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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Those facebook quizzes.

I loved the title, very hip, relatable and intriguing. 

The opening statements introducing themes of fatigue from holding at bay a feeling that wishes to flow freely through you.  I am tired...I am tired...I am terrified.  I loved the dam you built stopping those deep, still and silent emotions that are upon a brink.  Just one break, one crack and they will pour over, gushing profusely. 

I loved how you weave modern day distractions, facebook  quizzes into the age of old problem of is it or isn't it love? Those simple and seemingly harmless fun antics that upon a whim can become means to seeking meaning the the most urgent of matters.

I loved, JUST LOVED, that colloquial style of the writing, so that we feel as though we are in her head, so as you peppered those retorts against herself, we contend against them too.  I can't think of that word even. Do I lo-.No And before I could possibly think anything, I said, "Even I want to go out with you." Nicely done!

I loved this tangent,
Sometimes I take quiz on me Just inspired which upon you add depth, here through self referential humour, But then, I went back into my profile and deleted the result. Excellently done.

You so wonderfully, seamlessly, flow forwards so that a point of no return seems to have been reached,
We are not even friends! Which you creatively contrive to have her corner herself into a conundrum. "hi, I am a girl who is crazily in love with you?" She, nor us, saw that coming!  Excellently done! So natural and believable and yet entertaining.

Then that subtle change from her virtual world of doubts to the real world of facts. 
I always try my level best to cross his path and smile with my friends. That explains why I feel so contented when I see him or disappointed when I don't. Adorable moments!

I have a habit of looking at the eye while talking, and he usually stared back. I felt so shy, yet comfortable. Beautiful detailing that adds depth to the character whilst moving the plot forwards.  Skillfully done!

I loved your end.  For not only does she declare it to be love, but we too can see that in setting it free, it really is true love.

Excellently written.  A wonderful characterization illuminating a theme that touches most if not all of us.  Lovely.  With much love Sabah

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 2:35am | IP Logged
awesome one mahak
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 June 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Thanks again to everyone. :)
 
As soon as my net works...i am going to reply to all of you :)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by monikaseth

absolutely fantastic one shot well said each and every girl and boy think like this awesome thank you for pm



Thanks :)

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I am happy that you find it realistic :)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yashu_arti

Loved it...it was very beautiful...great job...keep it up!missing mayur a lot..



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I am glad that you find it beautiful :)

Even i am missing mayur a lot...

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Ashi_KaJen..

u know Mahi..i loved ur OS..coz i cud relate to it...reason..well somethings r better left unspoken ..isnt it? ;)


Thanks :)

I am glad that you find it beautiful.

I am so glad that you think that it is realistic.

It makes me feel ecstatic to think that i am not the only one who thinks that these things do exist.

As a writer, i love when my readers have a smile on their faces while reading my one-shots or FFs or SSs etc. It makes me happy.

Thanks a ton :)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

Awesome OS
loved it loadz
thanks 4 da pm


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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

awesome one mahak
thanks for the pm



Thanks :)

I am glad that you find it awesome :)

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