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maris08

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
The following words from saavan POV, is reply to Su's post at Saavan FC.In essence its the contiuation poem of Hua ki nahin.Read and enjoy.leave comments here as well as at Saavan FC plz. Thanz.
 
 
 

Nahin Shravan ji

 Imagination nahin chalega - humeh proof chahiye in the form of nanha munna/minnui LOL

Haaaaahaaa ..Mujhe bhi yeh nahi chalega, proof chahiye.
 Teek  hai ..Agar aisa hoh toh kaisa hoga..aage padiye.
 
 
Hua zaroor hua, koi shakh nahin
Aasma ke neeche; Zamin ke upar
 
Hamare kamare ki andhar
Bistar par sona aur chandi jaisa
 
Ek nanha munna bacha hai
Jo hamara pyaar ka ek nishani hai
 
Nanhi kali sone chali hava dheere aana
Neend bhare, pankh liye, jhula jhula jaana

Bus poora hogaya hamara zindhagi
Yahi Saavan ki arpan aap sab ki.
 




Edited by maris08 - 14 April 2011 at 12:35am

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
nice lines maris!!! you come up with good poems at short notice wow!!!!
u went directly to bacha on their bed?, this creates confusion too..LOL kisne rakha inke kumre mein bacha directly after suhaag raatLOL

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
ooho!!! tho ho hi gaya!!!LOLLOLnice one Maris!!! u came up with it at such a short notice!!! wow!!!ClapClap

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Oh Maris!!!  If only they had bothered to consult you about the ending....  I loved it.!

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged

great poem Maris!!

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wow very niceSmile

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
wow maris, u r at it again...only u could think of those witty lines...now only if those dumb c.v's would have taken a leaf or two from u....Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
Maris, love your poems

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