave modern day distractions, facebook  quizzes into the age of old problem of is it or isn't it love? Aha...that was my plan! This was a new modern method to determine yet again 'love or not'...Those simple and seemingly harmless fun antics that upon a whim can become means to seeking meaning the the most urgent of matters. Some people do take those quizzes and even believe them! I often play with those quizzes [not like these one LOL]...but never believe them.

I loved, JUST LOVED, that colloquial style of the writing, so that we feel as though we are in her head, so as you peppered those retorts against herself, we contend against them too. Thank you. I just love to play with different styles :) I can't think of that word even. Do I lo-'.No And before I could possibly think anything, I said, "Even I want to go out with you." Nicely done! :)

I loved this tangent,
Sometimes I take quiz on me Just inspired which upon you add depth, here through self referential humour, But then, I went back into my profile and deleted the result. Excellently done. Ahh...you are flattering me :) *shy*

You so wonderfully, seamlessly, flow forwards so that a point of no return seems to have been reached,
We are not even friends! She doesn't knows how to tell him about her feelings. They aren't even a close acquaintance to try. Which you creatively contrive to have her corner herself into a conundrum. "hi, I am a girl who is crazily in love with you?" She, nor us, saw that coming!  Excellently done! So natural and believable and yet entertaining. Yup, she surely didn't see that coming. Thank you :) Thankfully, it is believing :)

Then that subtle change from her virtual world of doubts to the real world of facts. 
I always try my level best to cross his path and smile with my friends. That explains why I feel so contented when I see him or disappointed when I don't. Adorable moments!

I have a habit of looking at the eye while talking, and he usually stared back. I felt so shy, yet comfortable. Beautiful detailing that adds depth to the character whilst moving the plot forwards.  Skillfully done! Thank you <3 Actually, this line represents me a bit. I mean, i always look into the eyes of the person while speaking. My other friends are intelligent enough to understand when they need to break the eyelock.

I loved your end. Thankfully, someone doesn't complains :) Otherwise everyone wanted me to make it a happy ending.  For not only does she declare it to be love, but we too can see that in setting it free, it really is true love. Finally! That was what i really want everyone to understand. By not giving it a fairytale end, i wanted to prove that her love was true...and she was setting it free. I so love you for getting the exact messages. I wonder how you manage to do so :)

Excellently written. I am so glad that you think so <3 A wonderful characterization illuminating a theme that touches most if not all of us. I am happy that you think so. For i just love when anyone can relate to reality through my work.  Lovely.  Thank you :) With much love Sabah



Thanks Sabah, for the lovely reply.

It surely made my day :)

I replied to you in green :)

With loads of love, Mahak

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
OMGGG...its beautiful...!!!

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pearl10

OMGGG...its beautiful...!!!


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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
THIS. IS. AWESOME :D

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vaish04

THIS. IS. AWESOME :D
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I am glad that you find it awesome :)

Thanks a ton :)

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
amazing mahak. loved it ..
each person can identify with it coz all of us xperience this in our life...
amazing oneshot...
loved it to the core...
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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nasco

amazing mahak. loved it ..
each person can identify with it coz all of us xperience this in our life...
amazing oneshot...
loved it to the core...
Smile


Thanks :)

Thanks for loving it...

I am glad that you could relate to it with reality...

Thanks a ton <3

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