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NEXT UPDATE WILL HAVE>>>>>>>

MUSKAAN: arey anjali......dekhti rahegi ya dance bhi karo naa
ANJALI: step change karo.....
MUSKAAN: yeh 9 times main ne step change kiya......
ANJALI: ok fine chill......
 
*girls have to face off with guys at Keerti's party....*
*would have started earlier but Preeti "FORGOT" to tell them*
 
it will be up soon....
plz comment and tell me whose dress u liked.....
more pics coming up......

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PROMO>>>>
WARNING - MORE GRAPHIC STUFF IN THE ACTUAL UPDATE>>>>
UPDATE WILL BE FAIRLY LONG>>>>>
COMMENT>>>>
 
 
he pulled her by her waist......
she could feel his warm breath on her neck, all he wanted to know was if she loved him as much as he loves her.
she looked down at her mehendi and tears formed in her eyes as the pale colour stared back t her....
she could feel his kisses down her neck......she was speechless.....she could not talk......before she loses control she pushed him back and ran away...
 
she ran away
FROM HIS LOVE
FROM HIS PASSION
FROM HIS DREAM
FROM HIM TO FIND ANSWERS
FROM HIM TO CONFESS HER LOVE TO HIM
 
NAINA ran away.....from the the person she truly loved YUVI
 
UPDATE


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hey awesome start!!!! cont soon....

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NAINA"S DAD: to naina tum sanjay se shaadi karoogi.....
NAINA: papa,mujhe thoda time chahiye.....mai usko jaanti tak nahin.....
DAD: lekin beta....
NAINA: papa mein yeh bhi nahi jaanti ki woh mujhe pyaar karta ya nahin....
DAD: iska toh ek hi raasta hai....
NAINA: tumhare Dr keerti ke wahan....mehendi laga rahe hai na.
DAD:uske naam mehendi mein likho dark hua to shaadi...nahi hua to jisse tum pasand karti ho usse shaadi karna...mai kuch nahin boolunga...
NAINA:theek hai dad...
 
*sanjay comes in*
SANJAY: hey naina *kisses her neck*
NAINA: hey sanjay....
SANJAY: main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon....
*puts a dimond necklace to her neck*
SANJAY: i love you..
NAINA: sanjay....
SANJAY: mehendi laga ke to dekho.....
 
*naina goes to keerthi's house sees abhi and nikki fighting"
NAINA: kya hua..
ABHI:kuch nahi...jab tum apne papa se milne gayi thi...hum sab game khel rahe the....aur main nikki ko bola ki voh kisi ka naam likhe mehendi mein....
NAINA:*in an innocent voice*] haan nikki, ABHI ka naam kyun nahi likhti....
ABHI: WHAT????
NIKKI: oh sure.....ab pata chaljayega ki voh mujhe kitna nafrat karta hai *goes with naina*
ABHI: nafrat nahi nikki...pyaar Wink
 
*all girls apply mehendi....*
Nikki has abhi's name
Riddhima has armaan
Naina has sanjay
muskaan has rahul
anjali has atul (atul dared her to show her his love)
 
*Naina tells everyone about her father and sanjay*
*everyone pretends to be happy for naina but are depressed inside as they know yuvi and naina love each other*
 
*yuvi sees all this and pulls naina into an empty corridor*
 
NAINA: arey yaar kaun hai...mujhe meri mehendi nikal na hai....
YUVI: haan tab pata chalega ki woh tumse pyaar nahi karta.
*she heard his voice and it sent chills down her spine*
NAINA:yuvi..plz
YUVI: I love u naina
NAINA: yuvi plz....bohot dare ho chuki hai....
YUVI: tum jhoot bhol rahi ho...hamesha jhoot....
NAINA: main jhoot nahin bhol rahi ....
YUVI: aachaa....to mujhe ye batao ki jab mein tumhare paas aata hoon to tumhe kuch nahi hota....
NAINA: nahin
YUVI: jhoot.. *starts kissing her neck*
NAINA: yuvi plz.....
* his searing kisses raised her untold feeling for him*
YUVI: bholo naina...usse shaadi kyun karna chahti ho....
NAINA: kyun ki vo mujhe pyaar karta hai....
YUVI: aacha, rubs a bit of her dried mehendi..... *really pale orange*
*can hear sanjay on the phone next door*
SANJAY: mein usse pyaar nahin karta sweetheart.....bas time paas hain......aur uske baap ke paas paise hain....aur vo necklace bhi .....mein tumhare necklace vapas kardoonga.....phir hum dono uske paise lekar bhag jaayenge......
 
*naina has tears in her eyes as she looks down at her palest of orange colours*
YUVI:*cant bear seeing his love like this*
YUVI: naina.....
NAINA: ab khush ho na tum.....tume jo prove karna tha tumne prove kiya...ab mujhe chod do.....
YUVI: naina plz...
*crying very badly*
NAINA: plz yuvi chod do mujhe.....
YUVI: * Kisses her forehead*plz meri baat suno..
NAINA: * pushes him away* and runs....
 
away from him
away from his love
away from his dream
away from him to find answers
away from him to find courage to confess her love for him
away from her only love YuVI
 
NAINA runs to sanjay....
NAINA: main ne mehendi nikaal di...
SANJAY: kya hua?
*slaps him*
NAINA: agli baar kisi ladki ko dhoka dene ke baare mein sochna bhi mat.
*thows the necklace to his face*
SANJAY: naina...
NAINA: *slaps him again*
 
*yuvi is looking for naina*
*sees muskaan dancing with joy*
 
YUVI: muski kya hua?
MUSKAAN: kya hua? tu ne dekha nahi....naina ne aise slap kiya us sanjay ko ki main kya bolun....
YUVI: really?
MUSKAAN: haan yaar...
YUVI: lekin tu kyun itni khush hai...
MUSKAAN: kyun ki...voh sanjay ka charecter mujhe bilkul pasand nahi tha....main itni depressed thi kyun ki sanjay naina ke liye theek nahi that....kyun ki *stops herself before she says the truth about naina liking yuvi*
YUVI: kyun ki...
MUSKAAN: kyun ki....voh kisi aur se pyaar karti hain....
 
*yuvi's face falls....he thinks naina loves someone else...*
NAINA: nikki yuvi ko dekha....
NIKKI: abhi voh muskaanse baat kar raha tha.
*naina finds yuvi*
NAINA: *looks like normal naina..not crying anymore* YUVI
*yuvi turns around and thiks that he should say sorry*
NAINA: yuvi mujhe tumse baat karni hai...
*yuvi pulls her into a store room*
YUVI: im sorry naina....
NAINA: kyun...
YUVI: kyun ki main ne socha tha ki tum jhoot bhol rahi thi jab tumne kaha ki tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti.....muskaan ne bhola ki tum kisi aur se pyaar karti ho....
NAINA: yuviii....
YUVI: lekin ek baat naina...I love you...
NAINA: i love u too
 
*yuvi is shocked*
YUVI: what??!!!!!
NAINA: haan, mein ne muskaan se kisi ko bataane se mana kiya isliye....
*yuvi is sooooo happy*
NAINA: *starts blabbering*
 
*yuvi kisses her and naina responds back*
 
The slow kiss turns into a passionate and wild one....naina is against a wall and yuvi has one hand on the wall and one on her waist......naina's puts her hand through Yuvi's hair....one of her hands is around his neck.....
 
*BANGING ON THE DOOR*
ARMAAN: umm...dekho mujhe pata hain ki tum dono andar ho lekin bahar aana padega....
RIDDHIMA: *in a stressed voice* naina tum bahar nahi aayi naa to mein andar aaoongi...

*Yuvi and naina break apart and open the door*
Armaan and riddhima look at their states and laugh...
 
NAINA: crumpled dress....messy hair....swollen lips...
YUVI: reallly......messy hair........crumpled shirt....slightly swollen lips......
 
ARMAAN: ahem....had fun?
*riddhima slaps armaan on his arm*
 
RIDDHIMA: chale naina.....tayyar hona hai...
*yuvi and naina stare at each other*
ARMAAN and RIDDHIMA: aacha hum chalte hain....lekin 10 mins mein upar aao
 
*yuvi drags naina back into the store room*
YUVI: i love u
NAINA: i love u too
 
 
how is it.....
next part with the dresses will be up soon
PLZ COMMENT

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NEXT PART:

*girls are getting ready and thinking about guys and the mehendi*
 
Because her mehendi was so light naina got it removed and done it again with yuvi's name.....everyone is sitting there with a hair dryer to see how DARK it is......
 
MEHENDI:
Riddhima almost black......
Nikki, anjie and muskaan really dark brown
 
*naina removes her mehendi*
everyone is shocked as it is really dark.......
 
*everyone is happy as their know that the guys love them very very very much*
 
*getting ready*
RIDDHIMA: aaj bhi hum ek doosre ki help kareenge....
MUSKAAN: main makeup.
NAINA: main hair
ANJALI: main nails
NIKKI: mein jewellery
RIDDHIMA: main clothes......
 
*nikki is setting out the jewellery*
*anjali is applying nail polish according to riddhima's choices*
*naina is going around doing everyone's hair*
*muskaan is applying moisturiser and foundation and the basic stuff*
 
*everyone comes out wearing their respective sarees except naina*
*nikki goes out and sees preeti flirting with YUVI and tells NAINA*
 
*naina goes out and sees what she is wearing and almost faints*
 
NAINA: itni sexy dikh rahi hai yaar.....
RIDDHIMA: *in a consoling voice* naina jab tum jaaoge naa tab Yuvi mar jaayega...chalo tayyar hokar aao
 
MUSKAAN comes down the stairs.
 
*Rahul and this random guy are just staring*
 
NIKKI comes down
 
ABHI walks into a pole
 
ANJALI comes down
 
ATUL spills his drink on a lady...
 
RIDDHIMA comes down
 
ARMAAN's mouth drops and he has a dreamy look on his face
 
NAINA comes down...
 
EVERYONE is just staring.......
 
 
will post the rest later>>>>>
comment>>>>>
how is it till now>>>>>>
 

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its very nice..keep it up..Smile

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