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Part 1

"Savera ye dekho, TV par fair hone wali cream ka ad dekha raha hai, ayese karo ke tum abhi se le kar lagana shuru kardo, shayed Mehvish ki shadi tak kuch to rang gora hoga" Zarfeen ne Savera ke kale rang pe chot ki.  'Zarfeen ka zarf bhi kam nahi hai aur usko jo jhail le uske zarf ki to daad deni chahiye',  Savera dil hi dil mein ye baatein soonch rahi thi par lab hile nahi.  "Haan Zarfi, tum theek keh rahi ho, jab hum shaadi mein kisi ko batayeinge ke ye hamari cousin hai to koyi yaqeen nahi karega", Ada ne ek ada se kaha.  TV par drama shuru hogaya tha aur Savera use dekh rahi thi, jasie ye baatein uske liye nahi kisi aur ke baare mein ho rahi ho.  "Are is me itna pareshaan kyun ho rahe ho tum loog, koyi pooche to batadena ke chachi ne Savera ko goud liya tha" Saif ne kaha.  Savera, jo anjaan bani beithi thi, Saif ki baat par ek udaas nazar uspar daal kar chali gayi. 

Jab wo apne ghar mei dhakhil huyi to dekha ke Mehvish aata goond rahi thi, wo bhi kitchen ki taraf chali aayi.  "Kya baat hai, bohat khush nazar aarahi ho, Savera ko dekh kar Mehvi ne tanz kia."  "Haan zaalim ne batoon ke teer se dil ko zakhmi kardiya", Savera ne hansi mei Mehvi ke gusse ko taalna chaha.  "Kya zarorat thi wahan jaane ki?"  "Mein thora apne se aur thora phopo ke bulane par chali gayi thi," Savera ne mou banakar kaha.  "Inkaar kardeti," "tumhe to pata hai na ke mujhe nahi aata," Savera bebasi se kehne lagi.

Mehvish ko kya, balke sabhi ko pata tha ke kisi ke bhi kaam ko Savera inkaar nahi karti thi.  Aur phopo ke to mazay thay, jo bhi kaam karana hota, Savera ko bare pyaar se bulaleti.  Mehvi ko kabhi Savera pe taras aata to kabhi gussa.  Donoon me dosti bhi bohat thi.  Koi bhi cousin jab Savera ko kuch kahte, wo uski taraf se wakalat karti, jis ki wajah se kisi na kisi se larayi hojaati.  Aur Zarfeen ka kya tha usko to jaise Savera ko ehsaas-e- kamtari mei mubtela karne mei bara maza aata tha. 

Savera ko acchi tarah se yaad tha jab pehli baar Zarfeen uske rang ka mazakh ura rahi thi aur wo rote huye Mamma ke paas chali gayi, "Mamma Zarfi mujhse nahi khel rahi," "kyun beta? aapne larayi ki?" "Nahi mamma, kehti hai ke mei kali meina se nahi kehlongi!"  Mamma ko bura laga phir bhi kuch boli nahi lekin Dadi Ma se bardasht na hua, Zarfeen ko bula bheja aur usko khoob daant pari.  Dadi ma Savera ko bohat chahti thi, wo ghar ki bari beti jo thi.  Sab se ziyada bare potay aur poti pe hi unhey bohat pyaar aata, jiski sab ko hi shikaayat thi.  Baaz dafa to Zarfeen aur Ada keh bhi dete ke "aapko sab se ziyada Saif aur Savera se hi chahat hai," aur ye baat sach bhi thi.

Saif paida hone ke 3 saal baad jab savera huyi to Dadi ko poota aur pooti mil gaye aur dono unke ladle ban gaye.  Phir ek ke baad ek aur bhi bachoon ka izafa hota gaya.  Khushiyaan jaise jugnu banke aangan mei utarne lage, aur wo abhi dhang se khushiyoon ko samait bhi na paayi thi ke pairoon se zameen nikal gayi, jab unko unke bete ke accident ki kabar mili.  Unko unke jaawan beite Irfan ki mout ne toor phoor dia, Kabhi apni bewa bahu Humaira ko dekh kar dil beith jaata, jise kuch saal pehle hi bare pyaar se dulhan bana kar laayi thi, aur kabhi masoom Savera par nazar daalti jo ye sab batoon se beqabar khel mei masroof rehti.  Jab kabhi shaam me papa ki yaad aati to wo Mamma se aakar poochti, Humaira ke paas uski sawaal ka jawab na hota aur wo rone lag jaati, uski to jaise zindagi hi khatam hogayi thi.  Wo to jaise hansa hi bhool gayi thi aur ayese mei Zeenat banu ek maa ki tarah uska khayal rakhti aur Savera ko samjhaate huye khud hi zakhmi hojaati. 

Lekin waqt bohat bara marham hai, jo bare zakhmoon ko bhi bhar hi deta hai.  Waqt jahan guzarta gaya, sab bache bare hotay gaye, aur saath mei Saif ka Savera ko tang karna bhi barhta gaya.  Aksar usko Dadi Ma ki daant par jaati aur use jaise unki daant khane mei  maza aata.

Ek din jab Savera Dadi Ma ko apne school ka qissa suna rahi thi to wo bhi chala aaya, "Pata hai Dadi Ma? Aaj Amina ne school ke bathroom mei bhoot dekha, bata rahi thi ke saanp ki shakal mei tha," "Haye hai meri bacchi, tum kabhi na jaana school ke bathroom mei," Dadi Ma ne pareshan hokar kaha to wo sadat mandi se sir hilane lagi.  "Dadi Ma aap bhi khamakha pareshaan hoti hain, jab issay bhoot dekhe ga to dar kar sooche ga, ye to mujhse bhi ziyada kaufnaak hai," Saif ne muskorate huye kaha to Dadi Ma use daantne lagi, "Chup, jab dekho meri bacchi ke peechay para rehta hai," aur wo hanste huye bahar chala gaya.

Garmi ki chutiyoon mei choti phopo aajati to aur bhi maza aata, Savera ki waise sabhi se banti lekin doosti Mehvish aur Nida se ziyada thi. Jab teenoon milte to bohat dair tak baatein hoti, aur shaam ko aksar sab larke larkiyaan mil kar hansi mazakh kiya karte thay. 

Aaj bhi Zarfeen ki shamat aayi, uski dost ke ghar party thi, aur wo chehre par facial lagaye beithi Ada ko bhi saath chalne ko keh rahi thi ke larkoon ki toli chali aayi.  "Ye kis par zulm kar rahi ho," Saif ne andar dakhil hote hi kaha, "kya matlab?" Zarfeen ne poocha.  "Are matlab saaf hai, jab tum nikhar jaaogi na to jo bhi tumko dekhe ga apna dil thaam lega."  "To bechare par zulm hi hua na!", Faizan ne samjhaya.  Zarfeen muskorane lagi, "Yaar ab itna bhi na charrhao," Aqib ne apni behan ko muskurate huye dekha to kaha.  "Isme charrhane wali kya baat hai? Mei to hoon hi…" "pehle se chari huyi," Saif ne baat Zarfeen ki baat khatam ki aur sab hansne lage.  Zarfeen se bardasht na ho saka to wo gusse se pair patakti huyi chali gayi.  "Gussa dila dia na usko, tum loog bohat hi bure ho," Ada ne kaha.  "Gussa dilane wali baat bhi khoob kahi, Zarfi ke saath to gussa har waqt hi rehta hai," Zeeshan ne kaha.  "Pata nahi kiski kismat phoothaygi," Faizan ne sard aah barr kar bhudhioon wale andaz mei kaha.  "Lekin yaar, tujhe to gussa nahi aata, Kaisa bhai hai?"  Saif ne Aqib se poocha.  "Jiske saath meri kismat jur jaaye usi se pooch lena," Aqib ne pyaar se Nida ki taraf dekhte huye kaha to wo ghabragayi.  Mehvish aur Savera ko hansi aagayi, "tum loog se saath to koyi beith hi nahi sakta," Nida ye kehte huye sharmakar chali gayi aur sab larkoon ki hansi shuru hogayi.

--Amreen


Edited by amreen1409 - 02 January 2006 at 3:32am

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Part 2

Dadima bari pareshani se lawn mein taihal rahi thi, Mehvesh aur Zarfeen driver ko liye bazaar gayi huyi thi aur Savera ke college se ghar aane ka waqt hogaya tha. Ghar mei koyi larke bhi nahi thay.  Utne mei unko Saif ghar mein dakhil hotay nazar aaya to wo sukoon ki saans lene lagi.

"Accha hua bete tum aagaye, zara jaakar college se Savera ko le aana."  Dadima ne ek saans mei kaha.  "Mein kyun? Wo choti bacchi to hai nahi ke gum hojaye," wo Dadima ko sataane laga.  "Mehvesh aur Zarfeen driver ko saath le gayi aur tum se baat karna azaab hai, kya zara sa kya kaam keh dia ke fazool sawalat shuru kar dete ho, koi jang pe nahi behj rahi hoon."  "Savera ko laana koyi jang se kam nahi, usay dekhle to saare din ko maarna parhta hai."  "Bekaar ki baatein bohat hogayi ab jao, bacchi meri pareshaan horahi hogi, dekho mausam bhi karaab horaha hai.  Isse pehle ke barish shuru hojaaye meri bacchi ko le aao." Dadima ne daant kar kaha to wo kamooshi se bahar chala gaya. Unko jaise phir bhi karaar na aaya aur wo bahar hi intezaar karne lagi.

Thori dair mein Mehvesh aur Zarfeen bhi chale aaye. "Itni dair kyun kardi tum doono ne, tum ko pata hain ke ye waqt Savera ke aane ka hota hai."  Zarfeen ke chehre bhi halki si sharaat aur sukoon ki muskurahat chah gayi. "To kya hua Naani maa, thori dair hi to huyi hai, driver se kehdoongi use pick karle." "Nahi abhi rehne do, wo to accha hua ke itefaq se Saif aagaya, wo gaya hai Savera ko laane." Ye sunkar Zarfeen ki chehre ki hansi gayeb hogayi, ussey pata hota thori dair hojaane se Nanima Saif ko bhej dengi to wo jaldi chali aati. Mehvish ne kayi baar waqt ka ehsaas bhi dilaya tha lekin wo jaan kar bhi ajnaan bani shopping mei busy rahi.  Ab afsoos horaha tha lekin kuch kar nahi sakti thi aur naani se sikhwa karne lagi.


"Aap ko to bas Savera ka hi khayal rehta hai, hamare liye Saif ko kahin nahi bhejti."  Phir ghabra kar nani ki taraf dekhne lagi, apni himakat mein wo nani ke saamne ayesi baat kar gayi.  Koi aur waqt hota to Zeenat banu gusse mei bhi aajati lekin abhi dil-o-dimagh Savera ki taraf tha.  "Haan jab bhi tumko kahin jaana to mujhse kehdo, mein use bhej doongi, aakhar bhai hai tumhara inkaar nahi karega." Nanimaa ne baat khatam karne wale andaaz se kaha.  Bhai kehne se Zarfeen ka mou ban gaya aur Mehvish ko apni hansi rookna mushkil lag raha tha. "Ammi mera intezaar kar rahi hogi, mei chalti hoon" ye keh kar Zarfeen jaldi se bhahar ki taraf chaldi.


Halki halki boonda bandi shuru hogayi thi.  Savera college ki gate ke paas khare car ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur saath mei barish ka maza bhi le rahi thi.  "Poori barsaat mei nahaalo to bhi farq nahi parega, pakka rang hai jaayega nahi."  Saif ne uske peechay se kareeb aakar kaha to wo chonk gayi.  "Aap yahan?" Savera ne sambhal kar kaha, "haan Dadima ne hukum dia tha, inkaar to nahi kar sakta tha, aao car mei bheit jaao."  Savera peechli seat par beithne lagi to Saif ne tookh dia. "Saamne aakar beitho mein tumhara driver nahi."  Isse pehle ke wo aur gussa karta wo jaldi se saamne aakar beith gayi.


Car jab start huyi to gaane ke bol bhi shuru hogaye, "Keh do jo bhi maan mei aaye, ayesa na ho khamoshi mei sunne wala hi kho jaaye…" "Keh bhi do…" Saif ne jaan bhooch kar baat adhuri chori di, "Kya?" Savera ne ghabra ka poocha, "Kaunsi dunia mei rehti ho? Mein ice cream parlor ke paas khara hoon aur tum se pooch raha hoon ke ab keh bhi do kaunsa flavor chahiye, Savera raaste bhar Saif ki peechli batoon par kurr rahi thi aur usko aas paas ka bhi khayal nahi raha tha.  "Mujhe nahi chahiye" wo kehna hi chah rahi thi ke wo chalagaya.  Thori dair baad wo uski pasand wali flavor le kar aaya, aur wo na chahte huye bhi khane lagi.


Jab ghar mei dakil huye to living room mei Dadima nazar aayi,  jo un loogon ka hi intezaar kar rahi thi.  Jaise hi un do dekha kehne lagi "itna andhera hogaya aur…" "Haan mei Savera ko saath le aaya hoon adhera to hoga hi tha." Saif ne baat kaat kar kaha. Baat poori hone nahi dete aur apni bakwaas shuru kar dete ho.  Itna andhera hogaya aur mei pareshan ho rahi thi, itni dair kahan lagadi." Dadima ne gusse poocha. 


"Wo aapki chahiti ko ice cream kahne ka shok laga to delani pari isiliye dair hogayi." Phir bardbaraate huye andaaz mei kehne laga, "Na mausam dekhti na waqt bas bachoon ki tarah zid kar rahi thi, mere to saare paise karch hogaye."  "Nahi Dadima maine zidd nahi ki," Savera ne safaayi pesh ki.  "Pata hai mujhe, iski to bachpan ki adat hai, ye kabhi nahi sudhrega, tum kyun iski batoon mei aati ho, pareshaan na ho aur jao kapre badal lo, bheeg jo gayi ho" Dadima ke kehne par wo uth kar andar chali gayi.

TO BE CONTINUED THIS WEEKEND!

--Amreen



Edited by amreen1409 - 01 January 2006 at 5:24pm

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Here is Part 3 of Savera but I just remembered that I forgot to explain who is who in the story Ouch Sorry about that...


So here is the info:

Zeenat Banu (Dadimaa) -- The Head
She has 4 Children... 2 sons and 2 daughters:

Sons N their Family:
    Bare Papa (name not decided yet) N His Wife (Bare Mamma)
          Their Children: Saif n Mehvish
         
    (Late) Irfan N His Wife (Humaira)
          Only Child: Savera

Daughters N their Family:
    Bari Phoppo N Her Husband (Husband have no role tho)
          Children: Aqib N Zarfeen

    Chotti Phoppo(Khaleda) N Her Husband

        Children: Faizan, Ada, Zeeshan, n Nida (Nida is engaged to  Aqib)

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Bare papa ke dost ke bete se Mehvish ki mangni tay huyi thi, aur ab wo loog shaadi ki tareeq maang rahe thay.  Bare papa aur bare mama dadi maa se pooch rahe thay, Ek to sab loog jo bhi kaam hota dadi ma se pooch kar karte, aur dadi ma jo faisla kartien khushi khushi qabool karlete.  Zeenat banu ko apne bachoon pe bara maan tha, isi maan ke sahare unhoone ek aur faisala kar liya tha.  Lekin waqt aane par batane waali thi, ab to unko Mehvish ki shaadi ki tareeq deni thi, aur shaadi ke baad wo is faisle ke baare mein baat karne ka sooch rahi thi. 


Dadima ne tareeq de di aur jab choti phoppo ko bataya to wo bhi aane ki tayari karne lagi.  "kaun kaun jaaraha hai station, Khaleda ko lane?", Dadima ne poocha, "Sabhi bacche jaane tayar hai amma," Humaira jo kitchen mein masroof thi kehne lagi.  "Haan Khaleda anne se to lagta hai jaise bachoon ki to eid hogayi," Bari mamma ne kaha. Phir thore gante guzre honge aur sab loog jaakar choti phooppo le aaye, kaan pare awaaz na thi, har koyi apni apni keh raha tha.  Khane ka waqt hua to sab larkiyaan jaldi jaldi table sajane lagi.  Din guzar gaya kisi ko bhi pata na chala, bare se le kar bacchoon tak sabhi batoon mei masroof thay.

 

Mausam bohat accha ho raha tha, Faizan ko pakoroon ki yaad sata rahi thi, "Mehvish suna hai tum bohat acchay pakore banati ho, yaar apne sasural jaane se pehle khila dena."

 

"Sach hai nadeedoon ka pait nahi bharta, kuch dair pehle to khana khaye thay," mehvish ne yaad dilaya.


"Kya yaar, mausam hi ayesa hai ke pakoroon ke liye to jaga ban hi jaayegi," Aqib ne kaha. 


"Dekho mehvesh tum jab shaadi ke baad yahan aaogi, aur kitchen ki taraf dekho gi to afsoos hoga ke mere bhai kabhi pakoroon ki farmayesh kar rahe thay aur mei use poori na kar saki," Faizan ne jazbaat ka sahara liya, phir bhi bekaar raha. 

 

"Meri behan, mei nahi dekh sakta tumhe pachtate huye," Saif ne bhi saath dia, "utho aur tal hi lo."

"Phir bhi mei to nahi bana rahi," Mehvish ne chirate huye kaha aur phir wo Savera ki taraf dekh kar kehne lagi, "kabardaar jo un loogoon ki batoon mei aakar kitchen ki taraf gayi, tum pakore do to phir chai ki farmayesh karenge." 


"Bekaar hai phattaroon ke aagay faryamesh maarna, beharhaal, wahan bhi koshish kar le jiye," Zeeshan ne kaha to sab ki nazar Zarfeen aur Ada par parhi jo un logon ki paas hi aarahe thay. 


"Kya baat kahi yaar tumne bhi! wahan par pakore nahi jale huye koyle milenge," Saif ki baat par sab hanse lage. 


"Kya baat ho rahi hai?" Zarfeen ne poocha,


"pakoornoon ki farmayesh ho rahi hai, tum hi banado,"


"itne acchay mausam mei banana kya bahar chal kar khate hain," Zarfeen ne kaha aur sab to maan gaye siwaye Faizan ke,


"jab bhi baat karogi, kharche wali hi karogi,"


"to kabhi kabhi karcha karna bhi chahiye," Nida jo jab se chup thi kehne lagi,


"Faizan pait to tumhara khali tha abhi tumhari jaib khali karwate chalo," Aqib ne usko uthe huye kaha aur sab loog chalne ke liye tayaar hogay.


--Amreen


Edited by amreen1409 - 26 November 2005 at 6:11pm

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Part 4:

Sab larkiyaan bheithi apni apni college ke kisse suna rahi theen, ayese mei Ada ko apni classmate yaad aagayi. "Tumhein yaad hai Zarfi, Meri classmate Rabia, uski shaadi fix hogayi.  Uske kisi door ke cousin se, bohat hi smart banda hai."  "Hain!? Lekin wo to bohat kali thi na!" Zarfeen se ayese kaha jaise kaale loogoon ki zindagi hi na hoti ho.  "haan maine bhi ussey pooch hi liya, tumhein pata hai kya kehne lagi?" Ada ne maza lete huye kaha.  Zarfeen ko to ayesi batoon mei bara maza aata tha, "Bata bhi de yaar," "Kehne lagi: mohabat to ankhoon mei hoti hai," Ada ne mazakh urane wali andaaz se kaha aur phir dono hasne lage.


"Usme hanse wali kya baat hai, sach hi to kaha usne" Mehvesh ne kaha.  "Kounsi zamane ki baatein kar rahi ho? Saamne ki hi baat le lo, jo mamujaan ke dost ki family Salman bhai ka rishta tumhare liye laaye, Savera ke liye to nahi naa" Zarfeen ke ye kehne pe Mehvesh ko bara gussa aaya aur thora sa satpata gayi.  Savera jo beithi sab sun rahi thi, thora udaas hogayi par zaaher na hone dia.


"kaisi baat kar rahi ho?!" Mehvesh ne gusse se poocha.


 "Misaal de rahi hoon, tumhain itna gussa kyun aaraha hai?" Zarfeen keh rahi thi… larkiyoon ki ye baatein Zeenat banu ke bhi kaan mei parh gayi, jo wahan se guzar rahi thi.  Aur andar jaa kar larkiyoon ko gussa karna chah rahi thi, phir unko laga ke unke faisle ka waqt aagaya.  Wo wapis apne kamre mei chali gayi.


Doosre din Dadima ne sab baroon ko living room mei bulaya aur apne bare bete se kehne lagi, Farhad bete meri khwahish thi, ke mei Saif aur savera ki shaadi karoon.  "Haan Amma, aapki khwahish poori hogi, Savera ki shaadi Saif se hi hogi" Bare papa jo Savera ko kabhi baap ki kami hone na dia tha, aaj bohat khushi se keh rahe thay.


Daadima ki bhuddhi ankhoon mei aansoo aagaye.  Bete ne unka maan rakh liya tha.  "Tum kya kehti ho Safia," unhoonne bari mamma se poocha, "mujhe koyi aiteraaz nahi hai Amma, mujhe to Savera, Mehvish ki tarah hi hai." Wo ye kehte huye Humaira ko gale lagane lagi jin ki aankhoon se pehle se hi khushi ke aanso beh rahe thay, aur sach mei Bari mama bhi Savera ko beti ki tarah hi chahti thi, Mehvi ke liye jo bhi leti, Savera ke liye bhi le aati.  Sab bachoon ka pyaar dekh kar Zeenat banu ko apna chota beta yaad aagaya, aur unki aankhein Irfan ko yaad karke nam hogayi.


Do din baad mangni ki rasam taye hogayi, jab ye baat larke larkiyoon ko pata chali to Zarfeen ko chorr kar sabhi khush hogaye aur sab loog Saif aur Savera ko mubarak baad de rahe thay.  Savera khush thi magar dil mei darr tha ke Saif khush bhi hai ya nahi, use Saif ke chahre se kuch pata nahi chal raha tha.


Do din tak mangni ki tayari chalti rahi, Mehvesh ne apni pasand se Savera ke liye Light Pink color ka lehnga bayana tha aur matching ke har cheez ka khayal rakha tha aur ab bare pyaar se Savera ko tayar kar rahi thi aur saath saath Ada aur Nida bhi make up kar rahi thi.  Zarfeen sar dard ka bahana karke abhi tak nahi aayi thi, tayar hotay hotay shaam hogayi.  Aur phir wo waqt aagaya.


Living hall ko bohat acchi tarah se sajaya gaya tha.  Ghar ke sabhi loog moujood thay, phir sab ke saamne Saif aur Savera ko ek doosre se mansoob kardiya gaya.


Ayese mei Saif ne chupke se Savera ki goud mei ek chitti daal di aur Savera ne usse apne haath mei daba liya.  Savera ko is harkat pe bohat hairat huyi, jo bhi Saif ko kehna hota wo bina dare keh deta tha par aaj ayesa kyun kia?


Jab rasam khatam huyi, Mehvish Savera ko andar le kar chali gayi.  Wo dharakhate dil ke saath darwara lock karke jaldi se letter parhne lagi.


"Itna itraane ki zaroorat nahi, Dadima ke faisle par sar jhuka dia, lekin is ka ye matlab nahi ke tum mujhe pasand ho."


Wo ise baar baar parh rahi thi, baar baar parhne se tehreer badal to nahi jaati, usey yaqeen nahin aaraha tha.  Bohat dair tak wo gum sum beithi rahi, darwaze par dastak to sambhalte huye uth beithi.

Darwaze par Mama thi, Savera ka dil chaha ke wo unse lapat kar ro de, lekin wo ayesa kar na saki, uski lal ankhoon ko dekh kar Mama poochne lagi, "kya meri beiti so gayi thi kya?"


"Ji Mama, aankh lag gayi thi" wo chahte huye bhi kuch keh na sakhi.


Mama use lipta kar pyaar karne lagi, "ab tum so jaao, mei tumhein dekhne aayi thi, aur ye kya? Tumne abhi tak kapre bhi nahi badle.  Chalo jaldi se change karke so jaao." Mama ye keh kar chali gayi.  Savera ko pata nahi tha ke raat bhar use neend aayegi bhi na nahi, wo ye soonchti huyi bed par lait gayi…

 

"Aaj chupke se mere aangan chand utar aaya,
aankhoon ke fareb ne dil ko behlaaya,
chaaro taraf chandni si phell gayi,
khud hi se sapnoon ka mehal banaya,
kisi se kya shikwa karein hum,
jisko nakhuda kaha, wohi khatil nazar aaya,
apnoon ne khushiyoon ka taj mahal bana dia,
jeetay jee hi meri mout ka paigaam aaya."


Aur pata nahi rotay rotay uski aankh kab lag gayi.


--Amreen

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Part 5

 

Ye ayesi baat thi ke wo kisi ko bhi kuch keh nahi sakti thi, Na Mehvi ko na hi Nida ko.  Dil ko beqaari si lag gayi thi.  Kisi cheez mei dil hi nahi lag raha tha, maa ko dekhti, jo samajh rahi thi ke beiti ki kismat khul gayi, usay kya pata tha ke kismat khuli nahi balke phoot gayi thi.  Kabhi uske dil mei aata ke daadi maa se sab keh dein, lekin himmat hi na pari.  Ander hi ander gham khaya jaaraha tha aur wo din bhar apne kamre mei band rehne lagi thi, jiski wajah se wo beemaar hogayi.  Bohat shadeed bukaar tha, utar hi nahi raha tha.  Mamma aur daadi ma sab hi bare pareshaan thay, lekin uska dil tha ke zindagi ki taraf loutna hi nahi chah raha tha.  Sabki duayeen hi thi jo usay zindagi ki taraf louta laayi.

 

Shaam ka waqt tha, Mehvi uske paas beithi baatein kar rahi thi aur Zarfeen chali aayi.  "kya baat hai? Ye kis andaaz mei khushi manayi jaarahi hai?" Zarfeen se tanz kiya.

 

Mehvi jawaab dena hi chah rahi thi, "apna apna andaaz hai," Savera ne jawaab dia.

 

Jahan Zarfi ka hairat se mou khula wahan Mehvi ka chehra khushi se khil gaya, "accha to mangni ki anghooti ke saath tumhein zabaan bhi mil gayi?" Zarfeen ne kaha.

 

"kya dekhna chahogi?" Savera ne sukoon se jawab dia.  "nahi, tumhari zabaan tumhe hi mubarak" ye kehte huye Zarfeen kamre se bahar chali gayi.

 

"Zarfi ne to nahi dekhi, lekin mei zaroor dekhna chahoongi," Mehvesh ne haste huye kaha, to bohat din baad Savera ko bhi hansi aagayi.

 

"Chalo, itne din baad sahi, tumhare chehre par hansi to aayi," Mehvesh ne ye kaha to Savera phir bhi chup hogayi aur soochne lagi ke itne din se usne Saif ko dekha nahi tha, aur na hi wo use dekhne aaya tha, aur wo aata bhi kyun?

 

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Mehvish ki shaadi ki tayariyoon mei Saif ke dost bhi hissa le rahe thay. Aaj bhi jab Savera poudoon ko paani de rahi thi, dewaar ki aar se usey Saif aur Ali, jo Saif ka dost tha, nazar aaye, aur wo jhat se dewaar ke peechay chup gayi.  Par saif ne usey chuppte huye dekh liya tha.  Uske haath mei water pipe tha, aur Ali ne ghabrakar poocha, "Are ye paani kahan se aaya," Ali ki awaaz se ghabrakar wo chupke se pipe neechay ghaans mei daal dia.  Ali pareshan hokar yahan wahan nazar daura raha tha. 

 

"Dhoondna bekaar hai," Saif ne kaha. 

 

"Kya matlab?"

 

"Baas maqlooqat nazar nahi aatay,"

 

"koyi bhoot paret hai kya?" Ali ghabrakar poochne laga. 

 

"Milti jhulti hi kuch cheez hai" Saif ne shararti andaaz se kaha,

 

"Kya baat kar rahe ho, tumhe dar nahi hota?"

 

"Pehle pehle hota tha, ab to adat hogayi." Saif ne chupi huyi Savera ki taraf dekhte huye kaha

 

"Phir tum loog ghar badal kyun nahi dete?"

 

"Nahi yaar, ghar badal lene se bhi peecha nahi choregi" Saif apni muskorahat ko dabate huye kehne laga.

 

"Tum loog ki himmat par to daad deni chahiye," Ali ko bohat hairat ho rahi thi, phir wo aur dair tak ruk na saka.

 

Wo dono ke jaane ke baad, Savera deewar ki aar se nikal aayi. 

 

Usey Saif par gussa aaraha tha, "pata nahi apne aap ko samajhta kya hai?" wo mou hi mou mei barbarati huyi andar chali gayi.

 

Next Part to be posted very soon

 

Hope u enjoy itSmile

--Amreen

 

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Posted: 27 December 2005 at 12:28am | IP Logged

Last part:

 

Doosre din subah sab larkiyaan jaldi uth kar naashta bana rahi thi, Dadi ma ki khwahish ki thi aaj nashte mei bohat saari cheezein honi chahiye aur sab saath milkar nashta karna chahiye.  Bari phopo ko bhi bulaya tha.

 

"Savera Jao, Saif ko bula lao," Barimama ne table sajate huye Savera se kaha to wo jo itne din se apne kamre mei band, Saif ko kam hi nazar aarahi thi, aaj Bari mama ke kehne pe thora jhijakte huye Saif ke kamre mei usko jagane lagi.

 

"Zalimoon ne itne acche khwab se jaga dia, aur ab nazar bhi nahi aarahi," Saif ne ankhein malte huye kaha.

 

"Mujhe koyi shoq nahi ke aapke nazar mei aaon, Barimamma ke kehne pe chali aayi," wo ye kehte huye jaldi se bahar chali gayi.

 

Jab wo neechay aayi to Dadima usko ek sabar azma kaam de rahi thi ke wo phoppo ki family ko nashte liye bula laayein.

 

"Mehvesh ke maze hain jo dulhan bani beithi hain aur Ada begum apne kamre mei band beithi hain" wo apne aap mei barh bara ti huyi phoppo ke ghar tak pohanch gayi.

 

Wo jab phoppo ke ghar mei dakhil huyi to Zarfeen ke kamre se ghameen geet ki awaaz aarahi thi, "Dil ke armaan aansoon mei beh gaye," Savera ko hansi aagayi.

 

Kismat ka kehl bhi accha tha, kisi ko mil jaane ka roona tha to kisi ko kho jaane ka gham khaye jaaraha tha. Wo soonch rahi thi ke andar jaaye ya wapis lout jaaye.

 

"Are Savera tum, ander aao!"  Aqib uski kashma kash se bekabar use ander aane ko keh raha tha.

 

"Nahi mei nikalti hoon, nashte par Dadima sab ka intezaar kar rahi hain, yehi batane aayi thi," kehte huye wo wapisi ki liye palat gayi.

Shaam ko Mehvi ko mayoon bitha dia gaya.  Sab larkiyaan ek jaise yellow color ke kapre pehne huye thay.

 

"Kaali karayi mei peela bhajiya," Saif ne Savera ke kareeb se guzarte huye kaha, to Savera ko laga jaise Saif ne uska dil apni mutthi mei lekar masal dia.

 

Wo khamooshi se apne kamre mei jaakar kapre badal aayi.

 

"Kya hua, tumne kapre kyun badal liye?" Nida ne poocha.

 

"Sab se alag nazar aana chah rahi hogi," Zarfi ne mou banate huye kaha.

 

Savera kamooshi se sab ki baatein sunti rahi, aur nazar aandaaz karte huye Mehvi ke paas jakar beith gayi.

 

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Aaj Mehndi wala din tha, Sab loog larke waaloon ke ghar gaye thay lekin Savera Mehvish ke saath hi thi.  Wo Saif aur Zarfeen ki nazroon aur taanoon se bachna chah rahi. Wo Mehvish ke paas beithi apne hi khayaloon mei khoyi huyi thi.

 

"Zarfi, apni khoobsurti ka raaz doosroon se bhi to share kia karo, jinhein sakt zaroorat hai," Saif ne Savera ko dekhte huye Zarfeen se kuch dair pehle jo baat kahi thi, Savera ke kaanoon mei abhi tak goonj rahi thi.

 

"Chacchi ko agar goud hi lena tha to kisi dhang ki larki ko goud lete…"

 

"Kaali karayi mei peela bhajiya,"

 

"Kapre rang dekh kar pehne jaate hain, aur gulabi aur kala rang bhi koyi jorr hai?" Saif ne Savera dekh kar bhi na dekhte huye mangni waali shaam kaha tha.

 

Aur uski wo chitti: "Itna itraane ki zaroorat nahi, Dadima ke faisle par sar jhuka dia, lekin is ka ye matlab nahi ke tum mujhe pasand ho."

Usey saari baatein yaad aarahi thi aur har baat uske dil par teer ki tarah chubne lagi. 

 

Wo kuch laaney ke bahane uth par apne kamre mei chali gayi aur phir wapis nahi aayi.

 

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Subah se hi wo yahan se wahan phir rahi thi, kabhi koyi kuch kaam kehta to koyi kuch, haal behaal tha.  Mehvi pe uspar bara taras aaraha tha.

 

"Savera, Zara Saif ki almari se uske kapre nikal kar, bed par rakh aao, ab mujhse upar chara nahi jaata, aur ye larka khud se to nikale ga nahi." Bari mamma ne kaha to wo Saif ke kamre mei chali aayi.

 

Almaari kholi to saamne ek dairy nazar aayi.  Wo use nazar andaaz chah rahi thi magar uski nazar Diary ke cover ke phool par parhi jis pe Savera ka naam bohat hi acchay andaaz mei likha tha. 

 

Wo bekhayali mei diary ko utha kar kholne lagi, Pehle hi Safhe par uski mangni wali din ki close up photo thi, aur phir har entry mei usi ki beshumar baatein thi, har din ke date ke saath. 

 

Wo jaldi hi mangni wale din ki entry parhne lagi, jisme Saif ne poora safa uski tareef mei bhar dia tha. 

 

"Aaj Savera bohat hi pyaar lag rahi thi, mujhe accha nahi lag raha tha ke itni khushi wale din meine uska dil bedardi se toora.  Lekin ayesa karna bhi zaroori tha, Savera ki har adat bohat acchi hai lekin uski ek adat par mujhe hamesha se gussa aata ke wo har kisi ki baat khaaz kar Zarfeen ki har baat khamooshi se sun leti.  Zarfeen jo use ehsaas-e kamtari mei laati rahi aur Savera uska shikaar hoti rahi, mei usey is kamtari se bahar laana chah raha tha.  Mujhe pata hai ke wo mujhe bohat galat samajhti hai, magar us nadaan ko pata nahi ke mei usse bachpan se bohat pyaar karta hoon lekin kabhi izhar na kar saka.  Aur abhi ek ek pal ka intezaar mei guzarta hai, soonchta hoon ke wo meri kab hogi aur meri mohabat ko jaanne lagegi.  Magar ek baat to hai, ke usey tang karne mei bohat maza aata hai!"

 

Ye parh kar Savera muskuraane lagi, phir kuch papers ulat kar dekhe.

 

"Savera bemaar hogayi, uska zimedaar mei hoon…"

 

aur bhi papers pe kuch likha tha. Ye tehreer pe use hansi aagayi, "mujhe lag raha hai ke mera dose asar kar raha hai, Zarfeen ki shammat ke din shuru hogaye."

 

Savera ka dil chahraha tha ke sab kaam chorr kar wo diary hi parthi rahe, magar ye soonch kar rakh dia ke Saif ki diary, Saif ki tarah uski apni hi hain.

 

Wo wapis kamre se nikalne lagi to uske chehre pe muskorahat thi, aur wo taizi se barhne lagi aur ek dam hi Saif se takra gayi jo kamre mei dakhil horaha tha.

 

"Tum mere kamre mei kya kar rahi ho? Abhi se hi apna haq jamane lagi?"

 

"Bari mamma ne kapre rakhe ko kaha to chali aayi." Wo batane lagi.

 

"Pata nahi mamma bhi tumse mera kaam kyun leti hain?" Saif ne bezaargi se kaha

 

"Kyun aapko pasand nahi?" Savera ne poocha

 

"Haan, yehi samajh lo!"

 

"Theek hai, mei daadima se jaakar keh deti hoon, ke mei aapko pasand nahi,"

 

"Arey, marwaoogi kya? Maine ayesa kab kaha?"

 

"Soonchti hoon ke har waqt to napasand hone ka ehsaas dilate rehte hain, aaj to faisla hojaana chahiye!" wo ye keh kar jaane lagi to Saif uska haath pakar kar use rukhne laga.

 

"Ayesa gazab to na karo, mei to mazakh kar raha tha."

 

Savera apna haath choorate huye udaasi se kehne lagi, "aapko pata hai, aapke is mazak se kitna dil toote hai?"

 

"Kis kis ka dil toota ye mei nahi jaanta, lekin Zarfi ka dil to toot kar bikar gaya, itna mujhe pata hai" Saif Savera to tang karne ke liye afsoos se kehne laga.

 

"Tu aap samait lete," Savera ne shoqi se kaha.

 

"Bekaar hai, itne din tak to jal jal ke khaak ban gaye honge." Is baat par dono hansne lage.

 

Saif ne hairat se poocha, "Akhir baat kya hai, aaj itni badli badli si kyun lag rahi ho?"

 

"Kisi ki diary jo parhli hain" Savera ne chalaki se kaha.

 

"Accha! Tabhi mei kahoon ke aapki aankhein sharam se itni kyun jhuki jaarahi hain" Saif se shouki se kaha to wo sharmate huye neechay ki taraf bhaag gayi.

 

--Amreen



Edited by amreen1409 - 27 December 2005 at 12:34am

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