Decisions of destiny (new MN ff)(part 3 pg 5)

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Posted: 13 years ago



Intro


This is a mayur ff bcoz i lov them from core of my heart so my first ff is 4 them. It will b a different story.


Mayank n alake r twin brothers. They hv same face as they r twins (so imagine arjun's face 4 both d character) apart from bros they r best frds of each other. There parents r divorced so alake liv with his mother in india n mayank livs with his dad in america. Bt this divorse didnt seprated d two brothers they always remained in contact.


Alake is a vry decent boy...he is a mamas boy. He is intellegent n gud in studies.


Mayank- mayank is d boy who do nt hv any relation with studies. He is vry noty n flirty. He is vry careless, dont cr 4 any responsibility...liv jst as he wants. His dad ws busz business man so didnt paid any attention on him due to which he is lit spoiled.


Nupur- most bubly girl ws world. A chatter box bt she is vry innocent.


Alake n nupur lovs each other...they know each other from coledge time n they r d most adorable cauple of d world. They soon geting married. Mayank is happy in his own lif bt one incedence will change mayur lif 4 ever...


INDEX


Part 1 - pg. 2



Part 2 - pg. 3
Part 3 - pg. 5


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Posted: 13 years ago

So guys this is intro of d ff. Do let me know that i should cont. it or not
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Posted: 13 years ago

It seems lik gud n a vry diferent story line. So mayank n aleke r twins n aleke n nupur lovs each other...so hw it convert into mayur lov story....i m wating 4 first part do cont n pm me plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all, congrats for ur ff :-D it sounds really interesting :-D wow mayank n alekh r twin........n nups loves alekh........n they ll marry soon.......n nw story converted into mayur love story :-D wow dear :-D grt concept :-) love it :-) updt soon :-) plz add me in ur pm list :-) i really wanna read further :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: diaangel



It seems lik gud n a vry diferent story line. So mayank n aleke r twins n aleke n nupur lovs each other...so hw it convert into mayur lov story....i m wating 4 first part do cont n pm me plz


Thks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

First of all, congrats for ur ff :-D it sounds really interesting :-D wow mayank n alekh r twin........n nups loves alekh........n they ll marry soon.......n nw story converted into mayur love story :-D wow dear :-D grt concept :-) love it :-) updt soon :-) plz add me in ur pm list :-) i really wanna read further :-)


Thk u so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice concept dear..pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: achoose

nice concept dear..pls continue soon...


Thks dear i'll cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice storyline.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 1

A. Kya mayank tu aaj bhi nhi arha...aaj mare shadi hai...( alekh shouting at mayank while talking at phone)
M. Gift bej diya hai mare bhai...itna naraz kyun ho rha hai...(tring to tease n divert d topic)
A. Tuje kya lagta hai main gift k lea chilla rha hoe...tune mujhse promise kiya tha ki tu mare shadi mae jaroor ayega...
M. Kya tu bhi na alekh...promises r ment to break. Vase bi agr main promise na karta tho tune tho nupur ko zindgi bhr itzar karvane ka pura program bna liya tha...
A. Dekh baat ko ghuma mt...nupur ko kyu beach mae la rha hai main janta hoe tu kyu nhi arha...ma tujhse bhi utna hi payar karti hai mayank...( says with so much of politness)
M. (laughs on this) realy? Agr mujhse payar karti tho muje bhi apne sath rakhti. Is tarah akele na chodti...( then tak a deep breath to control his emotions) ok...so tu ye bta vase tho tu mare sath bohat over act kr rha hai bt shadi k lea tho tare man mae bohat laddu foot rhe the na...(teasingly)
A. Shut up...
M. Seriouly agr tu din mae muje do bar call karta hai tho usme bees bar nupur ka naam leta hai...tho tu so super duper exited hoga apne wedding 9t k lea...
A. Cheda le cheda le bachu...jb tera no. ayega na tb dikhata hoe teas kase karte hai...zra apne shadi ki kabar tho tu de...fir batata hoe...
M. Well tu muje tease karna chahta tha tho pehle batana tha...mare tho evry 9t wedding 9t hi hote hai...tu jb chahe teas kr sakta hai shadi karne ki kya zarorat hai...( says proudly)
A. Tuje tho nupur jase ladki hi sudhar sakti hai...
M. Fir nupur...
A. Ha tho...mare nupur hai wo...jitne bar uska naam lu utna kam hai...i jst lov her...
M. Accha chal teak hai lover boy ab jaldi se tayar ho ja...wo tera itzar kr rhi hogi aftr all aaj tum dono ki shadi hai...or sun...all d bst...(n smiles)
A. Thks...(smiles)

Evry arangement is done. Alekh ws dressed up in a golden sharvani which nupur choosed 4 him n on d other side nupur is dressed up it a red n green colour lehga which alekh choosed 4 her.
Nupur in front of a mirror siting n smiling thing abt alekh...
Nupur POV
vase manna padega alekh ki choice ko...kitne acche lag rhi hoe main is lahge mae. (she ws looking world's most beatiful bride)

Aftr some time alekh comes with his baraat. He n his mom ws too happy as his son is going to marry d girl he loves bt she ws missing his another son on this occation. All d rasams happens...every1 ws happy...nupur ws d only daughter of her parents so 4 her, her parents done their bst n organised a grad marriage where all rich people came to giv their blessings to them. Finaly d movement comes n marriage mantras star. They vows with peras. Mangal sutra is tied by alekh in nupurs neck n then sindoor in her mang excepting her as his wife. Finaly marriage completes n all otger rasams tak place. Aftr dinner bidai too done of nupur by her parents. They reached to their house aftr that n nupur is whole heartedly welcomed by alekh's mom. Finaly wedding 9t comes. Nupur is waiting 4 alekh in their room. Room is beautifuly decorated with flower n candals...alekh comes n find her bride sitting on bed. He sits near to her. A sweet smile comes on her face. He touched her hand n shivers go through nupur's body. This ws a dream come true her. He helps her to tale out her whole jewalary.'u r looking so beautiful n i want to mak u mine' he sys n nupur nodes her head in yes giving her permision. She is going red due to blush. He kisses her n she respond back. They go on melt in each other. Freeing them self from cloths, they get into sheet n mak lov n do a new starting of there relationship...