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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nidhashad

u r awsm yaar deepu u r ryt sihm s too speed its really nice dear

Thank u Nidha baby
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: deepa_mishra

Where is your update darling?

DEEPU im still writing it 😭😭😭😭 why my PC didnt want to work ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
hahaha thats good. Enjoy and update it today otherwise I will kill you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: deepa_mishra

hahaha thats good. Enjoy and update it today otherwise I will kill you.

Hahahahahaha Deepa it will be update today contrary to you 🤣 :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
luv ur wrk
wen da nxt part cmein
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Kinrul143

luv ur wrk

wen da nxt part cmein

in few time :) im still writing it 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Ranvir is now awake it's friday the last day of the week before the "WEEK END" it's 7:30am he is getting ready to go to sschool he is wearing a jean a shirt and his sunglasses.

The same for Ragini and Sadhna they both are getiing ready.Ragini is wearing a purple dress and sadhna a black jean and a withe blouse.

 

Ranvir is now in the kitchen and is going to take his breakfast but before he is kissing his mother on the cheek , he is now sitting on the chair next to his mom and they begin to talk

 

-How are yo my son ?

-Im fine and you ma ?

-Also fine beta

-ma i wanted to tell you why yesterday im gone to Alekh's place

"-Oh sure tell me Ranvir"  and she showed a big smile

-Ma i was there cause i met someone and i wanted to talk with him about that

-That's fine dear.............. and how is this girl ?

-She has dark hair , she is slim, she is pretty i think i fell for her smile (with this fabulous smile that all kinrulians know   )

-My son is in love? and Vasu laughed

-Hmm............Well............I don't know .......But i think so he was hamper

Vasu smiled and Ranvir continue

-But she does not feel the same

-Why are you saying that ???

-Because yesterday we met and i kissed her but she left in a hurry

-Ranvir u must have schoked her you know her since 2 weeks and u kissed her how do you think she would react ??

-So you think it is normal

"-Yes it is ..... and a long silent" there is a long silent and  vasu told to Ranvir "Beta ull be late for school so go dear

He stood up and said "Yes ma im going" he kissed her again and run outside to take his car .

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Ragini is also going to school but before leaving the house she kissed her dad an her mother and goes outside there is a big garden with roses a lac with some ducks a long entry and at least 5 cars she hasn't a house but a palace (just imagine K3gham raichand house and u can see ragini sharma's house)

-Rag how are you today ?

"-Im fine why ?" with her cute smile

"like that" said a sadhna worried for her best friend

-Sadhna I know about what you are worried But believe me im not in love with him what happened with deepak will not happened again.

-Yes i know you, you have suffered so much and u also lost the envy to love but be carefull with this guy he has a crush on you 

-Sadhna I do not need to be carefull cause this time no one will cheat on me and all these love stories are for kids im not believeing anymore in love i'll marry the one my parents will choose for me

-are you serious ?

-"To tell you the truth when i met Ranvir there was a moment were i thought i was feeling something for him but not at all i see him jst like the person who saved me" adn Ragini openned her car's door

-So ............... Everything is fine

-yes

And both laughed and sat in the car and went to school

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they reached the school and everyone is happy to see sadhna back from her trip

"WAo sadi so many people missed you not only me" said Ragini

"Yes i saw that but i missed only one person and it's you" replied her sadhna

"Owwwwww so sweet of you sadi I love you" continue Rag

"I love you too" retor Sadhna

and they both hugged each other

Far away from them sat on the car under a tree there are Alekh and ranvir they were talking then Alekh repered sadhna and ragini and he asked to Ranvir

-Who is this girl with Ragini Ranvir ?

-I don't know i think i think it's it's her best friend the one who went to Agra

-acha ...... and do you know her name ??

"Yes if i have good memories her name is sadhna" he said when he removed his sunglasses

-She is really pretty

Ranvir was dreaming then he replied "Who ? Sadhna or Ragini ??"

-Sadhna idiot

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Sadhna looked in the direction of Ranvir's car and saw 2 men starring at her and Ragini

"ragini" she whispered

-"yes why r u whispering ? "

-Ranvir and his friend are looking at us

-and? I don't care .......... Sadi we have to go to our science-politic class

-Yess .......... Wait, wait , wait why are they coming here ?

-What are you saying ?

when they Ragini turned she saw them arriving

and alekh said "hello girls"

"hi" replied sadhna and smiled

Ranvir and Ragini are looking at eachother

"-We are organizing a party tonight at my place you both are invited" said alekh when he understood that a big silent was stelle b/w them four

"-well thank you but i don't think we will come replied" an angry ragini who left immediatly when she finished her sentance, and Ranvir followed her

"-Ragini wait please ... Ragini" he passe in front of her and stoped her "Im sorry about what i did yesterday evening"

-why will you be sorry about what you have done yesterday ? when you kissed me you didnt think about how ill feel later .

-Believe me Ragini i'm sorry

-I felt hamper

-Please let me apologise in a good way and accept my invitation at the party

Ragini is thinking

 

Alekh and sadhna are also talking

-Do you think something willl happen between them ? asked alekh

-Yes, Im sure Ragini is very stubborn she is tryng to make him pay for how she felt yesterday but she can love even if she is rejecting this feeling

-well o tell you the truth Ranvir is in love with Ragini since the first day he met her

-I knew That, Ragini is also in love with him but she prefer to think that she hates him.

-Will you come tonight at the party ?

-Maybe ................... If ragini come then yes

 

Ranvir and ragini are still explaining about the event

-Ill see if i can come Okk but i have to go now i have my classes in few minutes said Ragini

"Okk sure ...................... see you later" replied Ranvir

"See you later"  and she yelled sadhna's name "Sahnda!!!"

this one replied "Yes !!"

-Come we have our classes now

Sadhna said good bye to Alekh and replied to Ragini " Im coming"

 

They four left for their Classes

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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Who is that Deepak Siham? Wat he had done with our Ragini.  So finally our RagVir in love with each other. Thats good. Waiting for the party. Love you Siham for your update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: deepa_mishra

Who is that Deepak Siham? Wat he had done with our Ragini.  So finally our RagVir in love with each other. Thats good. Waiting for the party. Love you Siham for your update.

Hahahahahaha ull see it later :p u saw how is it when we all want to know who is Deepak :p ull know about him in chapter 9 or 10
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
I can say u all will love the 7th chapter :) Im sure about that