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Decisions of destiny (new MN ff)(part 3 pg 5) (Page 3)

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by staroneloversss

Originally posted by -Faria-

Congrats dear
veryyyyyyyy interesting concept
would like to read this ff
pls do cont it
and pm me
all the best
take care

Thks dear...i hope u guys lik this...bcoz i m nt a gud writer. Its jst a try.

its realy a beautiful start dear
be confident.......u r a good writer and u'll definitely improve day by day
we r all with u
keep updating
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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
awesome start dear.....pls continue soon......................................
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Hey dear

beautiful start
i loved alekh-mayur brotherly convo- it was really very sweet ........
they share a great bonding........
awwwwwwwwww alekh and Nupur got married.........
hmmmmm interesting
eagerly waiitng for next part
update soon and plz pm me



Thks alots i'll try my best to update soon
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by staroneloversss

Originally posted by -Faria-

Congrats dear
veryyyyyyyy interesting concept
would like to read this ff
pls do cont it
and pm me
all the best
take care

Thks dear...i hope u guys lik this...bcoz i m nt a gud writer. Its jst a try.

its realy a beautiful start dear
be confident.......u r a good writer and u'll definitely improve day by day
we r all with u
keep updating

Thks again i'll try my best to mak this a beautiful ff
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by achoose

awesome start dear.....pls continue soon......................................

Thks 4 ur comment...ya i'll try my bst 2 cont soon nd
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

Grt updt dear :-) really loved it :-) mayank-alekh convo ws so funny :-D a truely brotherly convo :-P love it :-) kya yaar 1st updt se hi mujhe pm karna bhul gayi :-(

Hey dear thks dear n realy sory abt pm...bt main bhule nhi thi actuly mane kisi ko bhi pm nhi kiya becoz there is some error with copy n paste option with my lappy...its nt geting paste in pm's so thats y i didn't pm only...
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice start.

Thks
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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 5:23am | IP Logged



Part 2


Next morning


Nupur in front of mirror dressing up in a red saree looking gorgeous...alekh comes from washroom n watching nupur he jst get memorised.


Alekh coms n hugs her from back.


A. U r looking so beautiful my jaan...


N.(blushes) chodu na...muje jana hai. Ma wait kr rhi hogi break fast pr...


A. Kitne badi jooti ho nupur tum. Ma mandir gay hogi abhi...ab chalu romance ko disturb na karu...


N. (try to kiss her bt she intrupts) kya kr rhe ho alekh koi agya tho...


A. Koi nhi ayega mrs. Sharma...hum dono k alava yha koi nhi hai...


(he holds her waist tightly n mak her more close to him...)


N. Pr...(she ws abt to say something when he locks lips with her n they jst get lost in d movement)


A Month passed n their relation ws going more n more strong. Alekh ws a great husband lik nupur always wants n nupur too ws a great, loving n caring wife. From d day nupur came to their house it had litten d lifs of alekh as well as of his mother. His mother ws quite happy that her daughter in law treat her lik his on mother. With her cont. Chatting habit nobody cn get bored with her.


On d other side mayank is alone...he is jst care free from all d responsibilites. He spend his whole time with frds. He hs a habbit of drinking n smoking. He doesn't care for any one. Changes her gf at evry hour. He is mostly found in clubs. His dad ws realy worried abt him n want to mak him on a right path so he decides to mak him go to india n liv with his bro n mom then may b he leavs bad company. His dad givs him a project 4 which he hs to go india. Mayank argues alot bt his dad givs him worning that he is nt going to any money from nw onwards to him n he hv to earn by his own. Mayank gets angry bt hv no choice left so he decides to go india bt nt to liv with his mom.



Finaly he reaches india. Alekh is waiting 4 him outside d airport.



A. Mayank...( he shouts so that mayank cn notice him)



M. What d hell...tu yhan kya kr rha hai...?



A. Airhostess pr line marne aya hoe...(tounting tone)



M. Kyu tare wife ne tuje divorce de diya kya?( teasingly)



A. Nhi...abhi itne bure din nhi aye hai...



M. Jaldi ajayge agr usne tuje yha dekh liya wo bi line marte hoe (as laughs)



A. Vry funy...ab jaldi chal ma tera wait kr rhi hoge or nupur bhi tujhse milna chahti hai...
M. Main nupur fir kabi mil luga...
A. Kyu aj kya problem hai...dekh main janta hoe kyu ni arha tu...


M. Yr mare ek meeting abhi 2 hrs mae hai hotel taj mae. Vahan mane rehne k lea booking bhi kra le hai.



A. Tho kya booking cancel bhi ho jati hai...



M. Booking cancel hoti hai meeting nhi...o god i jst hate these meetings...



A. Important meeting hai..



M. Ha dad ne tho kuch esa hi kha tha...



A. Hey mayank idea...tare vajay mae chala jata hoe milne or tu ghr chalaja...



M. Pagal ho gya hai kya...vase muje koi intrest nhi hai meeting mae tu shok se ja bt main akale ghr nhi jane wala...



A. Tu jayga...tuje mare kasam...driver parkin mae wait kr rha hai...chal...



M. Accha teak hai tujhse main kabi jeet nhi sakta. Ye documants (givs a bag to him) isme project k details or mare personal documents bhi hai...dayan se rakheo...



A. Theak hai mare bhai...


Then alekh drops him to car. Driver moves to their house way n alekh goes in d texi which came from d hotel side. He is vry happy that his bro finaly going to their mom.



Alekh POV



Aaj ma kitne kush ho jayge finaly mayank unke pas ja rha hai...i m so happy ki maa se aaj jo promise kiya tha wo mane pura kr diya...


Suddenly a truck coms in front of car driver lost his balance n car crash on another truck. A big accident tak place n alekh whole body bathing in blood.




Edited by staroneloversss - 13 April 2011 at 2:27pm

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