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Originally posted by arjun_dez

loved it... waitin to read the next part!!!!!
pm me wen ur next updateis ready.......wit the link!!!!!  Smile
thnk u glad u liked it i will do and wid da link alsoTongue

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Wow Zakia......... that was superb..........the way you are expressing Sarja's feelings is really good........ gosh what a cliff hanger....... eagerly waiting to read your next update....... continue soon......

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Originally posted by sujji0609

Wow Zakia......... that was superb..........the way you are expressing Sarja's feelings is really good........ gosh what a cliff hanger....... eagerly waiting to read your next update....... continue soon......
aww thnk u glad u liked itTonguei shall do LOLu knw cliffhangers twists and suspence have bin on my every ff i have written and da oder forum where i am on 2 sab used 2 be anxious and wanted 2 knw wat happens next dis way da story be's mre intresting dnt u agree

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hey zakia sorry im repling late
read the part
was really great
wow u expreesed sarja's feelings 2 well
i liked also the phone convo b2in chandni
waiting 4 next
love yaa
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Originally posted by _Monu_

hey zakia sorry im repling late
read the part
was really great
wow u expreesed sarja's feelings 2 well
i liked also the phone convo b2in chandni
waiting 4 next
love yaa
mmuuaahh
hey monu no need 2 say sorry ever take ur time n reply i dnt mind glad u liked it hope u like da rest 2 luv u 2 Tongue

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                                                 chapter 3
 
niru luks on in shock which turns 2 terror as she is faced wid a drunk luking sarja who is shown wet through in da rain also he continues 2 starte intensly niru luks at him wid fear recalling da incident dat tuk place a few days ago she gulps and hugs herself tightly which sarja notices he remains stood der as niru luks around at da deserted road but like last time no one was around she luks at sarja and tears well up in her eyes as she stares at him waitingly he finally approches her slowly niru twists her duppata in her hand shivering wen he is only inches apart he stops before her a gasp leaves nirus mouth as she bites her lips both continue 2 stare at eachoder 4 a short while sarja briefly luks away b4 speaking in a drunk voice woh mein tere ko niru luks at him in fear as sarja luks at her us raat na sarja puts his hands through his wet hairDay Dreamingniru shakes wid fear b4 luking around again at da deserted road thunder strikes making niru jump widout realising she grabs sarja and closes her eyes sarja luks at niru in suprise as she holds onto his arm shivering he luks at her sadly 4 a while as da thunder stops wid da rain also a strong wind blows niru opens her eyes shocked at wat she has dne she stumbles bk luking at sarja still in fear his face softens as he opens his shirts buttons hawwwLOL
 
nirus eyes pop open in disbelief as sarja trys opening his buttons but struggles as he is drunk and one arm is wounded niru shivers and holds her duppata even more tightly as sarja finshes opening da buttons he takes off his shirt Tonguehe luks at niru before approching her niru struggles 2 say anything she backs away her hand infrnt of her as she finally manages 2 say hum sey dhoor hatiyeh sarja continues 2 walk near her hum ney kaha na aap humsey dhoor haityeh a sob escapes her mouth as tears flow dwn her face she luks around once again which sarja notices as she cums 2 her sense she flee's frm der occasionally luking bk at sarja who's face expression turns 2 fury as he flings his shirt dwn in anger she had misunderstood him yet again he had only wanted 2 give his shirt 2 her and da payal he had in his pocket he tuk it out of his jeans and luked at it b4 closing his fist in anger as her scared face flashed b4 him
 
as da previous nite niru runs bk 2 her sisters house in fear as she reaches da house she stops outside and grabs da wall 4 support she gasps as she holds her hand 2 her heart which is racing like mad as sarja's image flashes b4 her eyes she luks terrified she manages 2 compose herself knwing dat last time albela and her sister were suspicious she stays stood outside da house getting herself 2gether and thinks 2 herself as 2 wat she shud do she cant cant tell her baba as he is nt well her sister also as der is no point instead she will give taney 2 her and chandu he isnt here she cant worry him she closes her eyes letting out a sigh as she opens her eyes again she thinks 2 herself hum aaj sey ghar wapas akhele nahin ayengey she luks into da middle of da night wid a far away luk wishing chandu was here how she was missing him she enters da house luking normal as she can as she walks 2wards her room
 
sarja is shown at his drinking den getting mre drunk remembering niru's terrified face he drinks mre n mre as his mates luk on in concern and ask him da matter sarja ignres den pakiyah cums near him saying sarja kya huwah tujhe aaj kitni peeyega sarja luks at pakiyah in an annoyed away b4 speaking in a slurred way dekh pakiyah tu na aaj kal bohat bolney laga hain mein kitni daroo peta hai tere ko kya hai chal tum sab meri sey dhoor hatao as he says dat he remembers niru saying da same thing 2 him he carries on drinking b4 passing out on da table leaving his friends shocked as well as upset they support him out of da drinking den knwing dat they cant take him hme in dis state instead they take him 2 pakiyah's house as they get der they lay sarja dwn b4 leaving da room they talk amoungst demselves saying sarja ki kyal halat hogaye hai bilkul badal gaya hain they luk upset as well as annoyed another gang member speaks pata nahin aaj isey kya hogaya mujhe lagta hai woh ladki kya naam hain uska wow nirupama haan wahi us ka koi chakar hai sarja mana na woh usey pyaar karta hain aur uski halat dekh humey kuch karna chahiyeh they all start thinking as pakkiyah says mujhe par chor do mein bata ta hoon kya karney ka hai
 
a new day begins
 
as b4 since da first incident wid sarja and nw last night she is shaken up but she pulls herself 2gether and carries on wid her normal routine making breakfast 4 her n her baba going 2 work but 2day was differnt chandu was cuming bk so she put everthing 2 da back of her mind as she beamed on da oder hand sarja gt up wid a hangover nt knwing wat happened last night it slowly came bk 2 him as he grabbed his head in pain and luked angry wat was he doing he started cursing himself out loud at his behaviour kya ho raha hain mujhe kyun mein us ladki sey mila kyun he punches da bed in anger as his pakiyah comes inside da room and stand b4 him sarja luks at him briefly b4 saying kya baat hai pakiyah aise kyun dekh raha hai dekh mere sar mein dard hai zyaada bak bak nahin karney ka samjha pakiyah nods teek haiin sarja tu sirf pe abhi he passes a chai ki pyali 2 sarja as sarja takes it and drinks cringing eachtime as he finishes it sarja says sala tu chai pela raha hai ya zeher she holds his throat as pakiyah laughs kya sarja mein teri ko zeher deyga he sits dwn beside him both remain silent as pakiyah speaks dekh sarja mujhe tumsey ek baat karni hain sarja listens quietly as pakiyah says mein tera bachpan ka dost hain na tere ko mein bohat samjhta hai mein jaanta hain sarja tu us ladki sey pyaar karta hai aur tumney khud bhi bataya sarja luks hurt as he is in deep thought dekh sarja us ladki ko batadey teri dil ki baat he luks at sarja who remains silent b4 speaking pakkiyah bas kar he gets up ready 2 leave dekh bohat der hogaye hain mujhe chalna chahiyeh pakiyah gets up sarja baat toh sun sarja touches pakiyah's shhoulder shaking his head his eyes torn he walks away leaving pakiyah in thought
 
night cums niru finishes her shift luking restless glancing at da clock chandu must be here soon she cudnt wait but new she wud only be able 2 speak 2 him on da phne as its really late she had 2 wait till 2mmrw which made her sad but she new his family had da right 2 see him first she cud wait gradually everyone left leaving niru all alone she finished up quickly b4 turning 2 leave wen suddenly da lights went off Shockedniru froze 4 a minute b4 speaking lights ko kya huwah wen no reply came niru gt fed up and started walking around searching 4 da door 2 leave wen suddenly she bumped into a figure a scream escaped her mouth as a hand clamped her mouth shut niru lashed out trying 2 move away frm da figure wen suddenly da lights came on niru luked up at da figure in shock as she is faced wid chandu who has a cheeky grin on his face niru luks at him in disbelief LOL
 
niru luks at chandu in disbelief aap chandu grins cheekily as niru frowns aap ney toh aaj hamari jaan hi nikal ni ti chandu laughs out loud b4 hugging niru tightly he frown turns 2 a smile as chandu says kaise jaati tumhari jaan toh meri paas hain niru blushes b4 turning around 2 face him lekhin aap khab aye humney toh socha ta key hum kal mileygey aap ghar nahin gaye kya chandu smiles at her as niru says kya huwah aise kyun dekh rahey hain mujhe chandu shakes his head tumahri bohat yaad arahi ti na isliyeh hum yaha agaye niru blushes as chandu says actually mein tumahri liyeh ek toofa laya hoon niru smiles ek toofa kya hai chandu smiles and says rukho he pulls out a small box and passes it 2 niru she grabs it b4 luking at chandu saying is mein kya hai chandu says khud hi dekh lo niru opens da box slowly as a beautiful ring is shown niru luks at chandu in shock yeh aapp hamari liyeh laye hain chandu nods haan kaise lagi niru smiles bohat achi lekhin is ki kya zaroorat hain chandu shakes his head zaroorat hain na he gets dwn on one knee confusing niru as he says niru kya tum mujhse shaadi karo gi niru luks at chandu emotinally as tears flow dwn her face
 
chandu luks at niru wid affection jaldi sey batado meri tangoo par taras khao niru laughs outloud as she nods chandu smiles wid joy as he puts da ring on her finger b4 getting up chandu wipes away niru's tears b4 saying arey agar humey yeh pata ta key tum dukhi ho kar humsey shaadi key liyeh haan karogi toh hum nahin poochti he kisses her forehead as niru says nahin aise baat nahin hai humney sapney mein bhi yeh nahin socha key aap chandu cuts her off and says niru lekhin maine har sapney mein yeh dekha he smiles at niru ab sirf hamari ghar walo ko batana baaki hai aur phir hamari shaadi niru luks at chandu wid affection lekhin hamari baba chandu smiles and says baba ki chinta mat karo niru mein hoon na baba hamari saath hi reheygey teek hain both get emotinal as they hug eachother da screen goes blurry hamari choti readers samjhe lo kya huwah hogaLOL
 
ok im finished was gnna write sum mre but am tired agla update next weekend LOLas i am getting reminders 2 finish off my oder 2 ff's dat i have left untouched fikar mat karo i wnt leave dis one i shall try nt 2 Embarrassedi hope u like da update i was confused as 2 which angle 2 take it but as usma sed i shall write it how i want da serial 2 proceed wid
 thnks usma enjoy reading everyoneTongue
 


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