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LOVE AND ME?(AR FF)Ch 13: pg 44 (20/10) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!
Bechara armaan! Uska to bura haal hai!
Luv at 1st sight!
Mu-ra fight was 2 good!
Cont soon
Thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff!
do continue soon n plzz add me to yur pm list :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsum story dear..

simply amazing...

looking forward to it...

n do add me to ur pm list..................

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey there...just came across ur ff...I really like the refreshing idea behind this whole interaction in a bakery...for all you know the crispiest stories happen in Italian bakeries lol! It's got me gripped...and this was an exciting take on it...w8ing to know what happens hereafter at the hospital and I like how the title of your parts is pretty much the last line of the parts! Great going...continue soon and add me to ur PM list if you have one! I'd send you a buddy request fro convenience!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
nice one
luvd d ff so far
cont soon n plz do pm me d cmng parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi guyz.hope u didnt forget me. and plz do read and comment.it makes me want to write more and faster warna likhna bore hojayega. plz do comment.aur meri pm list meri buddy list hai. those who are there in my buddy list wo mere pm list me hai u knw as its easy .
 
Chapter 3:SHE IS DIFFERENT😕
 
In the morning-
 

In the gupta mansion

Mu:hai padma aunty.

Pa:hai bacchon

Ni:aunty ridzie kaha hai.kal usne humse kaha tha ki aaj hum jaldi ajaye.aur anjie kaha hai

Pa:accha. Wo to abhi bhi sorahi hai. Aur anjali to hospital gayi hai.wo senior doctor haina to jaldi jana padta hai.

Mu: thik hai aunty. Hum ridzie ko uski kamre me milte hai.

Mu and ni in ridzie's room

Mu: lo .ye maharaninto abhi bhi sorahi hai. Khud hame jaldi anekeliye kehti hai aur ya ye khud sorahi hai.

Ni:ha yar. Ridzie uth na. hamne plan kiya tha na shopping jane ke liye.

ri: sonedona guyz .abhi sirf 9 baje hai.

Mu:oye humari neend kharab kar subah subah khud sorahi hai.chal na yar.

Ni: ridzie uth

Mu: uth na

They tried waking her up but ridzie kept her head under the pillow and continued her sleep.

Mu: nikki. Ye sleeping beauty aise nahi uthnewali.ise muskaan chadda ke tareekhe se uthana hoga.

Then 1,2,3………….

Ri:aaa.bhooot

Actually they both found two masks which was very scary and went near ridzie face and when she slowly opened her eyes a little the following reaction took place

Mu:(closing her ears)ridzie chup kar.tuneto mere kao ki aisi ki taisi kardi yar.

Ni: han. Kitna jorse chillati hai.pata nahi abtak earthquake kyu nahi aya

Padma came running

Pa: riddhima beta kya hua.tum thik to hona.tum itni der se chillakyu rahithi.

Mu:wo aunty.hum log ridzie ko uski beautysleep se jagarahe the.

Ri: mujhe tum log neend se utha rahe the ya sachmuch duniya se hi uthane ki planning karrahe the.

Pa:tum ladkiyo ka na kuch nahi hosakta.chal riddhi ab uthja aur tayyar hoja.tum log aaj shopping ke liye jarahe hona.

Ri: shopping.nooo

Mu: oye. Tune hito kal kaha tha na

Ri:muski maine kab kaha.

Ni: are yaar maine shopping ki idea diya tha.

Ri: han.aur waisebhi mujhe thodi hi jana hai shopping.tum log chalejao na.

Mu: tujhe kya lagta hai hum log tujhe chodkar chale jayenge

Ri:lekin yar sone chodo na aur waisebhi kal se internship shuru hojayegi aur kal se sone  bhi nahi milega.

Ni: isiliye to kehrahe hai ridzie jaldi uthne ki adat dal le.warna suna hai waha ki dr.kirti mehra bohat hi strict hai,hitler tipe ki hai yar.

Mu:ha mujhe to abhi se uske sapne arahe hai.batanahi future me kya hoga.

Ni:accha ye sab batein chodo.abhi hume shopping jana hai.

Ri: mujhe nahi jana

Ni: ridzie tu shayad pehli ladki hai jo shopping par nahi jana chahti

Mu: han.tu women ko disgrace karrahi hai.pata hai women are known for shopping.

Ri: fine fine arahi hun.ab apni the great women and shopping wali lecture mat shuru kardena.pata hai sun kar na mai bore hochuki hun.

Mallik industries:

Rahul ,abhi and atul entering armaan's cabin.

Ra: hai armaan.kya karraha hai.

Ar: rahul.tu apne is evergreen sawal ko na apne paas hi rakh.jab dekho jab."hai armaan. Kya karraha hai" (imitating) ki gadi shuru kardeta hai.

Ra: oye.to phir mai kya  "hai babe.how's my sweetheart doing" aise bolu.

Ar: abe oye mjhe teri tarah samjha hai kya.look rahul I am a straight man.got that.mai un type nahi hu.u knw the gay type

Ra:to kya mai tujhe un type lagta hu.

Ar:kya pata.ajkal ke zamane me kisi ka bhi bharosa nahi.kya pata kab kaun meri izzat lutle

Ra: dekh armaan

Ab& at: shut up u two

At: han tum dono ki wajahse hum jo bat batane aye the wo baat batana hi bhoolgaye

Ar: tum log kya batane aye the.

Ab: armaan yad hai aaj bi arahi hai.aur kal unka brthday hai.hame unke liye gift lena hai.kal hi to humne decide kiya tha na.

Ar: are han.mere dimag se nikal gaya.

Ra: agar tere dimag me hamesha files aur buisness jaisi bekaar chise ghusayega to important chise to automatically nikaljayegi na..

At: rahul.kyu tu hamesha armaan ke piche pada rehta hai.

Ar: wahi to atul mujhe bhi samajh me nahi araha hai.mana ki mai handsome ,hot,aur sexy hu par cumon yar meri bhi kuch standard hai.

Ra: dekh armaan mai gay nahi hun.aur mai sirf ladkiya ke piche ghumta hu samjha kya.

Ab: enough guyz. Shopping mall chale.remember hame gift kharidna hai.

In the shopping mall:

Mu: nikki kaisi hai ye dress.

Ni: nai yar ye kuch zyada hi fancy nahi hai.

Mu: han. Mai dusri try karti hu

After changing

Mu: nikki ye wali kaisi hai.

Ni: ye bohat hi simple hai yar.

Mu: to wowali kaisi rahegi

Ni: nope.uski design kuch zyada khaas nahi hai

Ri: enough u two.for god sake hum llog hospital jarahe hai patients ko theek  karne naki rampwalk karne.jab se dekhrshi hu.(imitating)"nikki ye thik hai wo thik hai. Ye kaisa rahega" tum logo ne ab tak sari mall try karke dekhliya hoga aur ek bhi dress pasand nahi aye.merito puri shopping hogayi(she blasted off)

Mu:wo maiye leleti hu(she squeeked)

Ri: fast.hame dadu ke liye bhi gift lena hai.remember.

Mu: chalo hum billing ke liye jate hai. Leki usse pehle mujhe ek shirt leni hai uknw maan ke liye wo kal aaraha hai.

Ri: chalo chalte hai

On the other side:

Ra: guyz hum logo ne gift bhi khareedliya hai.chalo shopping karlete hai.waise bhi kitne din hogaye hai shopping kiye huwe..

Ra: hey.ye shirt kaisi hai. (about to pick a shirt when someone else also picked it up)

Mu: oye.ye shirt chod.pehle maine uthyi thi

Ra: o hello.ise pehle maine uthayi thi

Mu: maine na ise kahi dekha hai.

Ra: oh to mai abhi bhi yad hu janeman(flirtingly)

Mu:tu.tu wahi haina wo kambhakt cheap aulad jo mujhe line marraha tha

ra: tune kya galiya dene me phd lerakhi hai

Mu:kya karun tuj jaisa kawwe ka chehra dekhte hi khud mu se galiya ajate hai.

Ri: muski yar chup hoja.dekh sab hume dekhrahe hai.chal koi aur shirt dekhlena

Ra: o hello ye shirt maine pehle uthayi thi.aur waisebhi ye ladkiyon ka nahi ladko ka hai u knw in case u don't knw.mai ye kyu puch raha hu khud ladko ki tarah behave kart ho to ladko ke kapde pehanna normal hoga (he said insultingly)

Mu: mujhe pata hai ki ye ladko ke kapde hai mai tere jaisi andhi nahi hu samjha kya.

Ra: mai tumhe andha dikhta hu.

Ni: agar tum aur tumhare teeno dost men in blak ki tarah kala chashma pehenkar ghumo ge na to hame kya kisiko bhi aisa lagega ki koi andhe ghum rahe hai(nikki said getting angry at her friend being insulted)

Ab: ise style kehte hai.aur tum chaar foot  do inch ko ye sab kaise pata hoga

Ri:tumhari hieght dekhi hai. Tum kaunse amitabh bacchan ho.

Ar: o really hame amitabh bacchan nahi banna miss. Apne friends ko bolo apne limits me rahe.

Ri:(getting angry) tum aur tumhare friends tameez sikho. Tum logo ko pata nahi hai ladkiyo se kaise bat ki jati hai.

Ab: ladkiya. Kaha hai mujhe to kahi nahi dikhayi derahi hai. Kyu rahul,armaan

Ni: muski ab to mujhe pakka yakeen hogaya hai ki na ye log andhe hai.

Mu: nikki andhe hi nahi in logo ke dimaag ka screw bhi kuch loose hai

Ri: kuch nahi muski. Muhe lagta hai ki  inka dimag ka scrw pura ka pura loose hai

Ni: ha. Tum log sanjiwani me kal ajana. Hum tumhari koi acche se doctor se appointment karwa denge.

At: sorry girls. Hume tumse aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi.

Ni: chalo kisi me to tameez hai.

Mu: ha. Aap na apne in third class dodto se door rahiyega especially is gadhe se(pointing towards rahul)warna ye log apko ko bhi inki tarah bana lenge

Saying so they left for billing

Here the boys were staring at atul with murdureous looks.

At: kya hua tum log mujhe aise kyu dekhrahe ho

Ar: tu hamari taraf tha ya unki

Ab: ha. Dekha nahi kaise unhone hamari insult kardke chaligayi

Ra: aur is maha purush ko mafi mangni thi wo bhi un chudailo se.tujhe mafi mangne ke liye koi nahi mila tha kya.

In airport

Ar: guyz bi ki flight land hogayi hai.

Ra: tujhe kaise pata

Ar: mai pilot hu isliye

Ra: kya

Ar:abe sale. Announcement sunai nahi di kya

Ra: oh.

Bi: are baccho. Kaise ho.

Boys: hum acche hai bi.

Ar: bataiye bi apka yatra kaisa tha

Bi: bilkul accha. Pata hai ammy maine na tere liye dua bhi mangi hai

Ra: kaisi dua

Bi: yahi ki armaan ki jaldi shadi ho.

Ra: ohhh

Ar: chup kar. Bi aap bhi na. mai koi shadi wadi nahi karraha.

Bi: par

At: bi ye chodiye na chalo ghar chalte hai.

At night in armaans room

Ar: yar wo ladki aur iske dost kitne alag the. Ladkiyan  to hume dekhkar marti thi aur ye ladkiya hame apne galiyo se marrahi thi. Aur meri angel. Wo gusse me bhi kitni pyari lagrahi thi. Shutup armaan kya angel. No ways wo angel nahi balki chudail thi .had. she is a witch. A cute witch. What. No armaan no. par yar wo kitni different thi wo salwaar suit peheni thi. No armaan no don't think about her. Par SHE IS DIFFERENT😕

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
luvd d part
cont soon
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shaaz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear
awesome part
loved it
thanks for pm
plz countinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part. Update soon