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Awesome parts. Loved it. Update soon

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hey dear...loved this part as well
continue soon

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its really good yaar
keep up the good job & keep writing
nice pictures...

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Everyone is enjoying the party*
KEERTI: suno,guys mujhe aur Shubhankar ko thoda kaam hai...koi voluenteer karega....
 
*yuvi is staring a naina...next to him......and she unknowingly puts his hand up*
KEERTI:thank you Dr Yuvraj...
 
*yuvi realises and gives a fun glare to naina*
YUVI: toh mam kya karna hai.....
KEERTI: aap aur apne partner ko lonavla jaake waha thoda paper work complete karke.......ek meeting attend karke aana padega....
YUVI: partner ke saath......
KEERTI: yes,Dr koi problem?
YUVI: no mam, im sure NAINA ko koi problem nahi hogi aane mein.....
KEERTI: so...Dr YUVRAJ and NAINA..aapke accomodation guest house mein ho jaayenge......
 
*riddhima is staring at her engagement ring*
She is excited that her wedding is in 5 months.......
 
MUSKAAN: *yells out* ridzi.....
RIDDHIMA: *breaks out of her trance* kya hua?
NAINA: hume sangeet ka program shuru karna hai....the face off....
NIKKI:haan, ek baar practice karte hai na....upar jaake.....
EVERYONE: alrite chalo....
 
*MUSKAAN is making sure everyone know the steps and is showing them the ending....*
ANJALI: fantastic step muskaan....
MUSKAAN: dekthi rahooogi ya karoogi bhi....
ANJALI: change karo naa.....
MUSKAAN: anjie, mein tumhe maar daaloongi......yeh 9 times mein ne step change ki.....
ANJALI: ok...FINE chill!!!!
 
*girls are prepared and face off with the guys.*
 
*GIRLS WIN*
 
LIGHTS ARE DIMMED>>>and everyone goes to the dancefloor
SLOW SONg PLAYS......
 
*yuvi pulls naina closer to him*
*muskaan and rahul are millimeters away from each others face*
*Riddhima and Armaan are lost in each other's eyes*
*atul is looking for anjali*
*abhi is wanting to ask nikki to dance*
 
IN THE MIDDLE OF THE DANCE>>>>*all the light go off*
 
*then one spotlight is on naina and a voice*
YUVI: *can hear footsteps* comes close to naina.....
            itne din se main  is pal ka intazaar kar raha tha.....i love u naina......so......
*goes down on one knee*\
YUVI: NAINA MALHOTRA......will u be my wife.....
NAINA:*tears in her eyes* yesss.......
*yuvi puts the ring on and kisses her*
 
*lights come on and everyone claps*
 MUSKAAN: accha, tum dono love birds ko thoda akela time dete hai.....terrace par jao and enjoy.....
 
*naina blushes*
MUSKAAN: yeh ridzi kaha gayi......
 
*sees Armaan and riddhima in a corner staring at each other*
NIKKI: yeh kya yaar.....ek katam to doosra shuru......
RAHUL: yeh dono ne katam kab kiya shuru hone ke liye.....
 
*chal ye sab chod hum chaar kuch karte hain*
*decide to watch a movie*
 
RAHUL: *is watching Muskaan rather that the movie*
NIKKI: *looks at the time* 12.00pm *signals Modi to come to the balcony*
ABHI: thank god nikki........main un dono ko ek second aur nahi dekh sakta.......
ABHI: waise mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai....
NIKKI: kya
ABHI: i love you....
*nikki blushes and turns away*
ABHI: so...........*waiting for a reply*
NIKKI: *turns around* abhi....voh main............
ABHI: kya....*nikki suddenly kisses him and tries to run away*
*abhi holds her hand and pulls her back*
 
NIKKI: i love u too *shows him the mehendi*
 
*meanwhile on the terrace*
YUVI: *pushes naina to the wall*
NAINA: *blushing* umm.......yuvi kya kar rahe ho........
YUVI: tum bolo.....kya karenge.......
*naina pushes him back and says*
NAINA: mujhe kya pata....mein to apne ring ko dekhne wali hoon.....
YUVI: sooo.....tum ring ko dekho gi mujhe nahi........aur jo bhi main karronga tumpar asar nahi padega right......
NAINA: right *admires her ring*
*yuvi kisses her neck from the back*
NAINA: moves away and sits on the bench*
YUVI: *comes and hugs her from behind*
NAINA: yuvi...plz
YUVI: kya naina....tumhe to asar nahi padta........
 
*naina cant hold it anymore......puts one hand one yuvi's shirt pulls him closer......puts one hand through his hair.....and kisses him with all the force and love she could muster.......yuvi is shocked and loses his balance a bit........yuvi kisses her back...........naina breaks apart and says *
 
NAINA: ahem......Dr Yuvraj....main aapse kal miloongi......*goes to the girls room and takes a shower*
 
All the girls are in the room.....in various *ahem* states.....
 
RIDDHIMA: *is changed into night clothes*
but her hair is tangled.......lips are swollen.........lots of love bites on her neck........
 
NIKKI: *not changed* her shirt is badly crumpled.....top 3 buttons are undone.....slightly swollen lips...............
 
MUSKAAN: the worst hair out of all of them............torn shirt......
ANJALI: *bluhing very badly* (i know right!!!!who would have ever thought*)
 
NAINA: really swollen lips.........messy hair........
 
NEXT PART COMING UP>>>>>>>>
MORE FOR AR and YUNA fans.........
PLZ comment Smile
 


Edited by DrArmaan_Gupta - 15 April 2011 at 5:49pm

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Loved it
Update soon n pm me

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UPDATE>>>>>>>>>
 
*yuvi and naina are on the bike about to go to lonavla*
 
NAINA: *doesnt hold on to yuvi in front of all the others*
YUVI: *feels a bit down......only reason he wanted to on the bike was so that he and naina would*ahem*.....*
 
*after a while.....Yuvi is not talking.......NAina knows the problem*
NAINA: *thinking.......yeh yuvi bhi naa.....kuch nahi jaanta......shalwar mein main kya karo......*
NAINA: yuvi ek baar ruko naa.....
YUVI: *stops without protesting*
NAINA: *grabs her bag and goes into one of the shelters and comes out after five mins*
YUVI: * feels bad for ignoring naina.....but still pretends to be fakely angry*
NAINA: *comes out in jeans and a casual top* kya hua......
YUVI: *understood naina's dress problem* kuch nahi......
NAINA: abhi bhi gussa ho.....
YUVI: haan....bohot.....
 
*naina sits on the bike....one leg on either side and moves closer to YUVI*
NAINA: abhi bhi naraz ho......
YUVI: *starts the bike*
NAINA: puts her arms around yuvi's waist......abhi bhi
YUVI: haan......
NAINA: *getting angry* bites his ear......
YUVI: *stops the bike and turns around* pagal ladki.....
NAINA: tum mujhse baat nahin karete .....mere paas aur koi raata nahin tha.....
YUVI:*looks at her cute face and starts laughing*
NAINA: chale!!!
 
*naina grips yuvi tight and they talk all the way to lonavla.....and it stars raining.......they had to park the bike at the parking lot 2kms away from the house......they tell the guard that they are form sanjeevani.....and the guard tells them that he will park the bike in shelter.....yuvi and naina start walking......its pouring very badly*
 
they reach the cottage......
YUVI: chucks his bag onto the chair nearby and falls on to the bed..........
NAINA: oh no!!!!
YUVI: kya hua.......
NAINA: main apni bag waha guard ke paas bhul gayi..........
YUVI: toh kya hua...
NAINA: kya hua...mere paas change karne ke liye kuch nahi hai.........
YUVI: *notices how wet naina is.......her white tshirt is fully soaked and he can see the black of her bra...yuvi stops himself before going too far*
YUVI: no problem.....mera shirt pehenlo......*gets up to get her a shirt.....*
NAINA: ek pant bhi do naa.......
YUVI: sorry mere paas extra pant hahin hai......mai bas 2 pairs laya.......
 
*naina wears the shirt and comes outside*
YUVI: *just stares at her* the shirt comes down half way down her thighs........
YUVI: wow naina bohot sexy lag rahi ho.....
NANIA: *slaps his arm* *blushes*
YUVI: to kya karte hai....
NAINA: main tumhare saat kuch nahin karne waali......
YUVI: oh really...toh mere shirt wapas kar do.......
NAINA: fine...*about to remove it* then realises.....nahin....
YUVI: kyun.....
NAINA: kyun ki yeh mere fiancee ki shirt hai isliye.......
YUVI: *leans closer to naina.....until they could feel eachothers breath....he kisses her with passion.....naina responds equally.........one of his hand is on her waist....the other one is in her hair......slowly they fall on the bed.......they dont stop kissing untill they are out of breath........yuvi pulls back and starts kissing her neck.....his kisses are searing hot on her skin.......her hand automatically reached for his buttons......she stars opening them and so does he.......naina gets yuvi out of his shirt and while he is bust kissing her.....she takes a moment to admire his well sculpted body.........yuvi opens the fist few buttons of the shirt and puts his hand inside.....exploring her body.....his hand caresses the soft skin on her waist.....while his lips are on her cleavage...naina lets out a moan.....this just drives him crazy.......and they hear some KNOCKING ON THE DOOR.......*
 
*naina breaks out of her trance as her phone starts ringing........she rushes into the bathroom and answers her phone......while yuvi is at the door........*
 
YUVI: naina, tumhare kapde aagaye......
NAINA: *comes out of the bathroom with tears in her eyes........*
YUVI:*in a concerned tone* naina kya hua......
NAINA: breaks away from him......mere saath aisa kyun hota hain......mujhe hamesha kyun dhokha milta hain.....
YUVI: naina hua kya?
NAINA: yuvi....aise kaise kar sakte ho tum mere saath.....maine socha tum mujhe bohot pyaar karte ho......
YUVI: main to pyaar karta hoon....naina....kya hua....
NAINA: to tumne mujhe ye kyun nahin bataya ki aaj tumhare parents ka death anniversary hai.......
YUVI: naina woh kuch nahin hai......maine socha kuch bohot serious baat hain......
 
*naina kisses him hard on the lips....*
NAINA: *in a a fake angry tone* agar tumne mujhse aaj ke baad tumhare life mein sab kuch nahin bataaya to
YUVI: ummmmm........naina.....jo kuch bhi hua......i mean......
NAINA: *in a innocent tone* kya yuvi?
YUVI: jo kuch bhi hua i DONT regret it.....man kar raha hai ki phir se karo....
NAINA: *hits him with a pillow* badmaash....
 
they stay up for a while talking and fall asleep in each others arms......naina is wakes up in the morning and is SHOCKED TO SEE......
 
HERE IT IS GUYS>>>>>> Smile
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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 1:55am | IP Logged
wow...that was smth....
anyways great update
thanks for the pm

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