'Moree Saanware'RaDev ki Kahan - Pt3/pg5, pt4/pg6 - Page 5

Part4:

Dev comes to his room, lies down on the bed, closes his eyes........remembers her words....."mujhe aapse baath karna hai.......guzaree hue kal ke baare mein" but before Radh could say anything chanda comes and disturbs........He opens his eyes,
Kya issi ke barien mein baath karna chahthi thi? trying to guess the reason...
He sits folding his legs.
par!!!!!!! as if not getting the clue  radhika kyun??......
Kya baath karna chahthi thi?

Takes out the feather, and looks at it.
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Radh opens her neeli chunari and smilingly takes her kahna out.......She blushes to her kahna and in great excitement says
Radh: Kahna! dhanyawad Kahna Dhanyawad...........patha hai! aaj mein kithni kush hun, Jab meine suna pauses remembers the words of Rohan" Mein nahi! Kahna, Dev bana tha"  ki, ki Dev hi mere KK hai mujhe tho woh khushi sambhayi nahi gayi kahna....Yesa laga ki meri saari khushiya wapas ek saath mil gayi ho....aur mera vishwas jeet gaya....in a very excited tone....
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apne mera viswas galat nahi hone diya kahna! Ithne saal mein unka intezar kathi rahi, aur jab aaj mere KK mujhe mil gaye hai.......yesa lag raha hai ki meri pareeshka ka phal mil gaya........still excited
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Aapne hi meri saari khushiya lauta di kahna. aphi ne yeh sab kiya kahna, Mujhe mera vishwas tutne nahi diya, aur har manzil pe mera saath diya and meri madad ki......... having tears of joys in her eyes...mein aapko kaise sukriya kahun kahna...
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she wipes her tears and comes to her normal self .....
Radh: Kahna, ab bas mujhe unse milne ka moka do kahna, mein unhe sab kuch batha dongi hamarein kal ke barein mein.....

Dev thoughts keep wondering, he is confused what to do now....
Dev: Kya mein Radhika se ek baar milne jaoo?
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Radh:........mein bas ussi pal ka intezar karoongi,.....bas ussi moke ka ithezar karoongi ki kab mein apne KK se milungi....
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Dev:..........par!! agar mein usse milne jaoonga tho kya woh mujhe galat samjhegi?
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Radh:........Magar Kahna! jab woh mere samne aayenge mein unse kahungi kya, kaise shuru karoon....Kya bolun??? feeling a bit nervous to what to say when he's infront of her.
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Dev: ..........hun!!! khun samjhegi!, woh bhi tho apne dosth se milne ko uthsukth ho rahi thi.....jaise mujhe ho raha hai!........thabhi tho usne mere baare mein poocha!!!  han! issiliye poocha hoga!!...
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Radh: Kahna! aap meri madad karoge na mujhe sach bathane mein, mere saath rehna kahna...
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Dev walks to the window, holding the feather in his hand.......looks at the moon...
Dev: Kismath bhi kaise kaise khel khelthi hai....tears comes to his eyes  Jab usko meine dil se chala, thab mujhe uska naam bhi nahi patha tha, aur jab mein aaj jantha hun ki woh khon hai aur mere kithni kareeb hai, mujhe usse yaad karne ka bhi haq nahi hai!!! tears just roll down his eyes........He raises his hand to front of his face, looks at the feather with teary eyes and gives a fake smile to it.....
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looking at the feather seriously, with teary eyes.....
Shayad! Accha hua mein apni dil ki baath usse kabhi keh hi nahi paya......Agar uske mann mein mere liye ehsaas nahi hotha tho shayad mujhe sharminda hona padtha aur yeh dosth kehelwane layak bhi nahi rehtha....

Dev keeps looking at his feather with teary eyes and Radh looking at her kahna with happiness ancipating to meet her KK. (RaDev music playing in the BG :)  )



Next morning:

Everybody very busy with their regular work in PH, Rohan and Dev get ready to go to Rawal mutt......they leave little bit early...
In Radh's house, Radh is busy with her chores......

They reach by afternoon, they have a look at the mutt, aftersome time they have their lunch and get back to their work..........its almost evening.......

Dev is excited to see all the places which he and Radh went and had fun........he wanted to see all those again and live in those moments again.......

Dev: he's little hesistant, if he'll lt him go that easily Rohan!  mein thodi der mein aajaonga.....thoda kaam hai..
Rohan: Magar tu ja kaha raha hai?
Dev: Bas! ..Mujhe ghat tak jana tha......mein bas jaldi aajonga...... he leaves..
Rohan: Jaldi aa jana.... Dev waves his hand

Dev goes to the ghat, goes to everyplace......

Here Radh is anxious, She feels the cool breeze, telling her something......she stares at nothing trying to know what's happening to her........Now her mind tells her she has to go to the mandir.......She is impatient now.......she wants to go.......She almost go to the door....
Shanthi:Betiya kaha ja rahi hai?
Radh: shocked to hear her mom's voice, brings her back to reality......Ma!!!....woh....
Shanthi: kahe bol nahi rahi...
Radh: Ma mein Mandir ja rahi thi.....
Shanthi: Mandhir!!!!!! iss samaih?
Mansa: Arre Ka hua! Jane do na chori ko! har waqt tokthi rehthi ho! mandir hi tho jarahi hai...
Radh is relieved to hear Mansa saying that...
Shanthi: Accha! jaake jaldi aa jana!!
Radh: Radh is very happy...Theek hai ma!

Radh walks very fast to the mandhir.......she reaches the steps and she hurries her foot steps.....she reaches top, goes inside and halts her steps and .................


Precap:
..........Tum?Radh breathing hard.....
.........Yahan??


Plz read it...😃
and comment how it was😛



Edited by NiHa24 - 13 years ago

Niha- part 3 and 4  was   enjoyable   felt like watching CB2... continue it   next is Radev 's meeting😍....

yeah Devika, 😆

wanted to change yesterday itself, but was in a hurry....so couldnt do it.
I've changed it now😛....

thanks.😃

Thanks blokes for the compliments.😳

but sometimes i feel so hard to pendown the thoughts clearly ......
esp the Part4......i had the senario in mind but it was taking hell lot of time to write it,.......finally finished as i wanted to...Hope u'll read and tell me how it was...😛

thanks.
Edited by NiHa24 - 13 years ago

Great Job NiHA
Creatives are getting ideas ---reading your kahani---
Like how you have incorporated different characters

thanks NiHa.. very nice update.... and  love the caption now...😛

wow dear awesome presentation of their inner minds..

Niha good work on part 4...........Iiked Devs regret and his excitement. 

Thnx Niha 4 this beautiful conversations.......... luved the 3rd n the 4th part. equally.......

Well done ...very good Niha..thank you so much..god bless you..
Edited by Kinara2 - 13 years ago