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To Armaan Sir with Hate( from who else)

alien_visitor Senior Member
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Posted: 18 February 2005 at 11:52pm | IP Logged

Hey Guys, I could hear all of you saying, Not again...Not another poem, But the impulse was killing me...So here's one from Jassi to her Armaan Sir with Love or Hate...

 

It wouldn't have burnt me thus

If you had swooped like a vulture

Rather perching like a sparrow...

 

If you had stung like a poison ivy

Rather shining like the morning glory...

 

If you had torn like the hounding foes

Rather singing friendly tunes...

It wouldn't have burnt me thus...

 

Yet still in this inky dark

I could spot a dawn, a spark...

 

When the sky lightens with

The Rising of the Phoenix

I will up and fly again

From the depths of my own ashes...

loveneha_r Goldie
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Posted: 19 February 2005 at 1:16am | IP Logged
thats pretty cool alien_visitor!
Daisy Senior Member
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Posted: 19 February 2005 at 1:56am | IP Logged
That was so beautiful alien_visitor!
It felt like I was reading Jassi's mind.
aniifuzz Groupbie
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Posted: 19 February 2005 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Wow, that was just so beautiful. Thanx for offering such a great read.
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Posted: 19 February 2005 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Wow, that was astoundingly beautiful. Thank you for offering such a great read! Clap 
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Posted: 19 February 2005 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Hey sorry about repeating myself, my internet just went haywire and i didn't realise the first message had been posted!Tongue But I seriously loved your poem alien_visitor
smita24 Goldie
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Posted: 19 February 2005 at 4:48am | IP Logged
that was great. But i love Armaan. Cry
nishi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 19 February 2005 at 5:13am | IP Logged
THAT WAS GREAT !!!!!! Clap Clap

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