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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchi89

hey nandu...nice start and lovely character
sketch....cont soonBig smile

thanx sooooooo much ruchi

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by megha01


its soooooo  damnnnnnnnn different

fr d 1st  tym  we will c them married n dat  too arranged marriage

kya baat hai yaar........kahan  se mili inspiration????????????? 

chal  let  m start  my bak bak nowLOLLOL

character sketches as i  said ......tooooo perfect, especially its gud to  c jai  here

wow dis is a never seen  before ff.......starting frm  d wedding itselfClapClap

1 song yaad aaya......"  do anjaane ajnabi...chale baandhne bandhan, dil me hai ye uljhan  ,mil kar kya bolen"Embarrassed...........well i  hope i  hav  guessed it rite dats its an arranged marriage

ek  baat to maanna padega nandu..........u  r such  a loving n caring sister
tera bhai  kabse mar raha tha mujhe BMW chahiye ,mere liye dua karo mujhe ye mil jaae, mujhe isse pyaar ho gaya haiLOL.LOL..................le tune dilwaa hi di  iseROFL
ise kehte hain behen  ka pyaar............waah  nanduLOLLOL

dark  blue color sherwwani...........yaaaaaaar  we all knw dis is his best  luk.....hw can  we forget prithvi  in blue sherwaaniSmile

ye to yaad hi  hoga      

robi  bhi.............

i knw none of them  resembles siddharth singhaniaBig smile

The bridegroom was wearing a dark blue colored desighner sherwani which matched pretty well with his fair complexion. Slowly he took off the turban which revealed an incredibly handsome face with large, brown eyes, which possessed the depth of the ocean and anyone could just drown into them without even knowing it, and slightly pink lips for which every girl craved. A slow, gentle breeze blew causing his jet black hair to fell over his forehead which was adding even more to his charming and handsome appearance.......

waah  nandu  waah........kya description diya be tune toLOL.......luvd it sweetu

omggggggggggggggg le teri  asliyat  baahar aa gayi  is ff me to
d way  manju  n priyanka were teasing seems as if its u saying all this to  meROFL
tune apni  shaitaani dikha hi  di  finallyLOLLOL

"Oye hoye! Dekho toh jara dulhaniya humari sharmane lagi. Arey priya yeh saara nikhar toh unhika, matlab humare jijosa ke intezar ka, unke naam ke sringar ka hi natiza hain."........

dis is typically my nandu..........aur koi nahi  soch sakta aise dialogs except uLOLLOLLOL

yaaaar  its awesome ff

do  continue soon
luv u  jaanuHug

yup it is different and so i was wondering whether u all will like it or not Big smile
Arey yaar main unko bahut miss kar rahi hu isliye unki shaadi hi karwa daala LOL
hmmmm.....hain ek secret source Cool
arey I toh just luv ur bakbak jaanu
oye ab tu kya jai ki bhi diwani hain? Shocked LOL
Thanx sooooooo much Embarrassed
yup their story starts from marriage as it is an after marriage ff
i hvnt read ne after marriage ff on RTMC either till now
oye perfect song yaar, fits so aptly with their situation Big smile
Arey jaanu tu kabhi galat ho sakti hain kya tere unke baare mein
u r absolutely rite, it is an arranged marriage LOL
luv marriage hota fir toh kahani yehi pe suru hone se pehle hi khatam ho jaati LOL
fir kya? hoon na main wo acchi wali sister aur shararti wali nanad Wink LOL
offcourse yaar, dono hi yaad hain aur blue mera fav. color isliye toh blue sherwani decide kiya
pata hain maine pehle white socha, fir brown socha, fir grey, fir jaake blue ko finalize kiya LOL
after all humare Sid aur Avani ki shaadi hain bhai, koi aisi waisi baat thore hi na hain Wink
thanx sooooooooooo much jaanu
actually mein na tujhko sochke hi maine wo siddharth ka description aur Avantika ka teasing wala part rakha hain LOL 
yup that's me n only me LOL ur naughty SIL Wink
thanx soooooooooooooooooooo much re
i'll update soon.
luv u 2.

haan  yar  its too  gud inspite being different
n d best  part..........their names.......too  different again
moreover they  suit them

oye na oye......main bahut committed hun tere bhai ke liye........use dhoka nahi dungiLOLLOL
wo  to main isliye boli  ki  we can  c prithvi  and samar  singh  together once again

haan yar  it will b treat  to hav  them as married couple........ab  no  chhup  chhup ke romance.....LOLLOL
moreover i  want to  c a matured relation this tym..........wo  clg lyf ki ladai nahiTongue
oh dats gud.....arranged marriage.......very interesting...
hehe haan  apne unke baare me mere logic humesha sahi  hote hainWink
han  yaar  dekh to kitni achhi  hi gayi use wo car.....uska pehla pyaar......naalayak ise ye hi sab  pasand aata haiAngry.......ladkiyaan  to ise behen dikhti hainLOLLOLLOL
mast costume finalize kiya re tune to
omggggggg sachiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii?  MERE LIYE?????????
haaye luv uuuuuuuuuu

han yar  wo  dialogs padh kar to mujhe laga jaise mujhe saamne baitha kar likh rahi hoLOLLOL.
ohh wo  siddharth ka description bhi mere liye?????? sooooooo  sweeeeeeeeet
tk cr

thanx sooooooooo much yaar
I luv the names, old fashioned toh nehi lag raha na?
Aweeee ise kehte hain patibrata hindustani naari LOL
yeh lo! thank God tu ne jaichand ko laane ke liye nehi bola LOL
bas yahan PRC aur samar dushman nehi dost hain wo bhi best friends Wink
yup lets c inka rishta kya rang laata hain
oye hoye bhabhiji wo toh mujhe pata hain LOL
offcourse yaar, dekh mera bhai hain na. main bhi lyf mein practical aur wo bhi, hum dono hi emotional nehi hain, LOL
haan re sirf TERE LIYE Wink
luv u 2 
tujhko sock kar hi likha toh hain
u 2 tk cr.

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanchitaroy

lovely ff.

thanx soooooo much Sanchita.




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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruja

thanks for starting new RTMC ffHug
beautiful character description
so here we will have different kind of storyBig smile
i am excited!!
liked beautiful description of wedding
and cute characters
n sidharth aur avantika names also different
liked all characters sply priya
waitig for next update

Most welcum Shruja Big smile
thanx sooooooo much
yup totally different Wink
Thanx soooooooo much yaar
I luv those names n it also suits their characters Big smile
yup she is very bubbly and naughty Wink
will update soon.

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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged

@nandu..........m not quoting this tym ,nahi to mods teri band baja baarat nikaalengeLOLLOLLOL

arey na re.....not at all old fashioned yaar.......luvly names

siddharth Heart avantika..........Embarrassed

LOL haan bhartiya susheel kanya hun mainLOL

nahi re...jaichand to ek mere ghar me hi bahut haiLOLLOLLOL

haan tera bhai hai,isliye to ye haal hai iskaLOL, tu bhi shaitaan  wo bhi shaitaanBig smile

wo practical hai????ROFL kitne herogiri dialogs maarta hai,kahan kahan  se sun kar....bada dikhne ke liyeLOLLOLLOL  but cuteness dhoka de deti haiLOLLOL

han  yaar  tu to hai hi practical ladkiWink, meri samajhdaar nanduTongue

haan  aur likhne aise aise dialogs MERE LIYELOL

oye sun......jeevansaathi ke 1-2 ud jaldi de de yaar. let us knw them  closely

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ud soon

tk cr luv u




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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 4:27am | IP Logged
its awesome dear 
do continue 




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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 4:41pm | IP Logged

oye meri jaan...

kya baat hai...

its sooo awsum...

loved it yaar...

really amazing..

thnx for the pm...




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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 3:32pm | IP Logged

hi i'm priya and i'm new here and o love ur ff and it almost a month since u posted plzzz update

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